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２００５年湖南高考英语写作题目要求：假设你是李平，最近参加了由某电视台举办的中学生英语演讲比赛并获奖，该台准备组织获奖者去北京参加一次英语夏令营活动，现就有关事项，征求你的意见．请根据下表所提供的信息，用英语以书信形式给予答复。活动时间７月１５日－２２日或８月１５日－２２日活动内容参加英语角／学唱英语歌曲听英语讲座／表演英语短剧看英语电影／教外教学中文对活动内容的建议或要求注意：１选择适合你的时间并说明理由．２选择两项你喜欢的活动并说明理由．３对活动的内容提出至少一个建议或要求．４词数１００左右．５信的开头和结尾已经给出．考生作品DearSirorMadame,IamverygladtobeinvitedtotheEnglishsummercamp.IprefertogoinAugust,becauseIamfreeatthattime.IliketotakepartinEnglishCornerandlearntosingEnglishsongs.IlikeEnglishcornerbecauseIwanttouseEnglishtotalkwithothers.IlikeEnglishsongsbecausemyparentsareartists.Atthesametime,Isuggestthatalltheactivitiesshouldbeorganizedtogetherandthenwewillhaveagoodtimetogether.Thanksalot.Yourstruly,LiPing优点：完成了试题规定的任务．应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求．应用了简单的语句的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，无语法错误，达到了预期的写作目的。缺点：没有应用较多的语法结构和词汇，句式单一。对建议的表达缺乏思想性。参考范文DearSirorMadame,IamverygladtobeinvitedtotheEnglishsummercamp.IprefertogoinJulybecauseIwillhavetopreparemyselfforthenewschoolterminAugust.Itseemsalltheactivitiesyouofferareattractiveandmeaningful,butI’dliketoattendtheEnglishlectures,fromwhichIcangetmoreinformationonBritishandAmericanculture.Withthecomingofthe2008BeijingOlympicGamesmoreandmoreforeignersareeagertoknowaboutChina.SoIhopetoteachforeignersChineseandspreadChineseculture.It’sbeenadreamformetovisitBeijing.Couldyouorganizeatouraroundthecityduringthecamp.Thankyouverymuch．Yourstruly,LiPing高分作文的标准（２１－２５分）：１．完全完成了规定任务；２．覆盖所有内容要点；３．应用了较多的语法结构和词汇;４．语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误但为尽力使用较复杂或较高级词汇所致，具备了较强的语言运用能力；５．有效的使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑；６．完全达到了预期的写作目的．Ⅰ英语句子的种类简单句(Thesimplesentence)并列句(Thecompoundsentence)复合句(Thecomplexsentence)请用合适的并列连词把每组句子合并为一个并列句。1.IturnedontheTV.Iwatchedit.2.Iboughtmysisterapresent.Shedidn’tlikeit.并列句IturnedontheTVandwatchedit.Iboughtmysisterapresent,butshedidn’tlikeit.3.Hewastired.Hewenttobed.4.Thechildhidbehindhismother'sskirt.Hewasafraidofthedog.Hewastired,sohewenttobed.Thechildhidbehindhismother'sskirt,forhewasafraidofthedog.3.Hemadeapromise.Hedidn’tkeepit.Hemadeapromise,buthedidn’tkeepit.4.Maryisopeningthedoor.Johnisgreetingherguests.Maryisopeningthedoor,andJohnisgreetingherguests.请用括号中所给的词把此组句子连接为一个复合句。Istillremembertheday.IfirstcametoBeijingonthatday.(when)IstillrememberthedaywhenIfirstcametoBeijing.Ⅱ特殊句式１．ＩＴ句型２．强调句型３．倒装句型４．ＷＩＴＨ复合结构５．独立主格结构６．省略句型将下列句子变成强调句或者倒装句1.Ididn’trealizethemistakeuntilIgrowup.(强调划线部分）2.Wecanmakeourcountrystrongerandstrongerinthisway.（倒装句）ItwasnotuntilIgrowupthatIrealizedthemistake．Onlyinthiswaycanwemakeourcountrystrongerandstronger.III.