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道歉信—技法点拨昌邑市第一中学金利玲什么是道歉信？❀道歉信是指因过失或疏忽做错了事，给别人带来了麻烦或损失，发觉后要立即写信给对方赔礼道歉时写的信件。道歉是一种礼貌，道歉信要写得坦率，诚恳。❀道歉信通常包括三部分内容：1、表示歉意，道歉的原由；2、出现差错的原因，提出弥补措施；3、请求原谅。❀语言要诚挚，解释的理由要真实。好的道歉信不仅会取得对方的谅解，还会增进彼此的感情。写作三步曲•表示歉意•说明具体原因、提出补救办法•再次致歉，希望得到理解。Structures•Para1：简明说明写信目的，为自己的过失表示歉意，希望得到对方的谅解。•Para2：详细说明当时情况，解释原因，语气要诚恳。•Para3：提出补救方法，具体提出自己的想法，希望能弥补过失，消除误会。•Para4：再次表示歉意，愿意为此负责，希望以后不再出现类似不愉快事件。•I’mverysorrythatIcan’tgoonatriptoBeijingwithyounextweekend,whichIhavepromisedyou.I’mwritingtotellyouthereasonforit.•Justnow,mycousin,LiMing,whowentabroadforfurthereducationlastyear,informedmethathewouldreturnthenextSaturdaymorning.Heaskedmetopickhimupattheairportwithhisparents.Asyouknow,wehaven’tseeneachotherforaboutayear,soI’llhavetohelphiminthefirstplace.•Ireallyhopethatyoucanacceptmyapologiesandunderstandme.IwouldappreciateitifyouallowmetofixanothertimetoshowyouaroundsomeplacesofinterestinBeijing.•Wishyouhaveagoodtimethisweekend!未能赴约原因：1.我叔叔从美国回来,2:30时下飞机。然而，我爸爸妈妈没时间去接，因此我不得不去机场接他。Yesterdayafternoon,myunclecamefromAmericaandgotoffat2:30,butmyparentshadnotimetopickhimup,inwhichcaseIhadtomeethimattheairport.Afterthatitwastoolatetomeetyou.ThusImissedourappointment.2.我妹妹生病了，她才四岁，不能照顾自己，而爸爸妈妈又在上班，于是我不得不在家照顾妹妹。①Myyoungersisterhadabadfever.Sheistooyoungtolookafterherself,andmyparentswereatwork.Therefore/Inthatcase,Ihadtostayathometotakecareofher.Thatcausedmeunabletomeetyouasappointed.②Myyoungersisterhadabadfever.Sheistooyoungtolookafterherself,andmyparentswereatwork,inwhichcaseIhadtostayathometotakecareofher.Thatcausedmeunabletomeetyouasappointed.3.Thatisowingtothefactthatmyyoungerbrothersuddenlyfellillandwastakentoahospitalthismorning.Ihavetogothereimmediatelyandtakecareofhim.Astoldbythedoctorincharge,itwilltakearoundfivedaysforhimtorecover.4.ThereisanEnglishSpeechContesttobeheldthisweekend.Ihavejustbeeninformedthatmyteacherfinallychoosesmetoparticipateinitonbehalfofourschool.Thisisanopportunitytobothdisplayandenhancemyabilities,soIamafraidIcannotbepresentattheairport.5.IamindeedverysorrythatImissedthe….Ifeelawfulaboutitandwantyoutoknowwhathappenedthatday.•Isuddenlyfellsickearlythatmorningandmyparentshadtosendmetothehospital.6.Unfortunately,itismuchtomyregretthatIcannotjoinyouandyourfamily,becauseIwillbefullyoccupiedthenforanimportantexamcomingthedayaftertomorrow.Part1开头常用句式1.Iamwritingthislettertoapologizetoyoufor…2.Iwouldliketoexpressmydeepestapologyfornotbeingableto…3.Iamwritingthislettertoapologizetoyouformyfailingto…4.Iamwritingthislettertoexpressmyregret…5.Ifeeldreadfulabout…Part1开头常用句式6.Imustbegyourforgivenessfor…7.Iamverysorrytosaythat…8.Excusemeformynotbeingableto…9.Pleaseacceptmysincereapologyfor…10.Hereismydeepestapologyfor…11.Iamterriblesorry,but…Part2结尾常用句式1.Pleaseallowmetosaysorryagain.2.Willyoupleaseacceptmyapology?3.Iamsorryforanyconveniencecaused.4.Pleaseacceptmyapology.Idohopeyouwillunderstandmeandexcusemeformycarelessness6.Onceagain,Iamsorryforanyinconveniencecaused.7.Pleaseacceptmysincereapologiesforthisunhappyexperience.8.Isincerelyhopethatyouwillbeabletothinkinmypositionandacceptmyapologies.Part3其他常用句式1.WouldyoumindifIchangetheappointmenttime?2.Woulditbeconvenientforyou…?3.Iamreallysorryforthetrouble.4.Itisverykindofyoutoaskusto…But,toourregret,wecannotacceptit.5.IamsorryIcannot…andItrustthatyouwillbeabletounderstand.6.IwanttoletyouknowhowregretfulIamfeelingnow.7.IamsorrythatIwillnotbeableto…dueto…8.Ihopethatthisdoesnotcauseyoutoomuchinconvenience.9.Iwantyoutoknowhowbadlywefeelaboutitandtoassureyouthatitwillnothappenagain.10.Thankyouforbeingpatientwithus.11.Inordertoavoid…happeningagain,Ihave…Part4常用模板模板1：过去没有完成的事情•Iamwritingthislettertoapologizetoyouformyfailingto.•Thereasonisthat.IamsorrythatIcannotfinishintime,butisitpossiblethatImakeupthelossby?Ifso,Iwillputeverythingelseasideto.•Idohopethatyoucanunderstandmysituationandacceptmyapology.模板2：将来不能做的事情•Muchtomyregret/IamterriblysorrythatIamunableto.ItismainlybecauseatthattimeIwillbefulloccupiedbywhichisquiteoutofmyexpectation,andthatconflictswithyour.ThereforeIamforcedtoadjustmyscheduleandcannotmakemypresenceonyour.Isincerelyhopethatyouwillenjoyagoodtime.Bytheway,canwehavedinnertogethersometimenextweek?Ihopetoseeyousoon.•IamreallysorryagainandItrustthatyouwillunderstand.实战演练假如你是新华中学的学生李华，上周在外教Mr.Jackson的口语课上使用手机被老师发现，手机被收走。请用英语给外教写一封道歉信，内容应包括以下要点：1．表示歉意；2．解释上课使用手机的原因；3．提出自己的请求并适当表态。注意：1.可适当添加细节使文章连贯；字数100。2．信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Onepossibleversion•DearMr.Jackson,•I’mreallysorryaboutmyusingthemobilephoneinyourlecturelastweek.Pleaseacceptmyheart-feltapologyforbeingsorudeastudent.•Iknowanywordmightsoundamade-upexcuse.ButIdidnotusethemobilephonefornoreason.Iwastryingtofindapart-timejoblastweekendthatday,Igotajobofferandtheyneededmyfurtherinformationimmediately.Therefore,IhadnootherchoicebuttotrysendingthematextmessageinclassandthatwasexactlywhatIwasdoingwhenyoudiscovered.•Anyway,usingamobilephoneintheclassroomisnotacceptabletoanyteacher.Iswearitwillnothappenagain.ButIdoneedmyphonebacktokeepintouchwithothers.•Willyoubesokindtogiveitbacktome?Thanksamillion!•Bestwishes!•Yourssincere