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英语考练短文改错专练（2）(一)LastweekmyparentsandItookatwo-daystriptoEmeiMountaininSichuan.Aseveryoneknows,it’sfamousmountainwithallkindsofplantsandanimals.Theweatherwasfine.Itwasaboutnoonwearrivedatthefootofthemountain.Thethreeofthemwereveryexcited.Asweclimbedthemountain,wefedmonkeys,visitingtemplesandtoldstories.OnthewayupIwasbusytakingpicturesincethescenerywassobeautiful.Thetimepassesquickly.Eveningcamedown.Wespentthenightinahotelatthetopofthemountain.Thefoodwasexpensiveandtheservicewasgood.IwassotiredthatIfellasleepatthemomentmyheadtouchedthepillow.（二）Manyteachersworryabouttheeffectsoftelevisionwithyoungpeople.Accordingtostudies,manychildrenspendmoretimewatchingtelevisionthantheyspendinschool.Becausesomuchviewing,childrenmaynotbedevelopthehabitofreadandtheabilitytoenjoythemselves.Nooneworriesmuchabouttheradioprogramyoungpeoplelistento,althoughradioscanbeverynoise.Teachersalsowonderabouttheeffectsoftelevisioncommercials.Ononeyeartheaveragechildwillsee25,000televisioncommercials,allplannedandwrittenbygrown-upstomakechildrentowantthingsthattheydon'trealneed.（三）I’mthecaptainofourschoolteamsowithmyfellowplayerswe’vewonseveralgames.Therewillanimportantgamenextmonth.Butoneofthebestplayerinourteamtoldmejustthenthathewouldn’tplaybasketballoncemore.Hisparentsaskedhimtospendinmoretimepreparingforthecollegeentranceexamination.Ifeelsorrytohim.Buthisparentsthinkgotocollegeismoreimportantthanplayingsportsandcollegewastheonlyplaceforasmartboylikehisson.Somyfriendhadnochoice.Hewantedtomaketheirparentshappy.(四)WhenIfirstlearnedtowriteEnglish,Iranintomanydifficulties.ThemainproblemwasinthatIalwaysthoughtinChineseandtriedtotranslateanythingintoEnglish.Myteacheradvisedmetokeepmydiary.Ifollowedheradviceandshouldputdown100wordsorsoeachday.SoonIbegantoenjoytalktomyselfonpaperasIwaslearningtoexpressmeinsimpleEnglish.OnedayIwrotealittlestoryandshowedtomyteacher.Shelikeditverymuchandreadsittotheclass.Allsaidthestorywasagoodone.Theirwordwereagreatencouragementtome.（五）DearRalph,I’manewcomerhereofasmalltown.Iwoulddescribemyselfasshyandquietly.Beforemyclassmates,itseemsalwaysdifficultformetodothingsaswellthem.I'msuretheywilllaughtomeandseemeasafool.SoIfeelhappyeveryday.Besides,Ihavefewfriends.Idon'tknowthattheydon'tliketotalkwithme.Sometimes,wetalkedtoeachotherverywellinclass,butafterclasswebecomestrangeratonce.Iamtryingtoimprovethesituationsinceitdoesn’tseemtowork.CanyoutellmeaboutwhatIshoulddo?Yours,XiaoWei（六）OnThursdayIwillhavetodecidewhatIwantmyselftodooveraweekend.IamthinkingofmakingatriptoLondon,andvisittheBritishMuseumandsomeparks.ButIhavespentlotmymoney,soIcannotevengooutoftown.Imaygotoafilm,oraconcert.Yes,aconcertcanbeveryexcited.Youcanwatchyourstarswhileenjoyingyourfavoritemusic.Sothen,aconcertcostsomuch.Imayjustlistentomusic,Ihavesomerecordsgivingtomeasbirthdaygifts.IfIlistentomyownrecords,therearenoneedtospendmoney.Allright.That’showI'mgoingtodo.（七）DearSusan,I’mverygladtohearaboutyouarecomingtovisitmethenextFriday.Unfortunately,Iwon’tbeabletomeetyouattheairportalthoughIhaveclassesintheafternoon.Youwon’tfinddifficulttogettothecitycenter.Theairportbusleavesevery30minuteandwilltakeyourightlytotheFriendshipHotel.MyclasswillbeoverbythenorIwillpickyouupthere.Iwilltakeyoutogethertoahot-potrestaurantfordinnerandwe’lltalkwithourplanfortheweekendoverdinner.HavingapleasanttripandseeyouFriday.Yours,ZhangMing(八)YoucanfindallkindsinformationinjustafewminuteontheInternet.It’slikegoingtoahugelibrarywithouthavetowalkaroundtofindyourbooks.Recentlyeventhough,manypeoplehavebeendiscussingthedangersoftheInternet.TheyhavebeenreportsinAmericaaboutpeopletryingtostealpersonInformationsforbadpurposes.FindinginformationontheNetiseasily.Butnotallinformationaregoodtosociety.Forexample,youcanfindsuchinformationlikehowtokillpeople.Theproblemwillbecomemoreseriousinthefuture.（九）Nowadaysmillionsofpeopleofallagetakepleasureinahobbywhichisbothinterestedandfun.Andeveryyearmoreandmorepeoplestartastampcollectionofyourownanddiscoveraninterestwhichcanevenlastlifetime.Startingyourcollectionofstampsareeasybecausetheyarenowhere.Holidayandbirthdaypostcardsfromrelativesandlettersfromfriendscanallprovideyouforstampsfromallovertheworld.Soonceyou’vestartedcollectingseriously,youwillprobablywanttojoinintheStampCollectors’Clubwhichexisttoaddmorestampstoyourcollection.（十）Thoughagreatprogresshasbeenmadeinsciencetheseyears,therearestillmanypeopleliveinpoorconditions.Theymaketheirlivesbycollectingandsellingusedthing.Theirchildrencannotgotoschoolbecausetheyhavenotenoughmoneytosendtheirchildrentothere.Whyyouthinksomanypeoplestillsufferfrompovertynow?Theanswerliesonthepopulationexplosion.Apresidentofadevelopingcountryoncesaid;“Itisuswhoaretoblameforthepovertybecauseweusedto‘produce’childwithoutlimit.”Althoughthisfewwordssoundsimpleenough,theyhaveclearpointedoutoneofthecausesofthepopulationexplosion.专练2答案（1）第一行：two-days改为two-day第二行：mountain前加a第三行：noon后加when第四行：them改为us第五行：visiting改为visited第六行：pictures；passed第七行：去down第八行：and改为but第九行：去at（2）第一行：with改为on第二行：many改为some第三行：becauseof第四行：删去be；read改为re