搜索
短文改错1．假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。DearGrandpa,Howareyouthosedays?IhavebeenmissingyouverymuchafterIwenttocollegeayearago.WheneverIthinkoftheolddays,Ifeelveryhappily.IstillrememberwhenIwaschild,youalwaysheldmeinyourarmsandtoldmestoriestillIfallasleep.Weoftenwenttothefieldstoenjoythepleasantviewthere.Youtoldmethenameofdifferentplantsandtheircharacteristics.Gradually,IbecameinterestinginbiologyandchosetolearnbiologywhenIenteredintothecollege.NowmyfriendAnn,togetherwithme,aregoingtodofieldstudyandthefindingswillbeuseasmaterialsforourresearch.Sincewe’lldothestudyinourhometown,Ihopetoseeyoubythen.121．短文改错1．【小题1】those—these【小题2】after--since【小题3】happily—happy【小题4】waschild--wasachild【小题5】fall—fell【小题6】name--names【小题7】innteresting—interested【小题8】enterintothecollege--去掉into【小题9】areregoingtodo--isgoingtodo【小题10】use--used【解析】【小题1】指这些日子，你怎么样？而不是那些日子。【小题2】根据上下文时态及句子的意思：自从我一年前上大学，我一直在思念你。【小题3】feel后面接形容词而不是副词构成系表结构。【小题4】child是可数名词单数形式，这里指当我是一个孩子的时候。【小题5】本文是过去时，所以这里使用fall的过去式fell.【小题6】根据下文的differentplantsandtheircharacteristics说明这里使用复数形式。【小题7】对人作主语进行修饰，使用interested.【小题8】enter是及物动词，后面直接接宾语，不需要接介词。【小题9】本句的主语是myfriendAnn与togetherwithme,没有关系，谓语动词使用单数形式。【小题10】本句为被动语态。短文改错2．Whichisknowntoall,nowadaystheInternetisplayingmoreandmoreimportantpartinourdailylife.Init,wecannotonlyreadnewsathomeandabroadbutalsogetsomuchinformationaspossible.Weareoftensende-mailstoourclassmatesorourteachersormaketelephonecalltoourfamiliesaswellasourfriends.However,wecangotoschoolonthenet,readdifferentkindsofbooksandeventeachmyselfEnglish.Wecanalsoenjoymusic,watchingsportsandplaycomputergamesonthenet.Wecoulddoshoppingevenwithoutleavingourhomes.短文改错2．【小题1】Which改为As；playing后加【小题2】In改为On；so改为【小题3】去掉are；call改为【小题4】However改为Besides/Moreover；myself改为【小题5】watching改为【小题6】could改为can【解析】【小题1】定语从句，从句中缺少主语，只能用as做代词，指代nowadaystheInternetisplayingmoreandmoreimportantpartinourdailylife.这句话，which不能指代一句话。固定搭配playapartin在。。。中是。。。的一部分【小题2】“it”指代“Internet”在网上，用onontheInternet为固定搭配固定搭配asmuchaspossible尽可能的多【小题3】句意：我们通常给老师同学发邮件这里是一般现在时，不用are打电话maketelephonecalls由上下文可知，不止一个电话，故用复数形式【小题4】前后两句话不存在转折，由递进的意味，故用Besides/Moreover句子的主语是“我们”故此处应是“我们自学英语”故用【小题5】watchsports是与enjoymusic和playcomputergames并列存在的，都是can后面的宾语。都应该用动词原形【小题1】本文时态为现在时，故用can不用could短文改错3．IthasbeenyearssincetheChinesegetplasticbagsfromsupermarketsforfree.Chinahasbannedfreeplasticbagsatshopsandsupermarkets,butpeoplehavetopayforthem.TheChineseonceusedabout300millionofplasticshoppingbagsaday,whichhascausedenvironmentallypollutionbecauseplasticbagsarenoteasytobreakdown.SotheChineseisencouragedtotaketheirownbagsforshopping.Thenwhatkindofshoppingbagisthebesttocarry?SomestudentinChongqinghaveaextraordinaryidea.Theyuseoldclothestomakeclothbags,andthentoasktheirparentsandfriendstousetheseclothbagsinsteadofplasticones.Theydosobecausetheythinkitisourdutytohelpprotectingtheenvironment.短文改错3．【小题1】get改成Got【小题2】but改成and/so【小题3】去掉of【小题4】environmentally改成environmental【小题5】is改成are【小题6】studentstudents【小题7】a改成an【小题8】去掉then【小题9】our改成their【小题10】protecting改成Protect【解析】【小题1】since后面的句子用过去时表示自从过去发生的事情到现在【小题2】上下文之间存在着因果关系而不是转折关系【小题3】量词前面有确定数词修饰时，后面通常不要of,(除非表示特定范围【小题4】后面的名词，那么应该使用形容词修饰名词【小题5】中国人做主语，谓语动词用复数形式【小题6】some后面接复数名词【小题7】后面的词以元音开始【小题8】Then多余，已经有了and连接【小题9】句子主语是they，他们认为是他们的责任【小题10】it是形式主语，不定式是真正的主语短文改错4．YesterdayIattendedaclassmateparty．Iwasveryhappytoseemyoldfriends,thatIhadn’tmetforyears．SoIdrankalot．Aftertheparty,Idrivehomethoughmyclassmatehadtriedtopersuademenotto．Ialwaysbelievedthatasaskilleddriver,drinkingalittledidnoharmtodriving．Onthewaytohome,thewinebegantotakeeffect．Allofsudden,Icrackedmycaragainstasignontheroad．Luckily,apolicemancametowardsme．Hefinedmeandsaid:“Drunkdrivingisaterriblything．Youcanenduphurtyourself,andotherinnocentpeoplelife．”Tillthen,Irealizedthattheeffectsofdrunkdrivingcouldbedeadlyforallthoseinvolved．Manypeoplewhodrinkanddrivedonotthinkoftheseriousconsequencesoftheiractionunlessitistoolate．SoIappealtoeverybodynevertodrinkanddrive!Cherishyourlife!短文改错4.【答案】【小题1】that—who/whom【小题2】drive-drove【小题3】classmate---classmates【小题4】onmywayhome【小题5】allofasudden【小题6】luckily---unluckily【小题7】terribly---terrible【小题8】hurt---hurting【小题9】people---people’s【小题10】unless----until【解析】【小题1】非限制性短语从句不能用that引导。【小题2】本文是过去时为主。【小题3】根据上文可知参加同学聚会，那么应该有很多同学。【小题4】home是副词，前面不要加介词。【小题5】固定词组allofasudden突然【小题6】这里应该使用副词，修饰整个句子。【小题7】后面是名词thing，应该使用形容词修饰。【小题8】固定词组endupdoing以做某事结束【小题9】根据后面的life可知这里应该使用所有格的形式。【小题10】固定句型not…until…直到…才…短文错误5．DearWangPing，I’mverygladtohavereceivedaletteryousentmetwoweeksbefore．I’vebeenthinkingaboutthequestionyouaskme．Inmyopinion，youshouldcomebackafteryoufinishyourstudiesatabroad．Foronereason，whatyouarestudyingisbadneedednowadaysinChina．Itwillbequiteeasyofyoutofindagoodjob．Infact，Iknowthatafewbigcompanyinourcityarehopingtohirepeoplelikeyou．Forotherreason，Ithinkitwillbemuchmoreconvenientforyoutolookafteryourparentsaswearegettingold．Therefore，Ithinkit’sagoodideaforyou