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1新起点命题分析北大---张浚铂A2广告：正反观点第一段：(第一句)Thesedays,oneofthemostcontroversialtopicsarousinggeneralconcernisadvertisement.（第二句）Wheneveritcomestothisissue,therewillariseaheated/vehementdiscussionamongthegeneralpublic.(万能句型，任何有争议的话题都可以用，包括现象类作文)（第三句）Avastmajorityofpeopleareinstrongoppositionofadvertisement,whileothers’viewpointisquitetheopposite.(第四局)Forthemoment,itseems,thereisnohopeofreachingacompromisebetweenthesetwogroupsofopinions.第二段：（第一句）Toprovetheirviews,someimportantargumentshavebeengivenonbothsides.(第二句)Withregardtothefirstgroupofpeople,twofactorsstandoutamongothers.(第三句)Foronething,theybelievethatitisutmostimportancetoadvertisetheproductsbeforesellingthem.(第四句可省略)Theyoftensay,theadvertisementcanprovideconsumerstherelevantinformationofgoodsintime.(第五句)Foranotherthing,advertisementcanbringaboutmuchpromotiontothenewproductsorservices.2(第六句)Incontrast,therearealsoreasonsfortheoppositeside.（第七句）Ononehand,theytendtothinkthatmanyadvertisementsarenotalwaysinlinewiththetruth.(第八句)AccordingtoarecentTVsurveyconductedbytheauthorityorganization,theyclaim,asmanyas49%oftheadvertisementsareforged.（第九句）Ontheotherhand,theyallegethat,everytime,advertisementsmakepeoplebuythethingsthattheydonotreallyneedatall.最后一段(第一句)SofarasIamconcerned,Iaminclinedtosupportadvertisements.(第二句可)Thatistheformerviewseemsmoreconvincing,andacceptabletome.（第三句）Accordingly,thisphenomenonshouldbeencouragedandpopularizedbyimmediateandrigidregulationsorlaws.模板2提炼：现象引入：Thesedays,whenaskedabouttheissueof________,peoplevaryalotintheirviewpoints.观点一分析Asmallgroupofpeopletendtoholdthat______填句子________.具体例子Somestatisticsappeartosupporttheirview:填句子.观点二分析Despitetheargumentsabove,therearestillasizablepercentageofpeopleinstrongfavorof填单词.具体例子Accordingtothem,therearequiteanumberoffactorscontributingtothisidea,ofwhichthefirstandforemostoneis填句子.最后一段：SofarasIamconcerned,thelatter/formerviewpointseemsmoreconvincing,andthereforemoreappealingtome.Infact,howeversoundtheargumentsoftheformer/latterviewmaybe,theyonlyskimthesurfaceofthe3problem.Therefore,再踩上一脚现象分析作文：低碳生活(low-carbonlife)已经成为社会的热门词汇，谈谈推广低碳生活的意义，以及我们如何践行低碳的生活方式。张浚铂老师参考范文第一段：第一句Thesedays,oneofthemostcontroversialtopicsarousinggeneralconcernislow-carbonlife.第二句Wheneveritcomestothisissue,therewillspringupawidevarietyofvoices.第三句Somepeopleviewitasbeneficial,whilestillsomeothersconsiderthatitisnotsuitableoracceptableforadevelopingcountrylikeChina.第四句SofarasIamconcerned,Iaminclinedtosupporttheformerview.,第二段：第一句Somedrivingfactorsthatcontributetotheabove-mentionedchangesmaybesummarizedasfollows.第二句Firstofall,withtherapiddevelopmentofChineseeconomyandthesteadyimprovementoflivingstandards,thereisanincreasingnumberofpeoplewhoenjoyalow-carbonlife.第三句Accordingtothedatagivenbytherelevantgovernment,asmanyas59%ofthecommonpeoplesurveyedhavesuchexperiences.第四句What’smore,theauthoritiesconcernedhadalreadymaderelevantrulesandregulationstoadvocatethelow-carbonlife.第五句Inaddition,theconceptionoflow-carbonhasbeencommonlyacceptedbysomanyChineseyoungpeoplethatmostofthemchoosetohavealow-carbonlife.第六句Baseduponarecentinternetsurvey,nearly100%peopleapproveofthelowcarbon-lifeinChinanowadays.4第三段：Thereisnodenyingthefactthatpeoplewillhavediverseviewsonthesameissue,buttakingallthesefactorsintoconsideration,mystandpointisclearandwellfoundedintheforegoingdiscussions.Therefore,Ibelieve,low-carbonlifeisrathersignificantanddeservesoursupport.(Therefore,Ibelieve,thecurrenttrendshouldbeencouragedratherthandiscouragedorevenbanned.)模板提炼第一段：第一句：1.Nowadaysmoreandmorepeoplebegintorealize/(beawareof)/(notice)theimportance(significance/seriousness)oftheproblemof________.2.Recentlythetopic(issue/problem)of__________hasbeeninthelimelight(hasbroughtintofocus)(hasarousedpublicattentiveconcern)3.Recentlythe________hasbecomethefocus(concern)ofthepublic.4.Recentlythephenomenonhasarousedwideconcernthat_________5.Oneoftheuniversalpressing(burning/urgent)problemswearefacedwith(confrontingus)isthat______________________.6.Itisundeniablethat______填句子____hasbecomethebiggestconcernofthepresent-dayworld.7.Thepastfewyearshavewitnessedtheemergenceofawidespreadsocialphenomenon,thatis,_______________.第二段：第一句：原因51.Somedrivingfactors(forces)thatcontributetotheabove-mentionedchangesmaybesummarizedasfollows.Firstofall,_________________Inaddition,________________What’smore_________________Lastbutnotleast,______________2.Somepossiblereasons(drivingforces)behindtheabove-mentionedchangescouldasfollows.3.Itisnotdifficultforustofindsomefactorstoaccountforthisphenomenon.4Itisofnodifficultyformetoputforwardsomeargumentstoillustratemystandpoint.5.影响SofarasIamconcerned,Ibelievethatsuchchangeswillresultinsomeconsequences.6.影响Itfollowsthatsomeremarkableeffectsmayinevitably(naturally)comeup原因1：Thepast30yearsofChina’sreformandopeninguphavewitnesseddramaticchangeswithregardtoChineseeconomyandsociety.原因2：WiththerapiddevelopmentofChineseeconomyandsociety,thereisanincreasingnumberofpeople__________________________________.原因3：theconceptionof________hasbeencommonlyacceptedbysomanyChineseyoungpeop