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WelcometoMr.Gao’sClassWelcometoMr.Gao’sClass!2005.4.24书面表达系列讲练之赢取高分策略华油一中高敏生NMET对书面表达的要求要求考生根据所给情景，用英语写一篇100个单词左右的短文情景包括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等；提供情景的形式有图画、图表、提纲等。本部分满分25/30分，所需时间约为30分钟。NMET书面表达评分原则1、先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定档次。第五档.21~25分第四档.16~20分第三档.11~15分第二档.6~10分第一档.1~5分0分语言地道，规范覆盖所有内容要点2、主要内容：内容要点；词汇和语法的数量和准确性；上下文的连贯；语言的得体性应用了较多的语法结构和词汇有效地使用了语句间的连接成分3、拼写和标点是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。4、词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。5、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。词汇,句型（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）1.覆盖了所有的要点2.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇3.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑要点全连接词如何算是一篇好文章？书面表达如何写？五个步骤1、审题文字信息图画信息题材、人称、时态、要点2、以词及点：用一两个单词或短语写出每句话的细节要点。3、联词成句：用联词成句的方法将上述要点的词语扩展成句子。4联句成文：注意：①主语和谓语②背景（适当增加时间、地点条件等）③逻辑关系④开头与结尾⑤语篇衔接5、检查修改，规范抄写给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象整体三部分1.Heading点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性2.Body中心记述部分；层次分明3.Ending小结；呼应主题技巧1.使用较高级的词汇3.使用恰当的连接词词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。增强书面表达效果的技巧2.使用较丰富的句式1.Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.2.Weallthinkheisagreatman.3.SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea.4.Thestudentsthereneedn’tpayfortheirbooks.5.Asaresulttheplanwasafailure.Theplanturnedouttobeafailure.Thankstothegoodweather,ourjourneywascomfortable.一、怎样使用较高级的词汇Weallthinkhighlyofhim.Agoodideaoccurredtome./Agoodideasuddenlystruckme.Booksarefreeforthestudentsthere.6.Whensheheardhehaddied,shewentpalewithsorrow.7.ShewenttoAustriainordertostudymusic.8.Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.9.Inourschool,therearetwenty-sixclassrooms.10.Youcanfindmyhouseeasily.ShewenttoAustriaforthepurposeofstudyingmusic.Atthenewsofhisdeath,shewentpalewithsorrow.Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedhefelt.Ourschoolismadeupoftwenty–sixclassrooms.You’llhavenotroublefindingmyhouse.丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构）利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采。1.感叹句e.g.HowhappyIwaswhenIreceivedyourletter!Whatakindboyheis!Howdisappointedhewas!2.强调句e.g.Itwasthisyoungboythathelpedtheoldgranny.Idohopeyoucancomeifpossible.3、倒装句e.g.Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvethisproblem.Therecomesthepolicecar.Hardlyhadtheygottothestationwhentheymettheyoungman.4、省略句e.g.Theyreadwhilewalkingorridingonabus.Cometomeifnecessary.5、with短语e.g.Isawayoungladywalkingslowlyinthestreetwithahandbaginherhand.6、定语从句e.g.Inmyopinion,cybercafesshouldbeaplacewherewecanfindmuchusefulinformation.Let’scometothemainteachingbuilding,atthebackofwhichstandstheschoollibrary.7、各种名词性从句e.g.That’swhatIshoulddo.Weshoulddoafavourtowhoeverneedshelpatpresent.8、各种状语从句e.g.Timepassedquicklybeforeweknewit.Themomentwereachedthefarm,wegotdowntoharvesting.Solongasweworkharderatourlessons,we’llcatchupsoonerorlater.DocallmebeforehandsothatIcanmeetyouattheairport.Theyhadtowaitbecausetherainwasgettingmoreandmoreheavily.1Whenhearrives,pleasegivemeane-mail.（使用V-ing形式）.2.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.（使用名词性从句）3.ThoughI’mweak,I’llmaketheeffort.(使用倒装句)4.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用强调句型)5.Ipassedthephysicsexambecauseofyourhelp.(用虚拟语气）Onhisarriving,pleasegivemeane-mail.Whatsurpriseshimisthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings.Practice怎样使用较丰富的句式WeakasIam,I’llmaketheeffort.Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.Icouldn’thavepassedthephysicsexambutforyourhelp.6.Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.(使用过去分词)7.Theysangandlaughedastheywentbacktoschool.(使用V-ing形式)8.Iwon’tbelievewhathesays.（使用状语从句）9.Ifyoustudyhard,youwillmakerapidprogress.（用并列句）10．HehadnosoonercomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.(使用倒装句)NosoonerhadhecomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.Followedbymanystudents,shewalkedoutofthelab.Singingandlaughing,theywentbacktoschool.Nomatterwhathesays,Iwon’tbelieve.Studyhardandyou’llmakerapidprogress.高考大纲中常用的连接词1.表示递进;在同一话题上补充内容另外，还有：whatismore;besides;also;moreover;inaddition2.表示转折关系但是，然而，相反：but;however;yet;instead;ontheotherhand;onthecontrary.3.表示因果关系因为，因此，所以:since;as;because(of);so;thus;therefore;asaresult;4.表示条件关系如果，只要:if;oncondition(that);aslongas除非:unless否则:orelse5.表示时间关系当…的时候:when;while在…之后:after在…之前:before直到:until一…就…:assoonas后来，然后:later;afterwards不久:soon近来:lately;recently自从…:since从那时起:fromthenon6.表示特定的顺序关系首先，最主要的:aboveall其次:secondly然后:then;next最后:finally;intheend7.换一种方法表述换句话说:inotherwords;thatistosay;8.进行举例说明例如，比如:forinstance;forexample;like;suchas9.用于陈述事实实际上:infact;actually;asamatteroffact跟你说实话:totellyouthetruth10.对一个话题进行总结总而言之，总的来说:onthewhole;inshort;allinall;ingeneral;inaword11.其它常用到的副词Therefore;otherwise;finally;furthermore;Thus;namely;although;afterwards;personally;Ononesideoftheroadthereisanewclassroombuilding.Ontheotherside,wheretheplaygroundusedtobenowstandsanothernewbuilding—ourlibrary.(NMET1999范文)AsfarasIknow,everyoneishappyaboutthisnewarrangementofthings.(NMET2001范文)What’smore,Icangotobedearlier.(NMET2001范文)三、怎样使用恰当的连接词Practice1请在下列句子中（间）填上恰当的关联词或意思有联系的短语。1.XiaoMingwaswalkinginthestreet___________heheardsomeonecryforhelp.2.HeadvisedthatIhireacar____________Icouldtravelaroundinthewest.3.Itwasnotlong_______thepolicecame.4.___________heheardthecryforhelp,hejumpedintothewatertosavethegirl.wheninorderthatbeforeAssoonas5.Doyouagreewithmyarrangement?________,dowritetomesoon.6.Wecangodowntownand