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(一)DearElli,I’maseniorstudent.IlikemakefriendswithpeoplebutIdomybesttogetonwelleveryone.ButinlastweekIfoundthatoneofmyfriendswroteinherEnglishdiarythatshedislikedmeandthathedidn’twanttobemyfriendanymore.NowshehasstartedtomakefunofmebecauseofI’mfat.I’mkindtoher,butwhycan’tshebefriendofmine?Otherproblemisaboutmyweight.ShouldIdolessexerciseorusepills?Anddoyouknowanyotherway?Pleasegivemesomeadvices.Yours,Mary(二)DearSir,IamnowacollegestudentatPekingUniversity.I’mquiteinterestedinthepositionofferingbyyourwebsiteforpart-timeEnglishreporters.IthinkI’mfitthejob.Asastudent,I’vereadalotandhavemanyknowledgeindifferentfield.I’mfondofEnglishanddowellinbothspeakingandwriting.Besides,I’measilytogetalongwithandIenjoyworkingtogetherwithanother.Aboveall,Ionceworkasareporterformycollegebroadcaststation.SoI’msureIcandothejobwellifIwillgetthechanceworkforawebsite.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.(三)Haveyoueverheardfromthesaying:AllworkandnoplaymakeJackadullboy?Whatthismeansisthatifyoustudyallthetimesyouwillbecomeaboringperson.Youmustgooutandhavingfunwithyourfriends,otherwiseyouwilllosehim.Noonewantstobefriendswiththepersonwhothatonlyworksandstudies.Perhapsyouhaveaconfidenceproblem.Pleasetryrememberthattheworkyoudoisforyourselfratherthanforanyoneelse.Youdonothavetocompeteyourclassmates.Noonecanbehappierinstudyingsevendayandsevennightsaweek.(四)DearTracy,AlthoughI'm16yearsold,butmyfatherstilltreatsmeasacarelesschildren.Hedoesn’tvaluemyopinions.Heisverystrictwithmeandoftenpunishesmeaboutleavingthingslyingaroundinthehousewhilehedidthisalltime.Ithinkhefailstosetanexamplemetofollow.Butheoftensays:“DoingasIsay,notasIdo.”Evenworse,hepointsoutmypastmistakestoguests,makingmefeelhurting.Ilovemyfather,butIcan’tbearwhathedoes.Ihavebeentriedmanytimestotalkwithhebutheneverlistens.Please,helpme.(五)EverymorningStevewenttoworkbytrain.Ashehasalongtrip,healwaysbuysnewspaper.Ithelpsmakethetimepassingmorequickly.OneTuesdaymorning,heturnedoverthesportspage.Hewantedtoseethereportaboutanimportantfootballmatchthenightbefore.Thereportwassointerestingthatheforgottogetoffathisstation.Hedidnotknowitunlesshesawthesea.Hegotonatthenextstation,andhadtowaitalongtimeforatraintogoback.Itwasnodoubtthathearrivedlateattheoffice.HisbosswasangrywhenSievetoldtohimwhyhewaslate.“Workisveryimportantthanfootball!”,heshouted.(六)Whenmyfatherboughtmeacomputerasabirthdaygiftformeinlastyear,Ifeltveryexcited.Asweallknow,computersaregettingmoreandmoreusefullynow.Muchinformationcanbestoredinthem.Wecanalsolearnthathaslatelyhappenedintheworldontheinternet.Inpast,peoplehadtodolotsofworkwhichwasverydangerous.Now,but,computerscandoitinstead.Whenanexamiscoming,Ioftendidsomeexercisesonmycomputer.Thenitwillcorrectitandtellmetherightanswers.Inthiswayitisveryconvenientformetopreparetheexamthanbefore.Thecomputerhasbecomemyrealfriend.(七)In10thAprilthisyear,asLiMingwasleavinghishomeinthemorning,hegotintothelifttogetherawoman.Whentheliftgottothefourfloor,itstoppedandamiddle-agedmanenter.Oncethemangotin,hesnatchedthewoman’shandbag.HepulledbothLiMingandthewomanoutofthelift.LiMingrandownstairs.Whenhereachedforthegroundfloor,hesawthemanwalkedout.Hetoldthecaretakeratonceandtheybothfollowedthieftoarestaurantnearbywhichtheymettwopolicemen.LiMingtoldthemallaboutthecaseandthethiefhasfinallycaught.(八)OnedaylastweekIwentawalkinthecountry.Inthemorningtheweatherwaswellandthesunwasshining;theskywasblueandtherewerenocould.Soonacoolwindstartedblownandblackcloudswerecoveredthesunandthenitstartedtorain.Therewerenohousesinsight,butIgotverywet.Afterahourorso,Imanagedtocatchabuswhichtookmehome.ButwhenIarrivedIhasshiveringandIknewIhadcaughtabadcold.Imusthavetakenmycoat.Ihadnothingtodobuttostayathomeandwaitforadoctor.(九)Ivisitedmyauntinthecountrysidenearthecityinlastweek.Iwassurprisedtoseethatgreatchangeshadbeentakenplaceinthecountryside.Takemyaunt’sfamilyforexample.Wesupplyprecioustreesandflowerstothestoresinthecityandhaveovertenworkersworkingforthemselves.Theirfamily’sincomereachedasmuch100,000yuanlastyear.Noronlydidtheyhaveahouse,acarandcomputers,theycanalsoaffordatripabroadeveryyear.Whenaskingwhatelsetheyneededmost,theysaidthattheywantedtolearnafewEnglishsothattheycoulddobusinesswithforeignersdirectly.Totheirdelighted,mycousincanusethathehaslearnedfromuniversitytohelpthemwithoverseastrade.(十)Thankyouforyoure-mail!Youaskedmeaboutmyfriendsandhowweliketodo.Well,IguessIdowhatmostpeopletodo.Ilikereadingbooks,watchingfilmsandlistentomusic.Myfavouritesportisvolley-ball.Mostofmyfriendplayvolleyballtogetherwithme.Mybestfriendistwoyearselderthanme.Shegoestoadifferentschool,butwealwaysgettogetherafterschooltotalkandhavefuns.Wesometimesdohomeworktogether.Whataboutyourself?Tellmesomethingaboutyourself,yourfriendsandwhatyouliketodo.IhadalsoliketoknowsomethingaboutChina.WehavereadChinainschoolandIamveryinterestinginlearningmoreaboutit.Pleasee-mailmesoon!Lisa(十一)HereisaphotowhichI’vekeptformanyyears.Look,thechildinitisme.DoyouthinkitthatIwasverylovely?Yes.Yousee,Iwasmakingface.Therewasahatonmyheadwhiletherewerenoshoesonmyfoot.Iaskedmym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