CET-4作文(高分词汇、句型)

CET-4作文2对策：写作的三个角度：语言第一位；结构第二位；内容第三位要求：结构简单，语言卓越，内容切题避免语言错误主谓一致单复一致时态一致词组搭配单词拼写写作总论热点话题：EconomySocietyScienceandtechnologyMediaEntertainmentEducationEnvironment写作总论ii)写作过程（25分钟）要注意的事项：A)选择恰当的词汇注意选词的准确性：例如：学习知识learnknowledge（×）acquire/getknowledge（√）Astheonlychildinmyfamily,I'mnotusedtosleepingwithsomanypeopleinthesamedormitory.（×）Astheonlychildinmyfamily,I'mnotusedtosharingaroomwithsomanypeople.（√）写作总论ProfessorLiisverypopularwiththestudentsbecauseheismodestandchildish.（×）Childish→childlikeMarywonJaneinthespeechcontest（×）won→beatWiththedevelopmentofbigcities,aproblemhasarisenbeforeus:trafficincitieshasbecomemoreandmoreseriousthanbefore.（×）moreandmoreserious→heavierandheavier写作总论Theycancleantheair,beautifythecity,developagoodclimateandweakennoise.Theycancleantheair,beautifythecity,developahealthyclimateandreducenoise.Inaddition,abicyclewillnevergiveoffpoisonousgasasacaranditneedsonlyalittleplacetopark.Inaddition,abicycledoesnotgiveoffpoisonousgasasacaranditneedsonlyasmallplacetopark.写作总论注意词义Withtheindustriousdevelopment,thereisagreatneedfordifferentkindsofenergy.industrious→industrialTVcommercialshaveaprofoundinfluenceonoureverydaylife.everyday→everydayFirstweshoulduseournaturalresourcesinaneconomicway.economic→economical写作总论注意词汇的搭配However,thespeedofacarismuchfasterthanthatofabicycle.However,thespeedofacarismuchhigherthanthatofabicycle.Inthepastthepriceofmilkwassoexpensivethatmostfamiliescouldnotaffordit.Inthepastthepriceofmilkwassohighthatmostfamiliescouldnotaffordit.TheopportunitytobepromotedinajointventurewillbesmallerifonecannotspeakEnglish.TheopportunitytobepromotedinajointventurewillbepoorerifonecannotspeakEnglish写作总论Inrecentoneandtwoyears,peoplewhotakeTOEFLhavedecreased.Inrecentoneandtwoyears,thenumberofpeoplewhotakeTOEFLtesthasdecreased.Inthepastfewyears,grainhasdecreasedbynearly20%.Inthepastfewyears,theconsumptionofgrainhasdecreasedbynearly20%.写作总论注意修饰语HeneitherspeaksEnglishnorChinese.HespeaksneitherEnglishnorChinese.Attheageofsix,myfatherbegantogivemeEnglishlessons.WhenIwassixyearsold,myfatherbegantogivemeEnglishlessons.Havingcarriedouteconomicreformsinourcountry,people’slivingstandardhasbeengreatlyimproved.Sinceeconomicreformshavebeencarriedoutinourcountry,people’slivingstandardhasgreatlybeenimproved.Toimproveone’swritingskill,regularpracticeisessential.Toimproveone’swritingskill,onemustmakearegularpractice.写作总论注意词性Thistermwe’llverybusy.Thistermwe’llbeverybusy.Thecavelikearoomverymuch.Thecavelookedverymuchlikearoom.写作总论注意连接词Istartedtoplaytable-tennisinmiddleschool,stillplayitnow.Istartedtoplaytable-tennisinmiddleschool,andIstillplayitnow.TVbecomesanimportantpartinourdailylife.Becausewecannotlivewithoutit.TVbecomesanimportantpartinourdailylife,becausewecannotlivewithoutit.Thesunhadjustrisen,shiningbrilliantly,everythingseemedtobecoveredwithalayerofgoldensilk.Thesunhadjustrisen,shiningbrilliantlyandeverythingseemedtobecoveredwithalayerofgoldensilk.写作总论Inspiteofthisobviousadvantage,italsobringsinconveniencetosomepeople,whohavetotakebusesnottheircars,andsoslowdowntheirspeed.Inspiteofthisobviousadvantage,italsobringsinconveniencetosomepeople,whohavetotakebusesinsteadoftheircars,andsoslowdowntheirspeed.Theoldonesmaythinktoomuchaboutsafety,theyoungonesacceptitmorequickly.Oldpeoplemaythinktoomuchaboutsafety,while/but/whereasyoungpeopleacceptthemmorequickly.写作总论Second,whoeverbreakstheregulationshouldbefinedorpunished.Theneveryonewillcomplywiththisregulation.Second,whoeverbreakstheregulationshouldbefinedorpunishedsothateveryonewillcomplywiththisregulation.Butinfact,therearealsomanypeoplewhothinknumbershavenothingtodowithluck.Buttherearealsomanypeoplewhothinkthatnumbers,infact,havenothingtodowithluck.写作总论注意指代关系PeoplehavebeenfightingagainsttheinfluencesofTVcommercials,butitoftenprovesuseless.PeoplehavebeenfightingagainsttheinfluencesofTVcommercials,butthiseffortoftenprovesuseless.Televisionprovidesuswithavivid,colorfulworld,whichenablesustoenjoylifethoroughly.Byprovidinguswithavivid,colorfulworld,televisionenablesustoenjoylifethoroughly.写作总论选词的丰富性：例如：除了用clear,还可用obvious、apparent,evident来陈述观点----It’sveryclearthat…可替换important的还有significant,vital,crucial,momentous,etc.B)句与句、段与段之间的转折和承接but,and,sothat,aswellas,notonly…butalso…Firstly…Secondly/Moreover/Inaddition/Furthermore…Finally….Bywayofconclusion…写作总论C)时态和语法Thisiswhatwecalledtheproblemofpopulationexplosion.(注意时态)Thisiswhatwecalltheproblemofpopulationexplosion.Smokingharmsourhealth.（注意习惯）Itisharmfultosmoke.Thisyearmylisteningskillshavemademuchprogress.（注意文法）Ihavemadegreatprogressinmylisteningthisyear.写作总论注意时态Withtheopeningofourcountrytowardtheworldinrecentyears,Englishbecomesmoreandmoreimportant.Withtheopeningofourcountrytowardtheworldinrecentyears,Englishhasbecomemoreandmoreimportant.Doyouhaveafeelingthattheworldisgettingsmallerandsmalleralthoughthesizeoftheearthdoesn’tchange?Doyouhaveafeelingthattheworldisgettingsmallerandsmalleralthoughtheactualsizeoftheearthha