雅思写作讲解

1公共邮箱：[e-mail]密码：ielts20110301微博：Beloved付博8次课的整体安排：第一节：第1次雅思整体介绍+重点语法第二节：第2次词汇的扩展第三节：第3+4+5次Task-2题型的介绍+真题讲解第四节：第6+7+8次Task-1讲解第一节：雅思的整体介绍IELTS(InternationalEnglishLanguageTestingSystem)Academic学术类General移民类笔试：1.听力（30分钟听+10分钟涂答题卡）2.阅读（60分钟）3.写作（60分钟）口试：4.口语（13-15分钟）写作：AcademicWriting:Task-1:数据类+Task-2GeneralWriting:Task-1书信类+Task-2时间利用：Task1（20分钟15分钟）+Task2（40分钟35分钟）引起：cause/leadto/raise/create/trigger字数要求：Task1：150字Task2：250字书写格式：（1）齐头式（推荐）；（2）缩进式注意事项：（1）不可以缩写TV=television（2）拼写center/centreProgram/programme可能出现的问题：看不懂Task-2的题目例子：Therearemanyextinctspeciesonthisplanet.Somepeoplebelievethatpeopleshouldprotectthemforextinctionwhileotherssaythatpeopleshouldsolvetheproblemsoftheirownfirst.Discussboththeseviewsandgiveyourownopinion.(2011年9月)2写作评分标准：（1）Task-Response任务的完成程度----字数----命题回答完整（2）CohesionandCoherence连贯和统一----语言方面1.信号词（+分论点）首先：firstandforemost/aboveall/mostsignificantly/primarily/preliminarily其次：besides/next/additionally/inaddition/whatismore/moresignificantly最后：lastofall/eventually/lastbutnotleast2.连词（逗号不能连接句子）因果：so/because转折but/while3.连接性词汇&短语因果：句子；therefore/asaresult/inconsequence/hence/thus/consequently，+句子例子：Xiaomingissick;therefore,heisnotcoming.Xiaomingissick.Therefore,heisnotcoming.Xiaomingissick;he,therefore,isnotcoming.转折：句子；however/whereas/conversely/onthecontrary/nonetheless/nevertheless，+句子----论证方面（总—分—总）总：主题句高度概括鲜明（内容/结构：强调句可以提出一次论点：itis---that/who---）独立，不能重叠分：引申/解释/举例子总：小结（3）LexicalResources词汇丰富程度Useful=practical/pragmatic/utilitarian(use=applysthinto/insth=employsb/想法/理论/utilize)Asksbtodosth=requiresbtodo=commendsbtodo=enablesbtodo(make)Bad=negative/adverse/vicious/dire/detrimental/deleteriousImportant=crucial/critical关键的/significant/essential/vital(revitalize振兴)/pivotal/irreplaceableEssence精化A对B很重要。=AissignificanttoB.=AisofgreatsignificancetoB.3=Bcannotdevelop/grow/survive/makeprogresswithoutA.Could/might/shouldhavedone本应该而没Ishouldhavetoldyoueverything.Could/might/shouldnothavedoneWithoutteachers’contribution,studentscouldnothavemadeprogresssofast.年龄数轴（人物替换词汇）People=humanbeings/folks/thepublic/individualsTeachers=professor(大学)/lecturer/tutor/practitioner/teachingfaculties婴儿：infant/babyAdj：新生的/新兴的infanttechnology纳米技术：nanotechnology小孩：children/kids十岁：teens十几岁teenagers青少年：theyoung/youths/youngsters/adolescents/thejuvenile(juveniledelinquency青少年犯罪)/thepuberty-aged=students成年:adults/grown-ups（尽量人物具体化）Moreandmorepeoplegoabroadforeducation.=alargefractionofpeople=asizablepercentageofpopulation=Thereisanincreasinglyrapidgrowthinpeoplewhogoabroadforeducation.万：Thereisanincreasinglyrapidgrowthinpeoplewhoholdabeliefthat_句子______Withthedevelopmentof=AlongwiththeadvanceofEverycoinhasitstwosides.=Nothingcanbeflawlessinthisworld,soistheprogressofscience.（4）GrammaticalRangeandAccuracy语法的广度和准确5大从句+4种特殊结构1.主语从句Itis＋形容词＋that+句子Itisapparent/evidentthattheStateshouldattachmuchimportancetoenvironmentalprotection.Itisapparent/evidentthatattentionmustbegiventoenvironmentalprotection.政府：official/authority/government/theState4重视：attachmuchimportancetoLayemphasisonCenteronLayone’seyesonGivepriorityto2.宾语从句Ibelieveittruethat+句子Peopleshouldtakeitintoaccountthattheapplicationofnucleartechnologyexertsanegativeimpactontheenvironment.3.定语从句例子：近十年世界人口上升，所以人类将面临能源短缺。公式：时间+see/witness+a/an+变化名词+in+变化对象。Recentdecadehasseenanincreaseinworldpopulation,asaresultofwhichhumanbeingswouldencountertheshortageofenergy.Xiaomingissicktoday,whichmakeshimabsent.面临：face/befacedwith/encounter/confront/beconfrontedwith短缺：shortage/scarcity,underwhich,onthebasisofwhich4.表语从句Thereasonwhichcannotbeignoredisthat+句子Ignore/neglectThefactwhichcanbeseenbythepublicisthat+句子5.同位语从句ThesuggestionisgivenbyTommythatweshouldleavenow.万：Anotionhaslongbeenrootedamongthepublicthat+句子6.非谓语结构Given/Considering---,句子（考虑到-，然后--）Giventhenatureofthisissue,itismybeliefthat______.万：Given/Consideringthefactthat+句子，句子Given/Consideringthefactthatnucleartechnologyexertsanegativeimpactonenvironment,theStateshouldcurbitsdevelopment.5抑制：curbComparedwith---,句子（对比论证）7.强调句Itis---that/who---Itiscomputerthatbringsnumerousbenefitstothepublic.Itisteacherwhoplaysanirreplaceableroleincurrenteducation.8.倒装So---形容词/副词---that----Heissocreativethat(he)usuallycomesupwithgoodideas.Socreativeishethatusuallycomesupwithgoodideas.采取措施：takeaction/takemeasures立即地：immediately/instantly污染：pollution/contamination恶化：aggravate/deteriorateTheauthorityhadtakenactionsoinstantlythatenvironmentalcontaminationdidnotdeteriorate.Soinstantlyhadtheauthoritytakenactionthatenvironmentalcontaminationdidnotdeteriorate.Wereallthesemeasurestakenintoaccount,thisissuewouldbeaccordinglywelladdressed.原因+解决办法(Ifallthesemeasuresweretakenintoaccount,thisissuewouldbeaccordinglywelladdressed)（口语Part-3）WereIconfrontedbysuchsituation,Iwould+do---9.Therebe+从句第二节：语法图谱串讲&词汇扩展2.句子扩展练习（1）政府应该投资新兴科技。TheStateshouldinvestalargeportionofnationalbudgetininfanttechnology.投资：invest---in---Allocate---to---Dedicate---to---钱：tonsofmoney(口语化)/funds/alargeportionofnationalbudget（2）那些人认为政府应该投资新兴科技。6ThosepeoplebelievethattheStat