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写作中怎样使用复杂结构和高级词汇一.复杂结构:1.使用适当的时态2.适当的语态3.使用不定式4.使用过去分词5.使用V.+ing形式6.使用名词性从句7.使用状语从句8.使用定语从句9.使用虚拟语气10.使用强调句,倒装句,感叹句11.使用并列句一、怎样运用复杂结构：1.改变时态Thebellisringingnow.(一般)2.改变语态Peoplesuggestthattheconferencebeputoff.(一般)Theregoesthebell.(高级)Itissuggestedthattheconferencebeputoff.(高级)3.使用不定式4.使用过去分词Heissokindthathecanhelpme.(一般)Heissokindastohelpme.(高级)Shewalkedoutoftheroomandmanystudentsfollowedher.(一般)Followedbymanystudents,she….(高级)Onceitisseen,itcanneverbeforgotten.(一般)Onceseen,itcan….(高级)5.使用v-ing形式Whenhearrivespleasegivemeane-mail.(一般)Iftheweatherpermits,I’llcometomorrow.(一般)Onhisarriving/arrival,pleasegive….(高级)Weatherpermitting,I’llcometomorrow.(高级)Nowourschoolhasthreeteachers.Theyteach48pupils.(一般)NowourSchoolhasthreeteachers,teaching48pupils.(高级)Itdisappointedeverybodythathedidn’tturnup.(一般)Ihappenedtohavemethim.(一般)6.使用名词性从句Thefactthathedidn’tturnupdisappointedeverybody.(高级)IthappenedthatIhadmethim.(高级)Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.(一般)Whatsurprisedhimisthatthegirl….(高级)7.使用状语从句Iwon’tbelievewhathesays.(一般)Ifyoucomebackbeforesixo’clock,youcangoout.(一般)Themealwasverynice.Weallenjoyeditverymuch.(一般)Nomatterwhathesays,Iwon’tbelieve.(高级)Youcangooutonconditionthatyoucomebackbefore….(高级)Themealwassonicethatweall….(高级)8.使用定语从句Thegirlisspokenhighlyof.Hercompositionwaswellwritten.(一般)Thegirlwhosecompositionwaswellwrittenwasspokenhighlyof.(高级)IstudiedChinese,maths,English,physics,chemistryandcomputeratschool.(一般)ThesubjectsIstudiedatschoolincludedChinese,maths,English….(高级)9.使用虚拟语气Theshipdidn’tsinkbecausethereweretheeffortsofthecaptain.(一般)Iwasn’tinvitedtotheparty,soIdidn’tattendit.(一般)IfIhadbeeninvitedtotheparty,Iwouldhaveattendedit.(高级)Butfortheeffortsofthecaptain,theshipwouldhavesunk.(高级)10.使用强调句、倒装句、感叹句Regularradiobroadcastsbeganin1920.(一般)Itwasnotuntil1920thatregularradio….(高级)WeakasIam,I’llmaketheeffort.(高级)ThoughI’mweak,Iwillmaketheeffort.(一般)Howgladweweretoseethecropsand...!(高级)Weweregladtoseethecropsandvegetablesgrowingverywell.(一般)11.使用并列句Ifyougothroughthegate,you’llfindtheentrancetoBearCountry.(一般)Gothroughthegate,andyou’llfind….(高级)Igotuplatethismorning,otherwiseIcouldhavecaughttheearlybus.(高级)Igotuplatethismorning.Ididn’tcatchtheearlybus.(一般)Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedhefelt.(高级)Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.(一般)四、怎样运用高级词汇：Asaresult,theplanwasafailure.(一般)ShewenttoAustriainordertostudymusic.(一般)Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.(一般)Theplanturnedouttobeafailure.(高级)ShewenttoAustriaforthepurposeofstudyingmusic.(高级)Thankstothegoodweather,ourjourney….(高级)Atthenewsofherdeath,hewent….(高级)Shehastroubleinpronouncingtheword.(高级)Whoseturnisittobeondutytoday?(高级)Whenheheardshehaddied,hewentpalewithsorrow.(一般)Shecan’tcorrectlypronouncetheword.(一般)Whowillbeondutytoday?(一般)怎样运用高级词汇：Shedoesn’tlikesports.Shecaresnothingforsports.Wehadtogohome.Whatwehadtodowasgohome.五、常见语法错误分析：1.句子缺谓语1)Thebuildinglikeamatchbox.2)Hetoldmethatallmyclassmatessittingintheclassroom.1)Aworkerofthefarmleadustothefield.2)AllthestudentslikebooksthatwaswrittenbyLuXun.2.主谓不一致，尤其是单数第三人称作主语时，谓语的单复数形式出现错误。3.时态错误4.词性混用1)Whenhecameback,hefoundthathiswifehasgonetobed.2)Whatareyoudoingthistimeyesterday?1)SheenjoysstudyEnglish.2)Ifanyoneagainsttheplan,pleaseletmeknow.5.介词误用6.冠词误用1)Inmysurprise,hehasgotthefirstprize.2)Hecameheretoattendthemeetingbyanewcar.3)Don’treadunderthesun.1)WeelectedLiHuathemonitoroftheClassFive.2)Onceuponatime,therewasanone-eyedlion.7.名词的数混淆8.动词用法错误1)ItisraretoseesuchaniceweatherinBeijing.1)Whereareyoucomefrom?2)WhenIarrivedHongKong,mymotherwastherewaitingforme.3)Hedidn’tnoticetheteachertocomeintotheclassroom.4)Theaccidentwashappenedin1999.9.习惯用法错误1)Theactorinthismovieisverybeautiful.2)IandMyparentswereworkinginthefieldsatthattime.3)Thereasonisbecausehedoesnotknowwhattodonext.六、学会使用恰当的关联词：1.表示平行、对等或选择关系and，both…and,aswellas,togetherwith,neither…nor,also,notonly…butalso,either…or,aswell.2.表示转折关系but,yet,however,nevertheless(然而),inspiteof,although,otherwise,while,afterall.3.表示对比关系4.表示因果关系onthecontrary,insteadof,ononehand…ontheotherhand,justlike,unlike,inthesameway,atthesametimeso,for,therefore,asaresult(of),because,owingto,dueto,thanksto,onaccount(理由)of.5.表示时间、顺序关系6.表示递进、强调关系shortlyafterwards,first,second…,then,next,finally,foronething,foranother,intheend,eventually(最后,终于)besides,furthermore(此外),what’smore,inaddition,moreover(而且),worsestill,tomakemattersworse,indeed,certainly,surely,aboveall7.表示解释、说明关系8.表示结论namely(也就是),actually,suchas,forexample,forinstance,thatistosay,inotherwords,andsoon,totellyouthetruth,accordingtothisinshort,inbrief,inaword,ingeneral,asyouknow,asfarasIknow,onthewhole,inconclusion,atlast,finally七、背诵一些题材的常识性语句：通知：开头语:结束语:Attention,please.MayIhaveyourattention,please?Ihaveanannouncementtomake.Don’tforgetthetimeandtheaddress.I’msureyouwillhavealotoffun.That’sall,thankyou.欢迎词：开头语:结束语:Welcometo…Nowletmetellyousomethingabout…I’mgoingtogiveyouadetaileddescriptionof…Letmeshowyouaround…I’msureyou’llhaveagoodtrip.That’sall,thankyou.写信：开头语:结束语:I’mgladtohearfromyou.I’mwritingtotellyouso