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四级写作考前冲刺周思成Jun3么么哒BasicTips1.开门红，很重要BasicTips1.开门红，很重要提前半小时到考场，熟悉周边，解决可能意外字数：150-180数行数2.多读Directions,莫会错意Youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefdescriptionofthepictureandthenexpressyourviewsontheimportanceofdoingsmallthingsbeforeundertakingsomethingbig.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.Directions:You'reallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledNothingSucceedswithoutaStrongWillbycommentingonthehumoroussaying,Quittingsmokingistheeasiestthingintheworld.I’vedoneithundredsoftime.”You’dwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.分清：哪里是主题，哪里是要件；若有不会词：联系语境和尝试，大胆猜测；要件是展开主题的一部分，不能少，但也不能是全部！格式传统式：空两格，段间不空行高大上：顶格写，段间空一行标题若书写处上方有粗黑体印刷标题，则无需再写；若无：可把Directions中要求你描述图表后的句子当成标题。YoushouldstartyouressaywithabriefaccountoftheimpactoftheInternetonthewaypeoplecommunicateandthenexplainwhetherelectroniccommunicationcanreplaceface-to-facecontact.最可能考的题型：图画作文！图画作文：三段1.描述图表2.说主旨的原因分析3.重述主旨/解决方案A.描述图画方法一：若题目中说只让你描述图画的，则直白描述图画加引入中心Youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefdescriptionofthepictureandthenexpressyourviewsontheimportanceofdoingsmallthingsbeforeundertakingsomethingbig.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.第一句：如图所示+图中的场景、大体事件Asisdepictedinthecartoon,+主体在干嘛（+时间、地点，若有的话）depict：vt.描绘Asisdepictedinthecartoon,afatherandhissonarehavingadialogue.可现在、可过去，但是要一致。Asisdepictedinthecartoon,ateacheristeachingherpupilstosolvesomefundamentalmathproblems.注意人称，不要变性！第二句：具体对话内容or动作基础弱保底形：Aasks/says:“。。。”Then,Breplies：“。。。”Adoubts：“。。。”Then,Bseems***/does***。可以照搬图中对话原文或略做改动。要分清是谁问、是谁答Thesonasks：“Dad,…….waste.”Then,hisfatherreplies：“Ifyou…anything!”略作提升：加点修饰（形容词或副词）Thesonsaysgloomily：“…”Then,hisfatherrepliespatiently:“…”Onestudentdoubts:”…”.Then,theteacherseemsratherembarrassed.高手版完全改写+间接引语Aexpressesseriousconcernsabout/for…ThenBsmiles/looksembarrassed,(andrepliesAbytellinghim/herto….)Thelittleboyexpressesseriousconcernsaboutthewaypeopledisposeofthenuclearwaste.Thenhisfathersmilesandreplieshimbytellinghimtodosomesmallthingsfirst,suchascleaningthedustbin.第三句话中心文章想要呼吁的事情or我们忽略了的重要事情Apparently,thecartoonistaimstodeliverthemessasgethat+题目拓展成一句话Apparently,thecartoonistaimstodeliverthemessasgethatinordertoaccomplishbigtasksinthefuture,wearesupposedtostartwithsmallmatters.好的提倡和呼吁为主题，都可以用：inorderto….wearesupposedto…我们忽略了重要的事情Apparently,thecartoonistaimstorevealthefactthat主体hasbeenneglectedbynumerouspeople.Apparently,thecartoonistaimstorevealthefactthatlearningbasicskillsandknowledgehasbeenneglectedbynumerouspeople.方法二：若题目中让你描述一个现象（而非直接说描述图画），则主题的改写引入+一两句话描写图画+中心YoushouldstartyouressaywithabriefaccountoftheimpactoftheInternetonthewaypeoplecommunicateandthenexplainwhetherelectroniccommunicationcanreplaceface-to-facecontact.ItisundeniablethateveryareainourlifehasbeenmagicallychangedbytheInternet,especiallythewaywecommunicate.Itisundeniablethat+现实一般就虚幻地写我们的生活因为什么而改变了、便利了云云。第二句话描述图表大同小异：主体在干吗or说的话or反应Asisdepictedinthecartoon,amanandhiswifearetalkingwiththeirsonviaacomputer,whojustlivesupstairs.宾语若有特点，可以用定语从句。定语从句要注意主谓一致！第三句话跟第一种写法相似Apparently,thecartoonistaimstorevealthefactthattheface-to-facecommunicationhasbeenneglectedbynumerouspeopleduetothepoweroftheInternet.第二段主题展开段方法一：关于图画的结论+两、三个原因如：中心句：互联网能/不能取代面对面交流。原因一：互联网无法传递真正的感情和想法，面对面交流更真实。原因二：人是社会的动物，我们要通过直接的、互动的交流获得知识、关心和进步。超级重要提示：如果一段最后一句已经是结论，二段第一句话则是对它的改写（换词、说法）如一段最后：Apparently,thecartoonistaimstodeliverthemessasgethatinordertoaccomplishbigtasksinthefuture,wearesupposedtostartwithsmallmatters.二段开头：Doingsmallthingsisofgreatsignificanceforfuturebigandmoredifficultmissions.也可以是万能开头：Therearetwo/threemajorreasonswhichcansupportthisstatement.Tobeginwith,Moreover,原因的思考方式：从个人到社会从物质到精神一个事物的双方基本句型思路1.事实/推理。Therefore，分结论。2.分结论because原因3.If假设，will该假设的结果4.事实或结论，which+推理或可能的结果5.Although题中那样也有好/坏，可事实是我的看法更好。TheInternetwillneverreplacetheface-to-facecommunication.Firstly,wecannotcatchthetruefeelingsofpeoplethroughthenetbecausewhatweseemightbetheicywords.Moreover,notallofourfriendsandfamilyareconnectedtothenetanytime.Therefore,thecommunicationviathenetcouldbelesseffectivethantalkingface-to-face.Further,ifsomeonealwaysstaysinfrontofacomputer,ahugewasteofhisorhertimewillbecaused.Besides,althoughtheInternetcanbehelpfulandefficientonsomeoccasions,face-to-facechattingismoreenjoyableandcanhelpfosterandenhancethefriendshipandrelationshipbetweenus.Therearetwo/threemajorreasonswhichcansupportthisstatement.Tobeginwith,everypersonhasratherlimitedknowledgeandabilityinthebeginning.Therefore,theyareunabletodealwithdifficultthingsatthattime.Moreover,doingsmallthingscanhelpustoaccumulateexperienceswhicharenecessaryforustoreducethechancesofmakingmistakes.Further,ifwecanmanagetodosmallthingswell,wewillacquirealotofvirtues,suchaspatienceandpersisitence,whichareextraordinarilyusefulinbothourworkandourlife.方法二：关于图画的结论/中心的改写+随便一个原因或结论+例子Acompellingexampleconcernssb.,who…引出例子的好句子：Icanthinkofseveralexamplesinsupportofthispoint.Forinstance,….事实例子可以包含三句话人事物的原貌——发展——结果和现状前两句话用过去时，最后一句过去、完成时。第一句：人事物最初、小时候、十年前是怎样的。第二句：然后，TA做了一件跟主题有关的事情。第三句：后来/现在，TA变得更好or更坏了。Acompellingexampleconcernsmyself,whousedtobeanover-ambitiousboy.WhenIwaslittle,Idr