九年级英语写作Unit-6-I-like-music-that-I-can-dance-to

Unit6IlikemusicthatIcandanceto【佳篇欣赏】AIlikemusicthatisquietandgentle.WhenIamstressedout,Ialwayslistentomusictorelaxmyself.Myfavoritemusiciscountry.Thismusicisgreat，becauseithasgreatlyrics.Idon’tlikemusicthatistooloud.Ican’tstandrockmusic.Asformusicians,IprefermusicianswhocanwritetheiroriginallyricsandIlikesingerswhocansingthewordsclearly.SoJayChouisn’tmyfavoritethoughheisgreat.MyfavoritesingerisJohnDenver.Youcanlistentohissongsatnightwithyourbedroomlighton.Heisreallywonderful,Ithink.BDifferentpreferencesbringaboutproblemsMybrotherandIlikemusicverymuch.Itseemsthatwehavethesamehobby.Actually,wealsohaveaproblem.Ilikemusicthatisgentleandquite.Mybrotherlikesmusicthatisloudandenergetic.Ialwaysfeelabittiredafterschool,soIusuallyplayBandari’sCDtogetrelaxed.Whilemybrotherdoesn’tlikeit,hesaysthemusicthatIlikemakeshimfeellikesleeping.WheneverIplaytheCD，hewouldaskmetoturnofftherecorder.IfIdon’tagree,hewillbeangrywithme.WhenItakeoutMyCD,hewillplayhisRock-and-rollmusicveryloud.Thenhewon’tlistentoanybodyspeaking.Ijustcan’tstandnoisymusic.ButIdon’twanttoarguewithhim.Icameupwithanideatosolvetheproblem.Iwillbuyapairofheadphonesformybrotherasabirthdaygift.CMyFavoriteBooksIlikereadingverymuch.，andIenjoyreadingbooksthattellmagicstories.Ofcourse,HarryPotterseriesaremyfavoritebooks.Inbooks,therearemanyunbelievablethings.Theimaginationisreallygreat.Inthebooks,therearemanystrangeanimals,thebroomsthatcanfly，magichatsandmagicwands.WhenIwasachild,Ireallywantedtohaveakindofmagicpower,thenIcandoeverything.Harry’smagicworldiseverychild’sdream.Thatiswhyteenagersarecrazyaboutthebooksandit’smovies.Inthebooks,HarryPotterisacourageous,honestandconfidentboy，andheishandsome.Ilikehimverymuch,andIcanlearnsomethingfromhim.EveryteenagerwantstobefriendswithhimNowthenewbookisgoingtocomeout.Ican’twaittoreadit.【原创习作点评】假如你叫LiMing,是一名中学生，经常收听由英国主持人Philip主持的音乐节目。请给据内容要点提示，用英语给主持人写一封信。内容要点：1.你很喜欢这个节目，特别是节目播放的歌词很棒的英语歌曲；2.你学习很忙，疲劳时，会打开收音机听这个节目；3.从节目中你学到了很多新单词……；4.告诉你最喜欢什么类型的音乐，请他帮你介绍一些相关的歌手和CD。要求：1.意思连贯，符合逻辑，书信格式正确。2.不要直接翻译内容提示。习作1：DearPhilip,MynameisLiMing.Iamamiddleschoolstudent.Ilikelisteningtomusic,soIoftenlistentoyourprogramatnight,andIlikeitverymuch,especiallytheEnglishsongs.IlikeEnglishsongsthathavegreatlyrics.Asastudent,Iambusywithmyschoolwork.Everynight,IwillturnontheradioandlistentoyourprogramwhenIfeeltired.Ithelpsmerelaxmyself.Bytheway,IhavelearntmanyEnglishwordsfromthesesongs，andIgettoknowmanygoodsingersfromAmericanandEngland.Atlast,Ilikesingerswhocansingclearlyandwritetheirownsongs.Itisbetteriftheycanplaytheguitarwell.CanyouintroducemesomesingersandtheirCDs?