英语建议信

Aletterofgivingadvice写作攻略1.建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建议和忠告。2建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。3建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。写作步骤首段：表明写作意图。陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语气。主体段落：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。千万注意不要让别人以为你是在投诉，而不是提建议。结尾段：对提出的建议进行总结，要注意有礼貌使读者容易接受。建议信写作的注意事项：a．这类文章一定要符合英语信件的基本格式。b．这类文章的基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。写作语料库：英语建议信的常用词句A．建议信开头常用句式(照应材料,表明写作意图)1．AfterIreadyourletterinthenewspaper,Iamsorrytoknowthat…2．Iamverygladtohearthatyouwantto…3．Iknowyouhavetroublein…afterreadingyourletter4.Iamwritingtoyouforthepurposeof-----5Iamwritingtosharesomeadvicewithyou6Inmypersonalopinion,itwouldbewiseofyoutotakethefollowingaction.在下认为，如果你能采取以下措施，将是一种明智的选择。B.建议信第二段常用句式,给出建议，井然有序。1.first，firstly，secondly…．then，afterthat，intheend．finally．。meanwhile．．．2.Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould-------我想如果你能-----可能会更好建议信结尾常用句式1.Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount.我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。2.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestions/recommendationspractical/useful/helpful.我希望这些建议/意见/看法对你来说实用/有用/有帮助。3.Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.如果这方面有所改善我会非常开心的。书面表达如何写？三个步骤Step1ListthekeypointsStep2MakesentencesStep3.Formapassageandpolish假设你是李华，你的笔友张明来信说他英语学的不大好，请你给他写一封回信，提一些建议，帮助他学好英语。内容提示：1.一定要做好课前预习2.课堂上认真听讲，记好笔记3.课后认真独立完成作业4.每天进行英语听说练习5.加强课外阅读扩大词汇量第一步：列举要点•英语学的不大好YouarenotgoodatEnglishYoudon’tdowellinEnglishYouhavedifficultywithEnglishYouarenotgettingalongwellwithEnglish提一些建议，帮助他学好英语。giveyousomeadviceonEnglish/learningEnglish/howtolearnEnglishIwillgiveyousomesuggestionswhichIthinkmaybehelpfultoyou.Herearemysuggestions/tipson….做好课前预习previewPrepare/makepreparationsforLookthrough课堂上认真听讲ListentotheteachercarefullyPayattentiontowhattheteachersayscarefully记好笔记Set/writedownMake/takenotes课后认真独立完成作业每天进行英语听说练习Finishyourhomeworkbyyourself/onyourown/don’tcopyPractiselisteningandspeakingeveryday加强课外阅读扩大词汇量Enrich/enlargeyourvocabulary.•注意衔接词使用:•表先后次序：•First,second,third….Finally•Firstly,secondly，…eventually•tobeginwith/tostartwith,atlast•递进关系：furthermore；moreover；notonly...butalso...；not...but...；,besides；inotherwords；ontheonehand...，ontheotherhand...；meanwhile；atthesametime；点睛之笔：•Nothingisimpossibletoawillingheart!•Practicemakesperfect•Nevergiveup/loseheart•Ifyouhaveanytrouble,pleaseturntomeforhelp.•I’dliketosharemymethodswithyou.•Onlyinthisway,canyoulearnEnglishwell•readnovels,magazinesandeverythingtodowithEnglish改错1.I’llhelpyouinyourEnglish2.MyEnglishisnotverywell.3.Finishitonyourself.4.Therearesomeadvise.5.Don’tafraidofEnglish.6.Setupalearningaim,goaheadtoachieveit.7.Setdowntheknowledgeintheclass8.Youmustlistencarefullyandfollowteacherssaid.9.Onlyifyoureadaboutitaheadofschedule,youwilllearnitbetter.with/OnyourownisbeandwhatadvicewillyouWell---goodOn----by•Iamsureyou’llbesuccess.•Youcansetdownthatyouthinkisimportant.successfulYoucansetdownwhatyouthinkisimportant.allBeautifulsentencesinyoucompositions1.HereissomeusefuladviceforyouabouthowtolearnEnglishwell(class2JirunZe)2.HearingthatyouareintroublewithEnglish,I’dliketogiveyousomeadviceonhowtogetalongwellwithEnglish.(Class1MaguoQin)3.NoonecanfailtonoticethefactthatlisteningandreadingareplayinganimportantroleinlearningEnglish.(Class1HanXu)4.IwillgiveyousomenecessaryadvicewhichcanimproveyourEnglish.(Class7XieShuang)5.Noonecandenythefactthatitisimportanttolistentotheteachercarefully.(Cass7LiuxinYan)6.Onlyintheseways,canyouhaveagoodcommandofEnglish.如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象整体三部分1.Heading点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性2.Body中心记述部分；层次分明3.Ending小结；呼应主题小试身手•你的朋友Mary为了迎接高考努力学习，进来冰岛了。请你以李华的名义给她写一封信，就健康和学习方面提些建议。•词数：100