NAVIGATIONWRITING导航式作文法5.235.51各科均分(中国大陆A类考生)5.535.805.395.47writingreadingspeakinglistening中国考生的雅思考试成绩Requirements:ThesearethebasicrequirementsmadebyMark.不要翘课关注考情狂背单词每天练习雅思写作T2总论分类精讲T2四类T1分类精讲T1分类精讲与总体考试预测5612,3,4Mark’swritingplan课程规划Introduction时间字数题型考查能力分数比重A类G类Task120mins/15mins150wordsChart(line,pie,bar,flow)Table,mapLetter(complaint,request,apology…)客观描述信息和数据1/3Task240mins/45mins250words议论文说理和论证2/3IELTSWRITINGTask21、275——300Ws2、先写3、6-8段论4、40分钟5、分别提升4个评分标准的得分6、背诵个人的各专题魔版Task2超7评分标准1、TR:立场、论点、论据2、CC:连接、句间、段间3、LR:小词、大词、短语4、GRA:句型、搭配、被动(7分是对传统写作的摒弃,对评分点滴的细化,youcan!)•Task2主流分类•argument•单一singlestatement•对立oppositestatement•report•问题原因与解决PRS•问题原因与影响PRE•真题•Successfulsportsmancanearnagreatdealofmoneythanpeopleinotherfields.•Somepeoplethinkthisisfullyjustifiedwhileothersthinkitisunfair.•Discussboththeseviewsandgiveyourownopinion.写作流程•首段写作Withthegrowthoftheeconomy...可以不转述题目观点PersonallyIamconvincedthat...(7分捷径)FirstP背景原因题目观点个人倾向•背景原因(鼓励自编)•Asaresultofconstantmediaattention,sportsprofessionalsinmycountryhavebecomestarsandcelebrities,andthoseatthetoparepaidhugesalaries.Justlikemoviestars,theyliveextravagantlifestyleswithhugehousesandcars.•个人倾向(明确!!!鼓励背诵)•Overall(Uponthewhole,Byandlarge,Onthewhole,Asawhole,Inthemass,Ingeneral),Ifirmlyharbortheperspectivethattheywelldeservethetopsalaries.(观点)Inthefollowingessay,viewpointssupportingbothsides,thoseforandthoseagainst,aretalkedoverrespectivelyinordertofurtherassertmyposition.中间段写作高分模式:连接词+分论点+论证Initially•分论点1•论证2、3句MoreoverUltimately•分论点2•论证2、3句•分论点3•论证2、3句•真题:•Insomecountriesyoungpeopleareencouragedtoworkortravelforayearbetweenfinishinghighschoolandstartinguniversitystudies.Doyouagreeordisagree?连接词正统用法(可换)InitiallyMoreoverFurthermoreBesidesUltimately十大论点文思泉涌!中间段写作高分模式:连接词+分论点+论证Initially•分论点1•论证2、3句MoreoverUltimately•分论点2•论证2、3句•分论点3•论证2、3句论点教育论文化论环境和能源论经济与就业论时间与效率论权利论健康论空间与安全论心理健康论论点套句设计•1.。。。haseducational/cultural/economic/moral/psychological/physicalmeaning•(meaning可换为importancesignificancebenefits)论点套句设计•2.。。。isofeducational/cultural/economic/moral/psychological/physicalmeaning•(meaning可换为importancesignificancebenefits)论点套句设计•3.。。。iseducationally/culturally/economically/morally/psychologically/physically•Beneficial.•(beneficial可换为profitablemeaningfulsignificantnecessarysubstantial)论点套句设计•4.。。。givesagreatpush/boost/momentumtoefficiency•(efficiency可换为economy等)经济与就业•必备词汇:•economicgrowth,employmentrate•E.g.