汉语中的逗号与在英语中的作用并非一致英语中句与句之间的联系绝不依靠逗号,而是借助连接词。缺少连接词,句与句之间也就不存在其合理性.例如:•老师问了我一个问题,我不会回答。•Theteacheraskedmeaquestion,I•couldn'tanswerit.וTheteacheraskedmeaquestion,and/but•Icouldn'tanswerit.√••英语逗号用法与提升英语作文品质--NMET考生容易忽视或误用的英语写作常识DearDick,Hownicetohearfromyouagain.YouwanttoknowwhatisgoingoninschoolsinChina?Inshort,thingshavebeguntoimprovesinceschoolswerecalledontoreducelearningload.Idon'tknowaboutothers,butIusedtoworkevenatweekendsdoingendlesshomeworkandattendingclassesaswell.NowIhavemorefreetime.Icanfollowmyowninterestssuchasreadingbooks,visitingmuseums,•andtakingcomputerlessons.IntheeveningsIcanwatchnewsonTVorreadnewspapers.What'smore,Icangotobedearlier.AsfarasIknow,everyoneishappyaboutthisnewarrangementofthings.Bestwishes,LiHua其中含逗号用法的情形:(1)DearDick,(2)Inshort,(3)Idon'tknowaboutothers,but...(4)Icanfollowmyowninterestssuchasreadingbooks,visitingmuseums,andtaking...(5)What'smore,(6)AsfarasIknow,(7)Bestwishes,•启示与结论:凡逗号出现的场合和时机无不体现英语的使用习惯或固定的表达方式,也与“为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇,具有较强的语言运用能力”,以及实现“上下文的连贯性,即有效地使用语句间的连接成分,全文结构紧凑,语言的得体性”这些重要的考试要求相关。以逗号为主线,研读流畅、精采表达的各种方式,有可能使得写作快速步上新的台阶,从而收到事半功倍的效果。【要点1】插入语前后须用逗号隔开1.Itis,afterall,duetohisnegligence.毕竟这是由于他的疏忽．2.Sheis,asIhavetoldyoubefore,veryfondofcollectingstamps.就像我以前告诉过你的她很喜欢集邮3.Iam,therefore,verycarefulwhencrossingtheroad.因此我过马路时非常小心．4.They,Mr.andMrs.White,willbethereinBeijingtomorrow.他们（怀特先生和太太）明天就到达北京．5.Heis,tobeexact,sixteenyearsoldandisnotoldenoughtojointhearmy.确切的说，他才十六岁，还没有达到参军的年龄．【要点2】副词从句和逗号(1)句首的副词从句用逗号隔开。Ifitrainstomorrow,Iwillnotgo.明天下雨的话，我就不去了。Whentheymet,theyusedtonodtoeachother.他们见面时,会互相点头。(2)副词从句出现在主句之后,一般不用逗号，但附加的语意强时，就用逗号。Heislovedbyall,becauseheishonest.他人很诚恳，受到大家的爱戴。Heworkshard,sothathemaypass.他很用功，想必能考及格。(3)短的住所、时间副词从句可不用逗号。Whenitrainshestaysathome下雨时他待在家里。Whenpassing(=Whenhewaspassing)helookedin.他路过时顺便进来坐了一会儿。MyOpiniononCheatingInExamsItisknowntousallthatsomestudentscheatinexamsatschool.Asstudents,weoftentakeexamsatschool,butsometimeswehavetoomanyexamswhicharetoodifficultforus.Ontheotherhand,someofusarelazyanddon’tworkhardattheirlessons.Sowhentakingexamstheysometimescheatinordertogetbetterresultstopleasetheirparentsandteachers.Inmyopinion,itiswrongtocheatinexamsbecauseitbreakstherulesofschools.Westudentsshouldbehonestandtrytogetgoodresultsbystudyinghardinsteadofcheatinginexams.What’smore,weshouldimproveourstudymethodsandgetwellpreparedforexams.Oneday,Iwasonmywaytoschoolandamanwasridingalongthestreet.Suddenly,acarranfasttowardstheman.Thecarhitthebikeheavilyandthemanfelltothegroundwounded.Thedrivercausedanaccident.Hewassofrightenedthatheranawayquicklywithhiscar.BecauseIsawwhathadhap