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四级写作--提纲式命题作文SampleInmodernworld,theeconomyisdevelopingfastandthepopulationisalsogrowingveryfast.Butdoyouknowourearth’shealthybecometerriblenow?Asayouthofthe21stcentury,whatshouldIdotoprotectourearth?Rapidly,increasing,isbecomingDirections:Inthissection,youareaskedtowriteacompositionentitledShouldpeopleowncarsornot?Yourcompositionshouldbebasedontheoutlinegivenbelow.Yourcompositionshouldbeatleast120words.Outline:1、有人赞成个人买车。2、也有人持相反观点。3、你的看法。ShouldPeopleOwnCarsorNot?ShouldPeopleownCarsornot?Nowhavingacarismoreandmorepopular,somanyfamilyswanttobuyacar.Theythinkit’suseful.Someyoungsthinkit’scool,andmanypeoplethinkit’sconvenentwhentheyhaveaprivatecar.Theydon’tneedtowaitthecrowdedbus/sotheycangotoworkontime.It’ssavethetime.Andtheyalsocandrivethecargowherevertheywantto.Afamilycanhaveatraveltogethter.It’scomfortable.Inaword,theycanimprovethequalityoftheirlifewithacar.Especiallytheincreasingofprivatecarcanpromotetheeconomic.Itcanleadthedevelopmentofmanyindustries.It’sgoodforourcountry’sdeveloping.四级作文评分原则及标准14分–漂漂亮亮：切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，连贯性好，基本上语言无误。11分—清清楚楚：切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。8分—马马虎虎：基本切题，有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯，语言错误相当多，其中一些是严重错误。5分—糊里糊涂：基本切题，表达思想不清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重语法错误。2分—一塌糊涂：条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎，或大部分句子都有错误，且多数为严重错误。Praise,AnImportantGiftSomepeoplethinkthatcritismcanchangeone’sviewoflife.However,manypeoplearguethatpraiseismoreimportant.Inmyopinion,praiseismoreprofitablethancritism.Praiseislikefreshair,withoutit,ourlifewillbecomeuninterestingandinhappy.Givingpraisedoesnotcostthegiveralot,but,thereceivercanlearnmuch.Therearemanypeoplewhosucceedatlastwithapraise,Takemyselfforexample.Thoughithappenedalongtimeago,Irememberitclearly.ItwasasportsmeetingandIattendit.Atfirst,IwasveryconfidentandthoughtIwasthebestofthem,soIhadnotraining.Thetruthwas,duringtherace,manystudentsleftmebehind.ThenIwanttogiveupandwasfrustrated.Fortunately,myPEteachercameandpattedonmyback:”Aslongasyousticktocontinue,successwillbelongtoyou.Ibelieveyou,comeon!”Hesaidwithasmile.Youknow,Iimproveddramaticallyandwontheprize.So,praiseisanimportantgift.写作对策内容是否紧扣主题，涵盖提示要点作文结构层次是否清晰语言表达是否流畅，有无重大语病，有无逻辑错误是否能恰当的使用过渡性词语作文字数是否达到要求卷面是否整洁，书写是否漂亮写作体裁议论文说明文记叙文议论文开头常用句式Recently,theproblemof…hasarousedpeople’sconcern.…hasbeenplayinganincreasinglyimportantroleinourdailylife.Ithasbroughtalotofbenefitsbuthascreatedsomeseriousproblemsaswell.Nowadays,…hasbecomeaproblemwehavetoface.Itiscommonlybelievedthat…/Itisacommonbeliefthat…Manypeopleinsistthat…Withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,moreandmorepeoplebelievethat…Alotofpeopleseemtothinkthat…议论文结尾常用句式Takingallthesefactorsintoconsideration,wefinallycometotheconclusionthat…Takingintoaccountallthesefactors,wemayreasonablycometotheconclusionthat…Hence/Therefore,we’dbetterarriveattheconclusionthat…Thereisnodoubtthat(job-hopping)hasitsdrawbacksaswellasmerits.Allinall,wecannotlivewithout…Butatthesametime,wemusttrytofindoutnewwaystocopewiththeproblemsthatwouldarise.写作类型提问子类观点类对立观点观点类事物性质利弊子类批驳类办法类原因类提问子类ShouldCollegeMarriagebepermitted?1关于是否允许大学生结婚的讨论在校园里兴起2我对这一现象的看法Anationaldebatehassprunguponwhethercollegemarriageshouldbepermitted.Manypeoplestronglyopposethepermissionofcollegemarriage.Theyholdthatthechieftaskforcollegestudentsistostudy,andmarriagewilldistracttheirattentionandoccupyalotoftime.Moreover,studentsarenoteconomicallyindependent,somarriagewillcausealotofproblemssuchasfuturejobhuntingandhousing.Inaword,theybelievemarriagewilllargelyhinderbothpresentstudyandfuturework.Frommyperspective,Ithinkcollegemarriageshouldbepermittedbutbepracticedwithextremecare.Foronething,therightofcollegestudentsshouldberespected,astheyareadults.Foranother,therestrictionontheageofstudentswasdoneawaywithin2001,andmanyelderstudentsattenduniversities.Lastbutnottheleast,thetimeincollegeissopreciousthateverystudentwillthinktwicebeforetheygetmarried.Undoubtedly,fewstudentswillevergetmarriedaftercollegemarriageispermitted,buttheauthorityshouldgrantthemtheright.观点类对立观点MyViewonOpportunity1有的人认为机会是极少的，另一些人则认为人人都会有某种机会。2我的看法…3结论MyViewonOpportunityWhenitcomestoopportunity,people’sopinionsdiffer.Somepeoplethinkthattherearefewopportunitiesintheworld,whileothersarguethateverybodywillhavesomekindofopportunityalonghisliferoute.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iagreewiththelatteropinion.Foronething,Ifirmlybelieveopportunitiesareeverywherearoundus.Nopersonwillbeunluckyenoughtohavenoopportunitiesallthetime,becauseeverydoghashisday”.Foranother,sinceopportunitiesaretransient,wehavetomakegoodpreparationsandimproveourselves.JustthinkofNewton,whodiscoveredtheLawofGravitationwhenmanypeoplehadwatchedanapplefallingaheadofthem.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemayreasonablydrawtheconclusionthattherearequiteafewopportunitiesaroundus.Onlyifwegetpreparedcanweseizetheopportunitiesinsteadoflettingthemslipby,justasanoldsayinggoes,opportunitiesareonlyforthepreparedminds”.观点类事物性质MyViewonDoubleBADegree1现在大学生读双学位的现象很常见2我对这一现象的看法MyViewonDoubleBADegreeRecentlyithasbecomeacommonphenomenonforcollegestudentstohavetwomajorsatthesametime.Inthisway,theycangetdoubleBAdegreeswhentheygraduatefromtheuniversityseveraly