【高中英语写作指导】高中英语作文--道歉信解析

ALetterofApology道歉信文体概述（Letterofapology)道歉信是指因过失或疏忽等做错了事，给别人带来了麻烦或损失，发觉后给对方赔礼道歉并请求对方原谅的信件。通常包括以下三部分内容：1.开门见山，表明写信目的，表示歉意。2.说明出现差错的原因，提出弥补措施。3.再次致歉，请求原谅，希望得到理解(语言要诚挚，解释的理由要真实)。常用语块1.因某事向某人道歉____________________2.向……说对不起____________________3.接受我的道歉____________________4.为某事原谅某人____________________5.并非故意做某事_____________________havenointentiontodosth.apologizetosb.forsth./makeanapologytosb.forsth.saysorrytoacceptmyapologyforgivesb.forsth.6.弥补；赔偿_____________________7.赔偿；偿还_____________________8.给你带来不便_____________________9.给你带来许多麻烦_____________________10.更加小心_____________________bemorecarefulmakeupforpayfor/compensateforcauseyouinconveniencecauseyoumuchtrouble11.犯这样愚蠢的错误______________________12.应当受到责备______________________13.承担责任_______________________14.难以接受的后果______________________15.下不为例______________________neverletithappenagainmakesuchastupidmistakebetoblameberesponsiblefor/shoulder/undertaketheresponsibilityanunacceptableresult/consequence写作三步曲Step1：审题养成重视审题的习惯。思考的问题样题分析第几人称？（person）文章的题材是什么？怎样安排信息点的顺序？(order)动作是什么时候发生的？(when)第一人称一封道歉信说理的逻辑性一般现在时93.提出补救办法2.说明具体原因道歉信写作4步走写信的一般要求1.内容要简单对于题中所给的内容：全面对于自己发挥的内容：简单写熟悉的，会写的！2.结构要清晰开头段：中间段：结尾段:3.语言要精彩：4.注意内容之间的连接1.表示歉意总结提升4.再次致歉望理解造句能力+高分套话10Basicstructureandexpressions第一段:简明说明写信目的，为自己的过失表示歉意，希望得到对方的谅解。道歉的表达：1.Ifeelsorryformyfailureto…2.IamawfullysorrythatIcannot…3.Iamverysorryfor4.Iamwritingtoexpressmysincereapologyformy…5.IregrettoinformyouthatIamunableto…6.IfeelguiltyforwhatIhavedonetoyou.pickyouupattheairportattendyourparty.myrudeness/thoughtlessness/badmanners.11第二段：详细说明当时情况，解释原因，语气要诚恳。1.Nowletmeexplainwhathappenedtomethatday.2.Ihadintendedto…3.IamafraidwhatIhavedonehascausedmuchinconveniencetoyou.4.Iamtoblameforthissillymistake.5.Pleaseforgivemeforastupidchoiceofwords.6.Ifeelawfullysorryaboutitandwantyoutoknowwhathappened.12第三段：提出补救方法，具体提出自己的想法，希望能弥补过失，消除误会。1.Inordertoremoveourmisunderstanding,Iwouldliketoinvite..2.Tomakeupformyfault,Iwill……3.Tocompensateforyourloss,Idecideto..4.Iwishyoucouldgivemeachancetomakeupformyfault.5.Ihopethesettlementofthismattercanmeetyourwishes.13第四段：再次表示歉意，愿意为此负责，希望以后不再出现类似不愉快事件。1.Pleaseacceptmymostsincereapologyagain.2.IpromisethatIwillnevermakesuchastupidmistakeagain.3.Iassureyouthatitwillneverhappenagain.4.Isincerelyhopeyoucanunderstandmysituation/thinkinmypositionandacceptmyapologies.5.Onceagain,I'msorryforanyinconveniencecaused/youhavesustained.Step3：写作15道歉信模板一DearBob,Iamtrulysorrythat_________（道歉的原因）.Thereasonisthat_________（介绍的原因）.Onceagain,Iamsorryforanyinconveniencecaused.Hopeyoucanacceptmyapologiesandunderstandmysituation.Yourssincerely,LiHua习作欣赏DearSir/Madam,Iamawfully(很;糟糕地)sorrytotellyouthatIhavelostthebookIborrowfromyourlibrarylastweek.ThenameofthebookisAdventurersinDeserts.Ireadthemeveryeveningandintendtofinishitthenextweek,butunfortunatelyyesterdayuntilIcamebacktomyroom,itwasnowheretobefound.Ipromisetopayforthelostofthebook.IknowmoneycannotcoverthelossandIamblame.IwillgotoyourplaceinThursdayafternoontotalkoverthecompensation(赔偿)forthemissedbook.Iapologizeagainforanyinconveniencesortroublecausedbymycareless.Ipromisethatsuchathingwillneverhappenagain.习作欣赏DearSir/Madam,IamawfullysorrytotellyouthatIhavelostthebookIborrowfromyourlibrarylastweek.ThenameofthebookisAdventurersinDeserts.Ireadthemeveryeveningandintendtofinishitthenextweek,butunfortunatelyyesterdayuntilIcamebacktomyroom,itwasnowheretobefound.Ipromisetopayforthelostofthebook.IknowmoneycannotcoverthelossandIamblame.IwillgotoyourplaceinThursdayafternoontotalkoverthecompensation(赔偿)forthemissedbook.Iapologizeagainforanyinconveniencesortroublecausedbymycareless.Ipromisethatsuchathingwillneverhappenagain.第一段：开门见山道歉并解释失误的过程第二段：承诺弥补或赔偿及措施第三段：再次表示歉意并承诺不再犯类似错误习作修改(做短文改错)DearSir/Madam,IamawfullysorrytotellyouthatIhavelostthebookIborrowfromyourlibrarylastweek.ThenameofthebookisAdventurersinDeserts.Ireadthemeveryeveningandintendtofinishitthenextweek,butunfortunatelyyesterdayuntilIcamebacktomyroom,itwasnowheretobefound.Ipromisetopayforthelostofthebook.borroweditwhenlossIknowmoneycannotcoverthelossandIamblame.IwillgotoyourplaceinThursdayafternoontotalkoverthecompensation(赔偿)forthemissedbook.Iapologizeagainforanyinconveniencesortroublecausedbymycareless.Ipromisethatsuchathingwillneverhappenagain.Yourssincerely,LiMing∧toonmissinginconveniencecarelessness诵读经典范文DearSir/Madam,IamawfullysorrytotellyouthatIhavelostthebookIborrowedfromyourlibrarylastweek.ThenameofthebookisAdventurersinDeserts.Ireaditeveryeveningandintendtofinishitnextweek,butunfortunatelyyesterdaywhenIcamebacktomyroom,itwasnowheretobefound.Ipromisetopayforthelossofthebook.IknowmoneycannotcoverthelossandIamtoblame.IwillgotoyourplaceonThursdayafternoontotalkoverthecompensation(赔偿)forthemissingbook.Iapologizeagainforanyinconvenienceortroublecausedbymycarelessness.Ipromisethatsuchathingwillneverhappenagain.第一段：开门见山道歉并解释失误的过程第二段：承诺弥补或赔偿及措施第三段：再次表示歉意并承诺不再犯类似错误诵读经典范文DearSir/Madam,IamawfullysorrytotellyouthatIhavelostthebookIborrowedfromyourlibrarylastweek.ThenameofthebookisAdventurersinDeserts.Ireaditeveryeveningandin