The-most-interesting-place-in-my-hometown

大学优秀作文精编356725_10451984号题目要求：题目：Myhometown要求：Supposeaforeignfriendofyoursiscomingtovisityourhometown,whatisthemostinterestingplaceyouwouldliketotakehim/hertoseeandwhy?ThemostinterestingplaceinmyhometownDearJessica,Hellosweet,Iamgladtohearfromyou.Intheletter,yousaidthatyouwouldcometomyhometownforvisitinginseveraldays.It'saprettygoodchoiceandIpromisetotakeyoutosomeinterestingandrepresentativeplacesinNanChang.Hereletmeintroducethemostfantasticplaceinmyhometowntoyou.FerrisWheelisoneofthemostinterestingplaceinNanChangthatyoushouldn'tmiss.It'swell-knownforitsheightwhichislistedastheworld'ssecondhighFerrisWheel.Wecaneasilyenjoythecarriage'sliftinglittlebylittleandappreciatethebeautyofviewsthroughoutthewindow.Whenthecarriageapproachestothetop,it'squiteagoodangleforyoutoseethecity'swholescene.Thecitylaysunderyourfeetjustlikeasleepylion.Andyouareheresoclosedtothecloud.Whatawonderfulexperience!Icannotwaittolookingforwardtovisitingtheplacewithyou.AndIbetthatyouwillleaveaverydeepimpressiononmyhometown.Yours,Zoe教师评语：richwordusageandsentencestructure