2011浙江省英语高考作文高二学生写后讲评

•ManyteenagersliketochatontheInternet.(原因）Technologymakesitpossibleforteenagerstocommunicatewitheachotherwithoutknowingwhomtheyaretalkingto.•(利）Someteenagerschatonlineformakingnewfriendsorgainingknowledgeandinformation.OthersliketosharetheirfeelingswiththeirInternetfriendstorelaxthemselves.•(弊）However,thiswayofcommunicationalsohasdisadvantages.SometeenagersspendtoomuchtimechattingontheInternet,whichcanmakeitdifficulttocompleteothertasks.Sometimesitisdangeroustotalktototalstrangers.•(看法）Inmyopinion,weshouldsetupaspecifictimeforchattingandtrytoavoidgettinghurtbyit.利弊说明段•①Somepeopleareinfavoroftheideaofdoing________（主题）.②Theypointoutthefactthat________（支持的第一个原因）.③Theyalsoarguethat________（支持的另一个原因）.④Theremightbesomeelementoftruthinthesepeople’sbelief.⑤However,otherpeoplestandonadifferentground.⑥Theyconsideritharmfultodo________.⑦Theyfirmlypointoutthat________（反对的理由）.BeawareofyourroleinthewritingprocessPayattentiontoyourtone!Organizeyourcompositionwithproperexpressionsandenrichedcontent.第一段第二段第三段I’mwritingtotellyouabout...信件结构批评：现象及其严重性phenomenon/theserioussituation建议措施ThereasonwhyIamwritingtoyouisthat…写信目的1.提高全体师生意识arouse/raise/improvetheawarenessof…2.禁令或者处罚措施…Abanon…shouldbepassed./Studentswho…shouldbepunished.……强调采取措施的必要性，希望校长能考虑。Iwouldappreciateitifyoutakemysuggestionsintoconsideration/account.Thankyouforyourconsideration.1.Thereisnodoubtthateveryoneiseagertostudyinatidyandcivilizedschool.2.Whathasannoyedmerecentlyisthatsomestudentsscribbleandlitterhereandthere.Thesituationbecomesincreasinglyseriousandcannotbeignored.3.Atpresent,I’mconsciousofsomebadbehaviourinourschool.6.Thereisagrowingtendencythatsomestudentsliketoscribbleandlitteratwill,whichisboundtoharmoursurroundings.8.Itwouldmakesensetomakerulestobanstudentsfromlitteringandscribbling.9.Itishightimethatwerecognizedthesignificanceofkeepingourschoolneatandclean.10.Onlywhenwearousetheawarenesscanwestudyandliveinharmonyandcontributetoabettercampus.June8,2011DearMr.Headmaster,I’mLiYue,astudentfromClass1,SeniorⅡ.(目的）I’mwritingtodrawyourattentiontosomeimproperbehaviouramongusstudents:litteringandscribbling.（批评）Itmakesourschooldirtyandunpleasant,anddoesharmtotheimageofourschool.IalwaysfeelashamedwheneverIseethis.Itisclearlynotappropriateforastudenttolitterandscribbleabout.（建议）Iwonderiftheschoolcouldplacemoredustbinsaroundandsetupspecificrulesagainstsuchbehaviour.Atthesametime,studentsshouldbeencouragedtodevelopgoodhabitsandbetterbehavethemselves.Ibelievethat,withthejointeffortsofbothteachersandstudents,ourschoolwillbecomeamoreenjoyableplaceinthenearfuture.Thankyouforyourconsideration.Yoursfaithfully,LiYue•2011年高考英语作文（全国卷）•假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心(LearningCenter)的•帮助。根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：•1．本人简介；•2．求助内容：•3．约定时间；•4．你的联系方式(Email：[e-mail]；Phone：[phone])。•DearSir/Madam,•I’mLiHua,aChinesestudenttakingsummercoursesinyouruniversity.I’mwritingtoaskforhelp.Icameherelastmonthandfoundmycoursesinteresting.ButIhavesomedifficultieswithnote-takingandIhavenoideaofhowtousethelibrary.IwastoldtheLearningCenterprovideshelpforstudentsandI’manxioustogethelpfromyou.IhavenoclassonTuesdaymorningsandFridayafternoons.PleaseletmeknowwhichdayisOKwithyou.Youmayemailorphoneme.Herearemyemailaddressandphonenumber:lihua@1236,cinl12345678.•Lookforwardtoyourreply.•Yours，LiHua•2011年高考英语作文（四川卷）•第二节书面表达（满分35分）•最近，某中学生英文报开设了“After-classActivities”的栏目，请你根据以下提示，为该栏目写一篇英文稿件，并鼓励同学们积极参加课外活动。•1.你校开展课外活动的情况；•2.你参加过的课外活动及给你带来的益处•3.为同学选择课外活动提出建议•4.为学校开展课外活动提出建议•注意：•1.词数100左右；•2.文中不得提及人名、校名及地名‘•3.稿件的开头以为你写好（不计入总词数）•••After-classActivities•Nowadays,after-classactivitiesarebecomingmoreandmorepopularinhighschools.Inourschool,therearevariouskindsofactivities,forexample,artsandsports.Weenjoythemverymuch.Playingfootballandreadingstoriesaremyfavoriteswhichdomelotsofgood.Besidesbuildingmybodyandenrichingmyknowledge,theyalsofreemefromtheheavyworkofstudy.•HereIhavesomesuggestions.Tostudents,you’dbetterchoosetheactivitieswhichinterestyouandsuityou;toschools,theyshouldorganizemoreactivitiesforstudentsandleavestudentsmoretimeforactivitiesbygivingthemlesshomework.•Dearfriends,pleaseactivelytakepartinafter-classactivities,whichwillnotonlymakeyourschoollifecolorful,butalsoimproveyoulearning.•2011年高考英语作文（江西卷）•第二节写作（满分25分）•假设你是星光中学的李华，将参加主题为“Let’sRideBicycles”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括：•1.目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题。•2.骑自行车的益处，如能环保有利健康等。•参考词汇：低碳生活（low-carbonlife）节能(energysaving)•注意：1.词数：120词左右；•2.演讲稿开头和结尾已给出，请将其抄写在答题卡上且该部分不计入总词数。•Goodmorning,everyone,•IamLihuafromXingguangMiddleSchool.Thetopicofmyspeechis“Let’sRideBicycles”.•Goodmorning,everyone,•I'mLiHuafromXingguangMiddleSchool.ThetopicofmyspeechisLet'sRideBicycles.•Asisknowntoall,withtheimprovementofpeople'slivingstandards,carshavebecomeapopularmeansoftransport,bringinggreatconveniencetoourlife.however,theyhavealsocausedsomeproblemssuchasairpollutionandtrafficjams.•Howcanwesolvetheproblemsthen?AsfarasI'mconcerned,ridingbicyclesisagoodsolution.Foronething,bicyclesdon'tneedpetrolandtheyareenergy-saving.Foranother,bicyclesareenvironmentallyfriendlybecausetheywon