高考英语写作训练方法指导

高考英语写作训练方法指导DISCUSSION:Whatisagoodguidedstorywriting？Content:everythingneededincluded(内容要全)Structure:*Goodbeginningandending(好的开头结尾)*Wellorganizedandsmoothlydeveloped(结构合理,行文流畅)Language:*NoChinglish(避免中文式英文)*NoGrammaticalmistakes(没有语法错误)*Withexactlyusedwordsandrelativelychangedsentencepatterns(词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化)观察下图，根据图中内容写一篇短文，说明你和爸爸对暑假的不同看法。1、短文必须包括图画内容，可以适当增减细节，使内容连贯2、词数100左右。生词：拐骗(kidnapvt.)--summerholidayThechild:gofishing,playfootball,climbhighmountains,ridemybicycle,playchesswithmyfatherFather:behurtbyatruck,fallintothewater,falloffatree,fightagainstothers,bekidnappedbybadmencage请根据下面的英文短诗，展开适当的想象，写一篇短文。标题为：MyTeacherMr.MooreThere’sateacherMr.Moore.Whoislovelyandthirty-four.Alwaysencouragingustotry.Heleadsustoaworldof“why”.Wealladmirehimmoreandmore.请根据下面的英文短诗，展开适当的想象，写一篇短文。标题为：MyTeacherMr.MooreThere’sateacherMr.Moore.Whoislovelyandthirty-four.Alwaysencouragingustotry.Heleadsustoaworldof“why”.Wealladmirehimmoreandmore.ThesummerholidaywhichI’mlookingforwardtoiscoming....Imusttrymybesttopersuademyfather.Ofallmyteachers,Mr.Mooreistheonewhoimpressesmemost.…Heissuchalearnedpersonthatwealladmirehimverymuch.Fillintheblankswiththesuitablelinkingwordssince,onthecontrary,inshort,beforethatI'mverypleasedtotellyouaboutthechangesofmylifesincethereductionoflearningloadwasbroughtin.①____Iwasoftenexhaustedatweekends.Iattendedschoolandhadclassesthewholeday.Intheevening,IwasoftenforcedtodomyboringhomeworkandIcouldnotgotobeduntil11：30.②____theprogramofreducinglearningloadwasintroduced,mylifehasbecomemuchmoreinteresting.Ifrequentlypayavisittomuseums,dropinatcomputerroomsanddrawpicturesinmyleisuretime.Afterlunch,IwatchTV,readstoriesandlookthroughnewspaperstoenrichmyself.NolongerdoIstayup;③______,Igotobedatabout10p.m.④____Iamquitesatisfiedwithmylifenow.中国加入WTO后汽车价格逐渐下降，小轿车进入家庭，随之产生的利与弊有：利:中国汽车工业迅猛发展;给更多的人提供就业机会;洗车业、加油站增加;出行方便弊:道路建设缓慢而汽车增加迅猛;引起交通堵塞;泊车困难;空气污染严重What’swrongwiththisarticle?AsChinabecameamemberofWTO,thepriceofcarshassharplydecreased.Acoinhastwosides.Let’stalkabouttheadvantagesandthedisadvantages.Firstofall,itobviouslydidgoodtothecarindustry.Inaddition,therewillbemoreopportunitiesforjobs,plus,someotherindustrieswillbedeveloped,suchas:carcleaning,thegasstation.Lastbutnotleast,itwillbemoreconvenientforpeopletogoout.Nevertheless,disadvantagescouldnotbeignored.Forexample:sofewroadscouldnotbearthelargenumberofnewcars,second,thetrafficjamsandtheproblems:theairpollutionwillbemoreseriousthanbefore.句与句之间没有联系I'mverypleasedtotellyouthechangesofmylifesincethereductionoflearningloadwasbroughtin.Beforethat,Iwasoftenexhaustedatweekends.Iattendedschoolandhadclassesthewholeday.Intheevening，IwasoftenforcedtodomyboringhomeworkandIcouldnotgotobeduntil11:30.Sincetheprogramofreducinglearningloadwasintroduced,mylife,however,hasbecomemuchmoreinteresting.Ifrequentlypayavisittomuseums,dropinatcomputerroomsanddrawpicturesinmyleisuretime.Afterlunch,IwatchTV,readstoriesandlookthroughnewspaperstoenrichmyself.NolongerdoIstayup;onthecontrary,Igotobedatabout10p.m.Inshort,Iamquitesatisfiedwithmylifenow.Linkingwordsinyourwriting:①递进:then,besides,furthermore,moreover,inaddition,what’smore,apartfrom…②转折:however,but,although,though,yet,onthecontrary,despite,inspiteof,whereas,while,otherwise...③总结:finally,atlast,inbrief,inshort,insummary,inconclusion,inaword,tosumup,tosummarize,allinall...④强调:indeed,certainly,surely,aboveall...⑤对比:inthesameway,similarly,justas,unlike,differentfrom...⑥因果:because(of),asaresultof,owingto,thanksto,resultfrom,liein…consequently,therefore,hence,thus,forthisreason,asaresult,resultin,leadtoMakeupalogicalstorybyusingatleast3differentlinkingwords.Forexample:(1)inaddition,however,thus(2)inspiteof,similarly,indeedetc.AvoidChinglish!1)TrafficinShanghaiistoocrowded.2)Duringthetrip,youmayhappenatrafficaccident.3)Pleasecometovisitmethissummervacationifyouareconvenient.4)Iforgotmydictionaryathome.5)Thisyearwillproducemoresteelthanlastyear.Corrected1)TrafficinShanghaiistooheavy.2)Duringthetrip,atrafficaccidentmayhappen.3)Pleasecometovisitmethissummervacationifitisconvenientfor/toyou.4)Ileftmydictionaryathome.5)Thisyearthefactorywillproducemoresteelthanlastyear.Pleasefind5mistakesinthiswriting.WehadguestslastnightwhohadnotlivedinaB&Bhotelbefore.Theydidnotwantbreakfastbecausetheyweregoingoutearlyinthemorning.Theycamebacklatelyandhadsometea.Icameintothelivingroomandsawoneofthemjustgothroughthekitchendoorbutturnonthelight.Hewasfindingaglassinthecupboard.Hehadnoideathatthekitchenwasnotforguests.Ijustsmiledtomeandthought,“WhatcanIdo?”Theyareguestsafterall.WehadguestslastnightwhohadnotstayedinaB&Bhotelbefore.Theydidnotwantbreakfastbecausetheyweregoingoutearlyinthemorning.Theycamebacklateandhadsometea.Icameintothelivingroomandsawoneofthemjustgothroughthekitchendoorandturnonthelight.Hewaslookingforaglassinthecupboard.Hehadnoideathatthekitchenwasnotforguests.Ijustsmiledtomyselfandthought,“WhatcanIdo？”Theyareguestsafterall.Polishoursentences!O:Theyoungmancouldn’thelpcryingwhenheheardthebadnews.P:Hearingthebadnews,theyoungmancouldn'thelpcrying.O:Ilik