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CET-4作文讲解写作总论1.写作命题剖析大纲要求：写作部分要求考生用英语进行短文写作，思想表达准确、意义连贯、无重大语法错误。写作总论写作部分考核的技能是：A.思想表达1）.表达中心思想2）.表达重要或特定信息3）.表达观点、态度等B.篇章组织4）.围绕所给的题目叙述、议论或描述，突出重点5）.连贯地组句成段，组段成篇写作总论C.语言运用6）.运用恰当的词汇7）.运用正确的语法8）.运用合适的句子结构9）.使用正确的标点符号10）.运用衔接手段表达句间关系(如对比、原因、结果、程度、目的等)D.写作格式11）.运用正确的符合英语表达习惯的写作格式写作总论大学英语四级考试写作部分要求考生达到《教学要求》中的一般要求，即“能完成一般性写作任务，能描述个人经历、观感、情感和发生的事件等，能写常见的应用文，能就一般性的话题或提纲在半小时内写出至少120词的短文，内容基本完整，用词恰当，语意连贯。能掌握基本的写作技能。”写作总论2.四级写作评分原则和标准评分原则：1.CET是检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的四六级教学要求，对作文的评判应以此要求为准则。2.CET作文题采用总体评分(GlobalScoring)方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分(RewardScores),而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。3.从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。4.避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分，包括满分;该给低分的给低分，包括0分。一名阅卷人员在所评阅的全部作文卷中不应只给中间的几种分数。写作总论评分标准：本题满分为15分.共分五等：2-4分、5-7分、8-10分、11-13分及14-15分。2-4分条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或在部分句子均有错误，且多数严重错误。5-7分基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。8-10分基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当，多其中有一些是严重错误。11-13分切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14-15分切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错误写作总论注：1.白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给0分。2.如题目中给出主题句，起始句，结束句，均不得计入所写字数3.只写一段者：0~4分；只写两段者：0~9分（指规定三段的作文）]WomenintheModernWorldWomenareplayinganincreasinglyimportantpartinsocietytoday.Intoday,manywomenhaveawork.Theyworkedaswellasmenplayinganimportantpartinfactories.Therearemanywomeningoveneralso.Theyleadotherpeoplecomtral,andmakeoutplans.Therearemanywomenscientistalso.Theyeventnewthingstoimproveourlife.Withthechangesintheirsocialrole,women’spositioninthefamilyhasbeenimprovedaswell.Inancient,women’spositioninfamilyispity.Theyhadtolooksaftertheirchildren,dideveryhowhusbandorderedhertodo.Butnowitischanged.Theyareequaltoherhusband.Theyhavetherightofspeakingofidea,discussionthingswithherhusband,dowhatshewantstodo.Inspiteofthesechanges,theliberationofwomanhasnotbeencompletelyrealized.Wealsoshouldrealize,women’slikertyarelimited.Forexample,manyfactorieswantmenbecomeitsworkersbutthechanceofwomenislessthanmen.Everyoneshoulddotheirbesttochangethiscondition.I’msure,theliberationofwomenwouldbeincreased.评分样卷(1)5分基本切题，表达不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多严重错误。Womenareplayinganincreasingimportantpartinsocietytoday.Moreandmorewomengotoworktoearnmoneyinsteadofkeepingthehouseorlookingafterthechildren.Womenhaveenteredmanyfieldsofsocietyincludingscientificfield.Asweknow,manywomensportsteamshavewontheworld’schampionsuchasChineseWomen’sVolleyballTeam.Withthechangesintheirsocialrole,woman’spositioninthefamilyhasbeenimprovedaswell.Husbandsarenotthemastersofwivesinmanyplaces.Husbandsandwifeareequalnow.Theyjointogethertoovercomedifficultiesandsharehappiness.Inspiteofthesechanges,theliberationofwomenhasnotbeencompletelyrealized.Alsoinsomeplaces,womenareconsideredbeing“things”belongtomen.Theyhavelittlechancetofindjobs.Theydon’tgetequalpayforequaljob.Thisisaproblemmustbesolvednotonlybysocietybutalsobywomenthemselves.WomenintheModernWorld评分样卷(2)11分切题，思想表达清楚，连贯。有个别句子结构错误及少量其他语言方面的错误Womenareplayinganincreasinglyimportantpartinsocietytoday.Manywomentodayareplayinganimportantpartatworksthatwasthoughtonlycouldbedonebythemenbefore.Forexample,somewomenarenotsecretaryintheoffice,instead,theybecomemanagerofacompany.Withthechangesintheirsocialrole,woman’spositioninthefamilyhasbeenimprovedaswell.Intheworldtoday,moreandmorewomenhavetheirownjobs.Theygettheirownsalary,andbecomemoreindependentfromtheirhusband.Withtheeconomicsituationimproved,theirfamilypositionisimproving.Inspiteofthesechanges,theliberationofwomanhasnotbeencompletelyrealized.Manyhusbandsonlywanthiswifetostayathome,anddosomeworksordosomeshopping.Theyonlywanttheirwifetobeahousewife,butnotamanagerofacompany.WomenintheModernWorld评分样卷(3)8分基本切题，思想表达尚清楚，基本连贯，有个别严重的语言错误及用词不当，但可以理解。Womenareplayinganincreasinglyimportantpartinsocietytoday.Inmanycountries,moreandmorewomenareactingasworkers,farmers,scientistsandevenleaders.Wecansaythatalmostalljobswhichmencandoaredoneperfectlybywomen.Womenarenolongerlookeddownuponbysociety.Withthechangesintheirsocialrole,women’spositioninthefamilyhasbeenimprovedaswell.Husbandandwifearenowequalinthefamily.Theycopewithproblemsofdailylifetogether,andsharehappinesswitheachother.Also,youcanhardlyfindoutthatintoday’sfamilies,womenarebeingbusywithdinners,whereasmenarecomfortablysittinginarmchairs,readingnewspapers.Inspiteofthesechanges,theliberationofwomanhasnotbeencompletelyrealized.Wealsoshouldrealizethatwomen’slibertyislimited.Forexample,manyfactorieswantmenastheiremployeesandthechanceofwomenisslimerthanmen.Everyoneshoulddotheirbesttochangethiscondition.I’msuretheliberationofwomenwouldbereached.WomenintheModernWorld评分样卷(4)14分切题，文章通顺，语言规范。句法有一定变化，用词适当。有个别小错，但不影响理解。写作总论3.四级写作命题规律与预测1）新：对传统的三段论式作文提出挑战，新的题型层出不穷。特别是2003年以来，先后考过交通事故目击证词、导游词等首次出现的题目，所以仅仅依靠背诵套句变得越来越行不通。需要同学们重视提高自己的真正写作水平，以不变应万变。2）综合能力考核：纯粹的记叙、说明或议论文的考核被同时考核三种能力的综合性题目所代替，如2003年9月份的考题，就要求考生在第一段叙述你的classmate生病或受伤的过程，第二段要求说明一下各方面对他的关心，第三段要求你对这个事件展开讨论。这要求我们要全面发展自己的写作能力，不可偏废。3）实用：实用文体的写作出现得越来越多，书信作文屡次出现，2004年6月还考了一篇导游词。这体现了四级作文对学生实际运用英语能力的关注，也是四级作文备考训练的重点之一。写作总论3.1最近几年四级考试作文题目2006.6VolunteersNeeded(应用文)2006.6.OnStudents’SelectingLecturers（论说文）2006.12.SpringFestivalGalaonTV(论说文)2007.6.Welcometoourclub（应用文）2007.12.WhatElectivestoChoose（论说文）2008.6.RecreationalAc