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ProofReading——theFirstRoundReview短文改错第一轮专题复习授课教师：周淑涵IWarming-upCorrectyourclassmate’scompositions•DearLucy,•I’dliketoinviteyoutojoinusforavisittothenearbynursinghomethenextSaturdayfortheDoubleNinthFestival,thatisthedayfortheoldpeopleinourculture.We’llgothereandpreparesomeactivity,suchasmakedumplingsandcakeswiththeelderthere.We’llalsospentsomefuntimesinging,dancingandplayinggames,whichwehopewillmakeithappy.Weshouldreturnbackaround4o’clockintheafternoon.Ifyouareabletocomewithus,pleaseletusknow,orwe’llwaityouatthegateat9inthemorning.•Lookingforwardtoyourreply.•Yours•LiHuaII.CommonMistakesinProofReading•1.冠词article•2.关联词associatedword•3.名词noun•4.非谓语动词non-predicateverb•5.形容词adjective•6.动词verb•7.代词pronoun•8.副词adverb•9.连词conjunction•10.介词preposition•动词形，名词数；•还要注意形和副；•非谓语，细辨别；•冠词连词常光顾；•习惯用法要记住；•句子成分多分析；•逻辑关系须关注。III各个击破：1.动词形（动词的______和_____的错误,及主谓________的错误）.1)WhenItearapartmyfifthbirthdaytoyagain,myfathersaid,“That’sit.Nomoretoysforyou.”(2012课标全国卷)2)TeainChinawastraditionallydrankfromcupswithouthandles.(2013课标全国卷II)3)Finally,therewereasuddenpullatthepoleandafishwascaught.(2013陕西卷)toredrunkwasIII各个击破：2.名词数指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。•1)Hewastall,withbroadshoulderandabeardthatturnedfromblacktograyovertheyears.(2013课标全国卷I)•2)Wouldyouliketogivemesomeadvices?shouldersadviceIII各个击破：3.注意形和副例如：•1)Iamawfullytiring,butIknowI’llneverfallsleep.•(2013浙江卷)•2)Afterwaitingforabouthalfanhour,Iwasbeginningtogetimpatiently.(2013陕西卷)•3)Unfortunate,Ihadanaccidentandhitanothercar,andIneededtostayinahospitalforatleasttwoweeks.(2012浙江卷)•4）IlearnedearlyinlifethatIhadtobemorepatientandlittleaggressive.(2012课标全国卷)tiredimpatientUnfortunatelylessIII各个击破：3.注意形和副•1.形容词的用法：_______结构中作表语；•修饰_________等;•区分-ed及-ing结尾的adj.2.副词的用法：修饰_______、________、___________，作______语•3.注意形容词和副词的_______级和_______级系表名词动词形容词副词整个句子比较最高状III各个击破：4.非谓语，细辨别（非谓语动词形式：动词ing形式，过去分词，动词不定式）•1）Haveteainthelateafternoonprovidesabridgebetweenlunchanddinner…(2013课标全国卷II)•2）Themeetingholdingyesterdaywasofgreatimportance.•3）Weweremadeworkdayandnightinthefactory.HavingheldtoIII各个击破：5.冠词常光顾a/an/the误用•1）Theelderlyladywasintearsandgavemewarmhandshake.•2)Asaresult,nobodyknewtruth.•3)Don’tforgettobringaumbrellawithyou.atheanIII各个击破：6.代词格，细领悟（人称代词格的误用；代词与所指内容在性和数方面不一致；作形式主语/形式宾语it的遗漏或误用;不定代词的误用）•1）“Thatwasveryniceofyou,Mother.ButIdidn’tthinkshelookedlikeGrandma.”“Neitherdidme.”•2)Ifpossible,youcandevotewhatyousavetothosewhoneedourhelp.•3)Thenshebentdownandpickeduptolookatthepriceonit.•4)Somecountriesareinfavoroftheissue,butotherscountriesareagainstit.IyouritotherIII各个击破：7.习惯用法要记住：考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识,如介词的搭配。其错误形式主要有：多词、少词和搭配错误。•1）Itwasverykindforthemtomeetme…•2）Wemustkeepinmindthatweplayfortheteaminsteadourselves.•3）Therehadbeenaterribleaccidentonthehighwayand,foraresult,therewasalonglineoftrafficforatleastsixmiles.ofofasIII各个击破：8.句子成分多分析Asanexchangestudent,Ieagertoknowmoreaboutyourculture.amIII各个击破：9.逻辑错误须关注常考的逻辑错误除了代词的张冠李戴以外还有：连词but,and,or,so,及because,however等的用法错误。Momoisashycat,butsheseldomcomesnearpeoplewhomshehasnevermet.and/so实战演练•DearMr.Li,•Iamverygladtobeguestofyourfamily.Thankforacceptingme.•Asanexchangestudent,Iameagerlytoknowmoreaboutyourculture.AndIthoughtthebestwaytoachievethegoalistostaywithmyfamily.That’sbecauseIchoosehome-stay.What’smore,IloveChinesedishes,whichplaysanimportantpartinChineseculture.Also,home-staywillgivememorechancestomakingChinesefriends.•Iwillbeinyourhomethenextmonth.Canyouprepareformeaseparateroom?•Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Bestwishes!•Yours,•Mike分析点评•Iamverygladtobeguestofyourfamily.Thankforacceptingme.•Asanexchangestudent,Iameagerlytoknow•moreaboutyourculture.AndIthoughtthebest•waytoachievethegoalistostaywithmyfamily.a冠词常光顾eager注意形和副Thanks习惯用法要记住think动词形your代词所指，细领悟分析点评•That’sbecauseIchoosehome-stay.What’s•more,IloveChinesedishes,whichplaysan•importantpartinChineseculture.Also,home-•staywillgivememorechancestomaking•Chinesefriends.why逻辑关系须关注make非谓语，细辨别play动词形分析点评•Iwillbeinyourhomethenextmonth.Canyou•prepareformeaseparatelyroom?冠词常光顾习惯用法要记住Thankyouforlistening!PartA单句改错（谓语动词篇）•1.Somestudentsthoughtusingmobilephoneisbadfortheirstudy.•2.IknewthattheywillbeworriedaboutmebecauseIwassofaraway.•3.Wouldyoupleaserepeatit,sir?Iamnotlistening.•4.Itwasturnedouttobeherowncup,whichshe’dleftontheshelfbymistake.•5.Iwassentmymotherabunchofflowers.•6.Manyastudenthavejoinedtheclub.waswouldwashasPartA单句改错（谓语动词篇）•7.Chinesefoodarelovedbymoreandmoreforeigners.•8.Two-thrdsoftheworkhavebeenfinished.•9.Henotonlycametoseemebutalsotellmethenews.•10.Eitherthestudentsortheteacherknowthetruth.•11.Thereareanappleandtwobananasonthetable.•12.Henry,ratherthanJaneandJohn,areresponsiblefortheloss.ishastoldknowsisisPartB单句改错（非谓语动词篇）•1.Sheisbusyallday,cookingforus,washourclothesandalsoteachingustodoourhomework,yetwithoutcomplaining.•2.Atthebeginning,Ialwayskeptsilentinoralclasstoavoidmakemistakes.•3.ThenIcanspendfourweekstakeasummercourse,hopingitwillhelpmeimprovemyfuturestudies.washingmakingtakingPartB单句改错（非谓语动词篇）•4.Inoticedmotherlookingatanearbytableoccupybyanelderlywomanandayoungcouple.•5.Nowadayswearerequiri