高考英语写作指导之高级词汇和复杂结构

高考英语写作指导之高级词汇和复杂结构高考英语写作大纲要求：要求考生根据提示进行书面表达。考生应能：1.准确使用语法和词汇；2.使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思。要求考生根据提示写一篇100词左右的英语作文。根据文体划分：记叙文，说明文，议论文，应用文根据类型划分：图表式，提纲式，图画式，开放式高考英语写作评判标准：1.内容：覆盖全部要点，进行合理想象，不得随意发挥；2.语言：使用简单语言清晰表达意思；并使用了较多的语法结构和词汇，使用复杂结构或高级词汇；3.结构：叙述连贯，逻辑合理。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，全文结构紧凑流畅。高考英语写作解题要点：1.审题——审要求，审文体，审人称，审时态；2.要点齐全，滴水不漏；3.好的开头，靓的结尾；4.使用高级词汇，复杂结构；5.用好过渡性词汇。什么是复杂结构呢？如定语从句，状语从句，名词性从句，倒装句，强调句，感叹句，非谓语动词，插入语，with的复合结构，省略，独立主格结构等；什么是高级词汇呢?一般认为，不常用的词汇或者超纲词汇均可视为高级词汇。1.Itissaid/reported/believedthat…2.Itisthefirsttimethat…3.….,however.4.Itisnotlongbefore…5.Itseems/looksasif…6.Nosooner…than…Hardly…when…7.Thereisnodoubtthat…8.beabouttodosth.when…常用的复杂结构句型：1.Thepetdogissolovelythatalmosteverybodylikesher.2.Thepetdogissocutethatalmosteverybodylikesher.比一比A.Followedbymanystudents,shewalkedoutofthelab.B.Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.C.Theregoesthebell.D.Thebellisringingnow.高级词汇复杂结构复杂结构高级词汇1.原文:HewassocleverthathecouldrepairtheTV.高级词汇：HewassosmartthathecouldrepairtheTV.（用不常用词汇替代常用词汇）2.原文：Everyoneshoulddohisorherbest.高级词汇：Everyoneissupposedtodohisorherbest.（用不常用词组替代了常用单词）3.原文:Heworksdayandnightbuthislifehasnochangeatall.原文:Heworksdayandnight.However,hislifehasnochangeatall.高级词汇高级词汇:Allofasudden,Icameupwithagoodidea.（用短语替代了普通单词）4.原文:SuddenlyIhadagoodidea.5.原文:Thequestionisreallydifficulttounderstand.高级词汇：Thequestionisreallyconfusing.（用不常用词汇替代了常见表达）6.原文：Wemustusetheafter-classtimefully.高级词汇:Wemustmakefulluseoftheafter-classtime.更高一级:Wemusttakefulladvantageoftheafter-classtime.练一练1.我喜欢旅游。Iliketravelling.Ienjoytravelling.Iamfondoftravelling.Itakegreatinterestintravelling.2.我决定要努力学习。Idecidetostudyhard.Iamdeterminedtostudyhard.Iamdeterminedtomakegreatefforttostudy.复杂结构1.原文:Whilehewaswalkingthedog,themanhappenedtomeetanoldfriend.升级之后:Whilewalkingthedog,themanhappenedtomeetanoldfriend.(分词作状语)2.原文:IaminClass1,Grade3.Ourclassisabigfamily.升级之后：IaminClass1,Grade3,whichisabigfamily.（定语从句）3.原文:Ifweatherpermits,Iwillcometomorrow.升级之后:Weatherpermitting,Iwillcometomorrow.（独立主格结构）复杂结构4.原文：Wecouldn’tleaveuntilwefinishedthewholeproject.(时间状语从句)升级之后：Itwasnotuntilwefinishedthewholeprojectthatwecouldleave.5.原文：MybrotherwasridingabikeandIsatatthebackofit.(and连接的并列句)升级之后：Mybrotherwasridingabikewithmesittingatthebackofit.（强调句）（with的复合结构）复杂结构合并升级之后：Studentswhohavetheabilitytolearnbythemselveswilllearnwhattheyneedatanytime,whichcansavemoretimeforthemtolearnmore.（定语从句）6.原文：Manystudentshavetheabilitytolearnbythemselves.Theycanlearnwhattheyneedatanytime.Itwillsavemoretimeforthemtolearnmore.（零散的三个句子）练一练1.李华是一个高中生，今年18岁。LiHuaisahighschoolstudent.LiHuais18yearsold.(两个独立的简单句)LiHuaisahighschoolstudent,whois18yearsold.LiHuaisahighschoolstudentof18yearsold.2.三亚是一个小城市，有60万人口。Sanyaisasmallcityandithasapopulationof600,000.Sanyaisasmallcitywhosepopulationis600,000.Sanyaisacitywithapopulationof600,000.Sanyaisasmallcitywhichhasapopulationof600,000.课堂小结化平常为神奇1.简单句连接成复杂句；复杂句精简成结构特殊的简单句；2.灵活多变地使用特殊句型3.常见的普通单词换成较少使用的单词；4.灵活运用同义词、近义词和短语。