A-Travel-Diary作文赏析

ATravelDiary旅游日记不能写成流水账•用日记来描述活动•用日记来记录心情•用心情把活动的场景写活了•SatJuly14,2012Sunny•(开头)OurclassvisitedMountYuntaiinJiaozuo,Henanprovince,onJuly14th.Itwasreallyawonderfulexperience.•…………………………………………Theprocessofclimbingwasachallengeforusbecausetheroadwasnotalwayssmooth.However,weallstucktotheend………………………………•（结尾）ItissuchawonderfulexperiencethatIwillneverforgetit.结构清晰完整，前言呼后语oneoutstandingcompositions•IwassodelightedthatIwouldhaveanoutdoortourwithmyclassthatIevenforgottohavebreakfast.WhenIhurriedtomyschool,Ifoundmyclasshadbeenwaitingformeatthegatewherewewouldsetoffatseventhirty.Sincetherewasnotrafficjam,,ittookusjusttwohourstoarriveatMountYuntai.语言生动，令读者有身临其境的感觉•Havinggotoffthebus,westartedourtripingroups.MybestfriendandIwereinthesamegroupandweenjoyedthesongsofdifferentbirdsandinsects.•Wegottothegeologicalmuseumatnoon.Afteronehour’svisit,Ihadbrunchandhadonehourrest.Attwop.m.,wewentontoclimbthemountain.Tiredbutexcited,wegottotheZhuyupeaksuccessfully,wherewehadagoodviewofthemountainandtookphotostogether.•Weendedthetriponthebus.Allofusfeltpleasedandwouldneverforgetthememory.Ithoughtwenotonlyhadexercisebutalsohadagoodmemory.Whatawonderfulidea!Ididlovethetour.难译句子•我们七点半在学校门口集合。•Atseventhirtywegatheredattheschoolgate.难译句子•我们分组活动。•Wemovedaroundingroups.Appreciatetheexcellentsentences佳句赏析•Sotiredwerewethatweweresleepyandfellasleeponthebus.Appreciatetheexcellentsentences佳句赏析•Onlywhenyoureachthesummitcanyourealizethattheworldissogreat.Appreciatetheexcellentsentences佳句赏析•ItwasattenthirtythatwearrivedattheMount.Appreciatetheexcellentsentences佳句赏析•Ihadneverattendedsuchaninterestingactivitytogetherwithmyclassmates.SoIfeltveryhappyandreallyenjoyedmyself.Appreciatetheexcellentsentences佳句赏析•Ididfeelreallyhappyonthatday,thoughwewereverytired.Appreciatetheexcellentsentences佳句赏析•Thoughit’ssoexhausting,weexperiencedthefeelingofdefeatingourselvesandovercomingallthedifficulties.Appreciatetheexcellentsentences佳句赏析•Ithinkthisactivityisimportanttousbecausewecanrelaxourbodiesandtakeexercise.•TheviewthereissogoodthatI’llneverforget!Appreciatetheexcellentsentences佳句赏析Appreciatetheexcellentsentences佳句赏析•IhopethatIwillhaveanotherchancetotakepartinanactivitylikethis.•Afterwehadarest,wewereallfullofenergy.Appreciatetheexcellentsentences佳句赏析Appreciatetheexcellentsentences佳句赏析•Whatagoodtimewehad!Wenotonlytookexercisebutalsohadagoodview.Appreciatetheexcellentsentences佳句赏析•IwasimpressedbyMountYuntaibecausethescenerywasbeautifulfarfrommyexpectation.