[e-mail]!YoursLiMing教师点评这是一篇优秀的学生习作。得分点（1）书信格式正确，内容完整，层次清楚。（2）适当的增加了部分细节，能恰当使用so,and,bytheway,atlast等词和短语，作文自然流畅。（3）用词恰当，没有出现语法及词汇方面的错误。习作2：DearPhilip①：MynameisLiMing.Iamamiddleschoolstudent.Ilikemusicverymuch,soIlike②listentoyourradioprogram.IlikeEnglishsongsthathavegreatlyrics.Iambusywithmystudy.WhenIfeeltiredafterIfinishmyhomework,Iwilllistentoyourprogram.It’srelaxing.IlearntsomeEnglishwordsfromyourprogram.IalsolearnthowtorelaxwhenIfeeltired.Ilikemusicthatisgentleandquiet.CanyoutellmesomesingersandCDs?Thankyou!YoursLiMing教师点评这是一篇中档的学生习作。得分点①能按要求写作，内容完整。②语言错误较少。失分点（1）句型和用词简单。（2）内容表达生硬，过渡不自然。①此处标点符号使用有误。英语书信称呼后使用逗号。②此处应为listening,固定搭配likedoing。【拓展练笔】1.每个人都有自己的爱好，请按下面的提示写一篇作文，题目自拟。提示：1.你的爱好是什么。2.为什么有这种爱好。3.简单叙述一下这种爱好给你带来的好处。Onepossibleversion:MyhobbyBasketballismyfavoritesport.Itisoneofthemostpopularsportsallovertheworld.Playingbasketballisgoodforourhealth.Ilikegamesthatareeasytoplaywithmyfriends.Basketballismybestchoice.Iplaybasketballwithmyfriendseveryweekend.Ilikebasketballbecauseitmakesmehappyandhelpsmekeepfit.Nowadays,manyboysareplayingthegame.Whileplayingbasketball,Icanmakealotoffriends.Ihavelearnthowtoworkwithmypardoners.Basketballalsomakesmemoreconfidentandoutgoing.NowIamontheschoolteam.Iamtryingmybesttoplayitwell.IhopethatonedayIcanbeabigstarlikeYaoMing.2、为了解本校学生的兴趣爱好，校学生会主办的英文报纸举行了一次征文活动。请以“ILove…”为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你所喜欢的人或事。要求：1.文章题目自拟。写出你喜欢某事或某人的原因，并对该人或事做简单介绍。2.语言流畅，意思连贯。Onepossibleversion:ILoveComputerIlovecomputerverymuch,becauseitisveryusefulinmylife.IcansurftheInternettolookforusefulinformation.Itismoreconvenientthanusingbooks.SoIlikewebsitesthatprovideinformationformiddleschoolstudents.Icanreade-booksoncomputer.Inotonlylookatthewordsbutalsolistentothesound.Inthisway,IcanlearnEnglishafterschoolbymyselfeasily.Modernpeopleevencan’tdotheirjobwellwithoutcomputers.Weknowthatcomputerscanhelppeopledomanythingstoday.Forexample,theycanhelpstoredataforalongtime.Scientistsusecomputerstosolvedifficultproblems.Musiciansusethemtomakerecords.Iamsurecomputerswillbeaveryimportantpartofpeople’slives.3、为了准备下周的讨论课，英语老师布置了以“Whatkindofmusicdoyoulikebest?”为主题的课外调查活动。下面是你在学校调查后整理的调查结果。请根据此表写一份报告，并简要分析原因,谈谈自己对调查结果的看法。类型古典乐流行音乐摇滚乐舞曲百分比10%55%20%15%Onepossibleversion:Mysurveyisaboutwhatkindofmusicyoulikebest.FiftystudentsfromJuniorThreeansweredmyquestion.Hereistheresultofmysurvey.10%ofthestudentslikeclassicalmusic.Theysaytheylikemusicthatisge