“是否要戒烟”•Pros:promotetheeconomicdevelopment•enhancethetaxincomeofacountry•providetheopportunitiesofemployment时间与效率•必备词汇:time,efficiency•如“是否限制飞机飞行”•Pros:节省时间,提高效率(time-saving,enhancetheefficiency)空间与安全•必备词汇:space,safety,security•如“是否在社区里建工厂”•Cons:占据空间,社区变得拥堵(occupythespace,overcrowded)•安全隐患(potentialsafetyhazard)心理与健康•必备词汇:psychology,health,pressure,stress,tension,depression,insomnia•如“是否要戒烟”•Cons:产生心理依赖(psychologicallydependentonsmoking)•如“旧楼是否被现代化楼房代替”•Cons:居民对旧楼有感情(beattachedtothehistoricalbuildings)生理•必备词汇:physical,health•如“是否要戒烟”•Cons:bedetrimentaltohealth,leadtolungcancer•如“手机的优缺点”•Cons:haveapotentialtobraincancer教育•必备词汇:education,edification,teaching,schooling•如“旧楼是否被现代化楼房代替”•Cons:一些旧楼是教育的绝好教材(atextbookofteaching)文化•必备词汇:culture,cultural•如“全球化的优缺点”•Pros:促进文化的交流和传播(theculturalcommunication)•Cons:导致文化个性的消失(theextinctofculturalidentity)•产生文化的矛盾和冲突(culturalconflict)能源与环境•必备词汇:energy,fuel,environment,surroundings•如“是否限制使用汽车”•Cons:空气、噪音污染(airpollutionandnoisecontamination)•能源危机(energycrisis)道德•必备词汇:moral,morality,humane,conscience•如“是否拿动物做实验”animaltesting•或者“活体解剖vivisection”•Cons:不人道,太残忍(inhumane,cruel)权利•必备词汇:right,deprivesb.ofsth,•endowsb.withsth,enjoy•如“是否拿动物做实验”•Cons:剥夺动物生存的权利(depriveanimalsofrightofliving)•“是否同意newscensorship”•Cons:deprivepeopleofrighttoknow真题brainstorming35•Tourismisbelievedtobeagoodwayofimprovingagovernment’staxincome.•Discusstheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofexploringthisresource.36•Possibleideas:•Pros:经济与就业(对国家和地区政府),心理(对旅游者),生理(对旅游者),文化,教育•Cons:空间与安全(对个人),文化,环境十大论证大师型格中间段写作高分模式:连接词+分论点+论证Initially•分论点1•论证2、3句MoreoverUltimately•分论点2•论证2、3句•分论点3•论证2、3句举例解释因果分类比较对比让步转折机构数据反面论证历史人物名人名言(详情参见讲义)举例:1.IcanthinkofnobetterillustrationofthisideathanthefactthatinChina....2.Avividcaseinpointisthat...3....hasgreateducationalbenefits,theserangingfromknowledgetoskill解释:1.WatchingTVhasgreateducationalbenefits,(bywhichImeanthatchildrencouldbeedifiedwhentheychoosetheprogramswithquality.)2.WatchingTVhasgreateducationalbenefits.Tosimplify/Toputinanotherway/Thatistosay,childrencouldbeedifiedwhentheychoosetheprogramswithquality.历史人物NapoléonBonaparte,OscarWilde,AlbertEinstein,HelenKellerConfucius,Mencius扯淡!机构数据Sportsplayers’topsalarieswillalsocreatepsychologicalimbalanceamongthegeneralpublic,whichisfirmlytestifiedbyasurveycondcutedbyPKUthat62.33%oftheinterviewees...反面论证Withoutyou,lifewouldbenothingbutvoid.让步论证Governmentpayingthetuitionfeesforstudentsindisadvantagedstatusmayofferthemmuchbettercareerprospect.Howeveritmustbementionedthatduetothelimitedbudget,onlyasmallpartofstudentwillbegrantedtheprivilege.因果原因(学术词)句子,notpartlybecause...,butprincipallybecause....结果(