四级作文讲解(漫画)

writing•1.审题（1-2mins)•2.构思提纲(3-5mins，确定主题)•3.写文章(20mins)•4.修改检查(5mins)写作概述Steps•Pre-writing:仔细阅读题干，确定写作主题•Para.1:describethepicture简要描述漫画（who,what,when,where…）开门见山TIPS:1.写作的directions部分虽然给出了大致的主题，但是也要求考生对漫画进行描述，切忌抛开漫画内容直接议论！！！TIPS:2.漫画的内容一定要符合图片，切忌无中生有！！！•Para2：全文的核心段giveyouropinionaboutthephenomenonconveyedinthepictureandinterpretitsmeaning/message揭示主题（观点）并加以解释和说明论证;揭示现象(问题)并阐述现象（问题）产生的原因。TIPS：可以从2-3个方面进行阐述，也可以将这部分分为两段。uPara3.：giveyourconclusion.(a)提出建议，重申观点主题句(b)对如何解决漫画中所反映的问题提出合理建议或总结观点。TIPS：主题句的复述不是简单地重复，通常需符合1.如果在段末，用强调词转换方式连接。2.与主题句保持意思一致，更进一层。3.转换方式：词对应，同根，逆向实例一看图作文的解题思路应用•1.审题（认真阅读写作提示）：漫画信息“focusonthetopicaboutmakingalifeplanandexplainwhyitisimportantforyoungpeopletodo”确定写作主题：年轻人应该做好人生规划以及人生规划的重要性的原因2.作文提纲（结构）•第一段：简要描写图画内容（who,what,when,where…）:•爷爷教导孙子：如果年老的时候写自传，你会看到自己去过哪里，（whereyouhavebeen）如果年轻时候写，你就会知道你将去哪里(willseewhereyouaregoing)。•Thepicturedepictsayoungmansittinginfrontofacomputerandtypingsomethingwithhisgrandfatherstandingbehind.Thecaptionbelowsays,“Whenyouwriteyourautobiographyinoldage,you’llseewhereyouhavebeen,butwhenyouwriteyourautobiographyatayoungage,you’llseewhereyou’regoing.”Itrevealsprofoundlythatyoungpeopleshouldshapetheirownfutureandmaketheirownlifeplans,whichiscosistentwithwhatIadvocate.第二段：解释图画深刻含义（揭示主题）并加以解释和说明论证。Firstly,planningyourlifehelpsyousetupspecificlifegoalsandfollowthroughonyourgoals.Whenyouhavespecificgoals,you’remorelikelytobeself-motivated.Secondly,lifeplanninghelpsyouhaveafullunderstandingofyourlifedeficienciesandmakepromptadjustments.Ifyoufailsomeofyourlifegoals,youcanre-examineyourlifeplananddecidewhethertomakemoreeffortstofulfillthosegoalsorchangesomeofyourgoals.Lastbutnotleast,youcanmeetmanynewopportunitiesaftersomeofyourlifeplanscometrue,becausesuccessbreedsmoresuccessandopportunitiesbringinmoreopportunities.第三段：给出自己的看法（总结全文，强调正确的做法）。•Tosumup,itisquiteessentialforyoungpeopleespeciallytheuniversitystudentstomakelifeplanearlysoastofacethechallegingsconfidentlyaftergraduations.Whatweshoulddoistotakeactionsimmediately,includingchoosingcorecouresandinterest-basedminorcoursesandfiguringoutexactschedulesforstudyorfuturecareer.Onlyinthisway,canouruniversitytimeisrewardinginthelongrun.•Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay.Youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefdescriptionofthepictureandthenexpressyourviewsontheimportanceoftakingprecautions.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.实例二看图作文的解题思路应用•1.审题（认真阅读写作提示）：漫画“expressyourviewsontheimportanceoftakingprecautions”确定写作主题：Totakesomemeasuresbeforesomethinghadhappened.(未雨绸缪)2.作文提纲（结构）•Thepicturefocusesonapersonwhoisstandinginfrontofthesea,watchingthetiderising.Abovethepicture,thereisathought-provokingsentencewhichtellsusthatweshouldtakesomemeasuresbeforesomethinghadhappened.第一段：简要描写图画内容（who,what,when,where…），并揭示图画深刻含义（揭示主题）。•第二段：针对图画所表达的观点（主题）进行举例论证•Lifeisnotalwaysfullofhappinessandfortune.Therefore,wearesupposedtobeawareofthepotentialriskanddanger.Forexample,whentheeconomicdownturnisaroundthecorner,anemployeewithvisionshouldanalyzethecurrentsituationandeitherlearnmoretostabilizehispositioninhiscompanyorgetreadytofindanewjob.Itwouldbelateifhehadbeenlaidoffwithnootherjobopportunitiesavailable.•WritingTechniques:AGeneralPointSupportedbyExamples•Lifeisnotalwaysfullofhappinessandfortune.Therefore,wearesupposedtobeawareofthepotentialriskanddanger.Forexample,whentheeconomicdownturnisaroundthecorner,anemployeewithversionshouldanalyzethecurrentsituationandeitherlearnmoretostabilizehispositioninhiscompanyorgetreadytofindanewjob.Itwouldbelateifhehadbeenlaidoffwithnootherjobopportunitiesavailable.•第三段：总结全文。Allinall,itisadvisableforanyonetomakeprecautionarypreparationsfortheunexpecteddifficultiesordisastersinlifeinadvance.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessaybasedonthepicturebelow.YoushouldYouarerequiredtowriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.commentontheroleofmobilephoneinpeople'scommunication.TheRoleofMobilePhoneinPeople'sCommunication•Thepopularityofsmartphoneshasexertedgreatinfluenceonthewaypeoplecommunicate,somuchsothatanincreasingnumberofindividualscontendthatface-to-facecommunicationisbeingreplacedbytextsandimagesonthemobilephone.••Therearemorethanoneangletoconsiderthisphenomenon.Ononehand,itispleasantlyacknowledgedthatsmartphonesshortenthedistancebetweenfamiliesandfriends.Evenpeoplefromdifferentsidesoftheglobecansharepictures,feelingsandthoughtsthroughvarioustypesofappsonthephone,thusbuildingalong-distanceconnection.Ontheotherhand,asthepicturewarnsus,toomuchsmartphoneaddictioninterfereswithpeople'sreal-lifecommunication.Statisticsshowthatover70percentofface-to-facecommunicationconsistsoffacialexpressionsandbodylanguage,whichiswhypeopleshouldstayawayfrommobilephoneswhentheyhavethechancetoactuallytalkandcommunicatewithothers.••Inaword,mobilephonesactasanappropriateplatformwherepeoplecanalwaysstayintoughhoweverlongthedistanceis,butawisemanshouldknowwhentoputdownhisphone.