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M8UWriting:Anexpectationformyfutureschoollife3(Revision)Warm-upGettoknowSallythroughpicturesbuildingsgardenplaygrounddininghallcampus(校园)coursesrelationsactivitieslibrary,swimmingpool...interesting,colorful…classmates,teachers…surftheInternet,playchessWhatwillyourhighschoollifebelike?1.Therewillbealargelibraryinmyfutureschool.2.Iwilllistentomusicinmysparetime.3.Theywillgetalongwellwithme.Therewillbeabiglibraryinmyfutureschool.Icanreadmyfavoritebooksthere.Therewillalsobealargeswimmingpool.Icangoswimmingwithmyclassmates.CourseswillbeinterestingandcolorfulandIcandodifferentthings,suchassurftheInternet,playchessandsoon.Bytheway,Iwillgetalongwellwithmyclassmatesandteachers.Ilovemyfutureschoollife!ApossibleversionTherewillbeTherewillbeIcanIcanIcanspellingmistakessimilarstructuressimplesentencesfewlinkingwordsGood?Howtowriteabettercomposition?3.(连)Connectthesentences2.(列)Listtheoutline4.(润)PolishthearticleAnexpectationformyfutureschoollife5.(检)Checkthemistakes1.(审)Analyzetheinformation三年快乐而充实的初中生活快要结束了，你将进入高中（高职）学习。展望未来，你对高中（高职）生活充满期待。请以“Iexpectmyfutureschoollife”为题，写一篇80-100词左右的短文。文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。1.(审)AnalyzetheinformationCampus(校园)beautiful，thedining-hall,thelibrary,theplayground...Relationsgetalongwellwith...Coursesinteresting,colorful..Activitiesinmysparetime,surftheInternet...Yourideamakeprogress...IexpectmyfutureschoollifeIwillstudyinaseniorhighschoolsoon.Everythingwillbenewtome.____________________________________________________010302outlineIwillstudyinaseniorhighschoolsoon.Everythingwillbenewtome.ThedescriptionofmyfutureschoollifeYourexpectationforthefuture2.(列)ListtheoutlineBeginning:Body:campus,relationscourses,activitiesEnding:123Strategies(策略)Advancedwordsandphrases(高级词汇短语)Abundantsentencepatterns(丰富的句式)4.(润)PolishthearticleProperlinkingwords(恰当的连接词)Phrasescomefirst(短语优先)Eg.Ithinkhavingalargelibrarywillbeimportantforus.beofgreatimportanceinmysparetime,afterclass,togetusefulinformation,withthehelpof,luckily,…Abundantsentencepatterns(丰富的句式)合二为一有头脑巧用谚语多一招会用with水平高主动不如被动巧陈述不如倒装妙351241.陈述不如倒装妙！Eg.Onlyifwehavealargelibrary,willweenrichourschoollife.2.主动不如被动巧！Eg.Aswimmingpoolisexpectedtobebuiltinmyseniorhighschool.3.会用with水平高！Abundantsentencepatterns(丰富的句式)Eg.Withmanyflowersplanted,ourschoolwilltakeanewlook.4.合二为一有头脑！Abundantsentencepatterns(丰富的句式)Eg.Iwillgetalongwellwithmyclassmatesandmakenewfriends,whosharethesameinterestswithme.5.巧用谚语多一招！Eg.Asasayinggoes,“Lifeliesinmovement.”soIhopetherewillbealargegyminmyfutureschool.Let’swrite三年快乐而充实的初中生活快要结束了，你将进入高中（高职）学习。展望未来，你对高中（高职）生活充满期待。请以“Iexpectmyfutureschoollife”为题，写一篇80-100词左右的短文。文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。Campus(校园)beautiful，thedining-hall,thelibrary,theplayground...Relationsgetalongwellwith...Coursesinteresting,colorful..Activitiesinmysparetime,surftheInternet...Yourideamakeprogress...IexpectmyfutureschoollifeIwillstudyinaseniorhighschoolsoon.Everythingwillbenewtome.____________________________________________________Let’sbeajudge(裁判)Standard(标准)Points(分值)1.AbundantContents(内容充实，覆盖要点)72.CorrectGrammar(用词适切，语法正确)73.ClearLogic(结构紧凑，意思连贯)44.BeautifulHandwriting(书写规范，词数适宜)2Total_________Abettervision:①Iwillstudyinahighschoolsoon.Everythingwillbenewtome.②Inatotally/completelynewlearningenvironment,I’llbeveryexcitedandcurious(好奇的).Iwillattachmyattentiontothebeautifulcampuswithalargeandneatdininghallandagrassyplayground.Whatmakesmereallythrilled(极度激动的)isthattherewillbeabrightlibrarywhereIcanacquire(获得)someknowledge.Intheschool,Iwillbeongoodtermswith(与…相处融洽)myclassmatesandmakesomenewfriendswhosharethesameinterestswithme.Moreover,interestingandcolorfulcourseswillalsobeofferedsothatIwillgetagoodopportunity(机会)todevelopotherskills.Inmysparetime,Icanalsoparticipatein(参加)someafter-schoolactivities,suchassurfingtheInternetandsoon.③Fruitful(硕果累累的)juniorhighschoollifeiscomingtoanendandmuchmorejoyfulseniorhighschoollifewillsoonunfold(铺开)infrontofme.IbelieveIwillmakegreatprogressandembraceabrightfuture.Individualwork:Correctthemistakesinyourwritingandthenwriteitagain.Groupwork:Judgeothers'writingsandhelpthemimprovetheirwritingsorlearnsomethingwonderfulfromothers’writings.HomeworkWhatwillyourfuturelifebelike?2019Thankyou!