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Thebeautyofwriting“Readingmakesafullman;conferenceareadyman;andwritingan______man.”--FrancisBaconexact阅读使人充实，交谈使人机智，写作使人精确。--培根阅卷老师喜欢的句子•、•同位语结构、with复合结构，使文章简洁、通顺；尽量使用动词短语和词组、定语从句等复合句，修辞润色文章。使用分词短语(非谓语动词）Non-finiteVerbsinwriting非谓语动词在写作中的应用非谓语动词是指在句子中不是谓语的动词，主要包括不定式、动名词和分词（现在分词和过去分词），即动词的非谓语形式。非谓语动词除了不能独立作谓语外，可以承担句子的其他成分非谓语动词也是动词的一种，他们有着动词的其他特点，可以充当主语、宾语、状语等。非谓语动词与谓语动词是相对的概念1.Seeingfromthetopofmountain,thecityisbeautiful.2.Inmyopinion,climbmountainisanenjoyablething.3.—Whichteamisgoodatcooking?—Ateamcalleditselfthesuppercook.Correction写作中非谓语动词常见的错误Seenclimbingcalling1.Whensheheardthenews,sheburstintocrying._________thenews,sheburstintocrying.2.AustraliaislocatedonthewestcoastofthePacific.AustraliaisthelargestcountryinOceania.Australia，__________________thewestcoastofthePacific，isthelargestcountryinOceania.用非谓语结构改写句子Hearinglocatedon3.ThoughIadmitwhathehassaid,Istilldoubthedidn’tdohisbest.__________________________________________,Istilldoubthedidn’tdohisbest.4.BecauseImissedthebus,Iwenttoschoollate.__________________________,Iwenttoschoollate.AdmittingwhathehassaidMissingthebus5.WhenIwaswalkinginthestreet,Isawhim._____________inthestreet,Isawhim.6.Ifyouworkhard,________________hard,youwillsucceed.WalkingWorking7.Althoughhehadfailedmanytimes,hedidn’tloseheart.________________manytimes,hedidn’tloseheart.8.Asshewasscoldedbytheteacher,thegirlsattherewithoutliftingherhead._____________________,thegirlsattherewithoutliftingherhead.HavingfailedScoldedbytheteacher•例文：•Gettingbackwhatyouhavelostwouldbeanunforgettableexperience.LastMonday,Ilostmyexpensivecellphone,onwhichmynamewasinscribed(刻).Fortunately,itwasreturned.•Thatmorning,Irushedoutofmyhouseandjumpedintoataxi,forIwouldbelateforthefinalexamination.Onarrivingatschool,Iheadedtomyclassroomquickly,notnoticingthatIhadleftmycellphoneonthebackseat.EnjoyoneessayplaymusicmakehappyPlayingmusicmakesthemhappy.makeasentenceusingnonfiniteverbs___________bythereporterfromCCTV,themansaidhewasveryhappy.(interview)InterviewedFinishthesentenceusingnonfiniteverbse.g.Havingfinishedmyhomework,Iwentontohelpmyparents.listento/burstoutlaughingHavinglistenedtothesongcalled“Gangnamstyle”,weburstoutlaughing.Followtheexampleandmakeasentence.3.Moyanstoodthereandwassurroundedbymanyreporters.Moyanstoodtheresurroundedbymanyreporters.用非谓语结构改写和美化句子←Combinethefollowingsentences1.Assoonastheyarrivedattheschool.Theyfeltthehappyatmosphere.Arrivingattheschool,theyfeltthehappyatmosphere.2.IfIamgivenanotherchance.Iwillsucceed.Givenanotherchance,Iwillsucceed.3.HewantstoimprovehisEnglish(目的).Hestudiesharder.ToimprovehisEnglish,hestudiesharder.4.Whenhelefttheclassroom,hedidn’tsaygoodbyetome.5.Becauseheisill,hecan’tattendthemeeting.Whenleavingtheclassroom,hedidn’tsaygoodbyetome.Beingill,hecan’tattendthemeeting.Being+n./adj.作原因状语6.Thepolicemansawthethiefwhowasstealingabike.7.Theboyswhoswamintheriverwereindanger.Thepolicemansawthethiefstealingabike.Theboysswimmingintheriverwereindanger8.Becausehehadn’tseenthefilmbefore,hewenttothecinema.Nothavingseenthefilmbefore,hewenttothecinema.用非谓语结构改写和美化句子•1.因为在这国家没有朋友，她觉得要想找到工作是不可能的。用连词becauseBecauseshehasnofriendinthecountry,shefounditimpossibletofindajob.用非谓语结构Havingnofriendinthecountry,shefounditimpossibletofindajob.2.这本用简易英语写成的书很容易读懂用定语从句Thebook,iseasytounderstand.用非谓语结构Thebook,iseasytounderstand用非谓语结构改写和美化句子whichwaswritteninsimpleEnglish,writteninsimpleEnglish,3.他们是来自于几个国家的游客。用定语从句Theyarevisitorswhocomefromseveralcountries.用非谓语结构Theyarevisitorscomingfromseveralcountries.用非谓语结构改写和美化句子4.发现他好朋友沮丧，他竭尽所能让他朋友开心。用并列句Hefoundhisbestfriendfrustratedandhedideverythinghecouldtomakehimhappy.用非谓语结构Findinghisbestfriendfrustrated,hedideverythinghecouldtomakehimhappy.用非谓语结构改写和美化句子①Itishightimewetookpartinsomeactivities.②Wewanttomakeourselvesmorehealthy.Itishightimewetookpartinsomeactivitiestomakeourselvesmorehealthy.4.用非谓语结构合并下列句子用非谓语结构改写和美化句子Nowadays,somestudentsoftencheatinexams.Itispopularamongstudentswhoarelazyanddon’tworkhardattheirlessons.Theycheatfortheywanttogethighermarkssothattheycanbepraisedorevenadmired.Also,somestudentswhoworkhardattheirlessonswillcheatinexamsbecausetheyareafraidoffailinginexams.用非谓语结构美化文章•Nowadays,somestudentsoftencheatinexams.Itispopularamongstudentswhoarelazyanddon’tworkhardattheirlessons.•Nowadays,cheatinginexamsispopularamongstudentswhoarelazyanddon’tworkhardattheirlessons.用非谓语结构美化文章↓Theycheatfortheywanttogethighermarkssothattheycanbepraisedorevenadmired.Theycheattogethighermarkssothattheycanbepraisedorevenadmired.用非谓语结构美化文章↓Also,somestudentswhoworkhardattheirlessonswillcheatinexamsbecausetheyareafraidoffailinginexams.Beingafraidoffailinginexams,somestudentswhoworkhardattheirlessonswillalsocheatinexams.用非谓语结构美化文章↓Nowadays,cheatinginexamsispopularamongstudentswhoarelazyanddon’tworkhardattheirlessons.Theycheattogethighermarkssothattheycanbepraisedorevenadmired.Beingafraidoffailinginexams,somestudentswhoworkhardattheirlessonswillalsocheatinexams.用非谓语结构美化后的文章建议有足够的睡眠是必要的。原因1.它能有效的改善我们的课堂学习。2.保持健康的身体是进一步学习及工作的基础。要求：1.用2-3句话表达表格内容2.2-3句话要有连贯性necessary