专四写作-如何开篇与结尾

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Waystobeginanessay1..背景介绍法•TEM4的命题特征之一是给出一小段的背景介绍。这段介绍自然不可以原封不动地照抄在答题纸上,但若对此进行加工改写,也不失为一个不错的开头。如2002年命题部分的背景介绍:修改命题背景介绍的语言•Directions:Nowadayspeoplearebecomingincreasinglyawareoftheimportanceofhealth.Andtheyhavedifferentwaystostayhealthy.Forexample,someexerciseeveryday;otherstrytokeepabalanceddiet.Whatdoyouthinkisthebestwaytostayhealthy?•Example:•Beginning:Today,withtheimprovementoflivingstandard,peopleattachmoreandmoreimportancetohealth.Theyaretryingtofindvariouswaystokeephealthy.Somedophysicalexerciseseveryday,butotherspreferkeepingabalanceddiet.AsfarasIamconcerned,doingphysicalexercisesisabetterchoicetostayhealthy.•考生对命题背景介绍的语言稍加修改,原义维持不变,最后一句提出自己的观点。2005•Directions:TheStudentsUnionofyouruniversityisplanningtoholdanartsfestivalnextsemester,andtheyareinvitingstudentstocontributetheirideasandsuggestionsastohowitshouldbeorganizedorwhatshouldbeincluded.•Beginning:I'mexcitedthatourschoolwillholdanartsfestival.Ibelieveitwillbetoallthestudents'likingasitcandefinitelymakeourdulllivesmorecolourful.Mysuggestiontotheartfestivalistoholdapaintingcompetition.2.先抑后扬法•顾名思义,抑扬是对立的,文章的开篇也会提出两种对立的观点。先抑即提出反方的观点,做出肯定的评价,后扬即笔锋一转,回到自己的观点上。如2004年话题:WillPhonesKillLetterWriting?•Nowadaysyoungpeopletendtophonemoreoftenthanwritetoeachother.So,somesaythatphoneswillkillletterwriting.Thoughphonesaremoreconvenientthanletterwriting,inmyopinion,phoneswillnotkillletterwriting.2007:IsItWisetoMakeFriendsOnline?•AwonderfulWorldappearsbeforeyouwhenyouclickthemouseonInternet.Thebenefitsofithaveobviouslymadeourdailylifemorecolorful,amazingandexciting.Thereisalsothefactthatmillionsofyoungpeoplehavemadefriendsonline.However,inmyview,it'sbetterandwisertomakefriendsinreallife.3.引经据典法•引用一些谚语、格言、名人名言能有力地充实作者的观点。如2001年话题:TravelBroadenstheMind。•AsaChineseoldgoes,travelingtenthousandmilesandreadingtenthousandbooksisthetopidealforpeople.Traveldoesbroadenourmind.Itenablesustoappreciatebeautifulscenery,valuethecultureandcustomsofapeopleandlearnthehistory.•TheBestWaytoStayHealthy•Asapopularsayinggoes,“Healthisbetterthanwealth.Healthnowadayshasbeenattachedgreatimportancetoespeciallyinsuchaquickfixsociety.Astothewaystokeephealthy,somepeoplepreferkeepingabalanceddiet,whileotherspreferdoingphysicalexercise.Ibelievethatdoingphysicalexerciseisthebestwaytokeephealthy.4.提问回答法•这一方法首先以提问的方式提出论题越,然后以回答的方式给自己的观点•TheBestWaytoStayHealthy(2002)•Nowadays,thedesireforgoodhealthisuniversal.Youcannotexaggeratetheimportanceofgoodhealthtoomuch.Whatdoyouthinkisthebestwaytokeephealthy?AsfarasIamconcerned,thebestwaytokeephealthyistodevelopagoodqualityofmind.•TheImportanceofKeepingaGoodMood(2003)•Pressureseemstobeanaturalpartofourdailylifeinthecompetitivesociety.Weliveundergreatpressurefromeducation,careerandfamilies.Howcanwelivehappylives?Ithinkitisimportantthatwekeepagoodmoodunderwhatevercircumstances.5.5.综合运用法WillPhonesKillLetterWriting?Nowadaysaspeopleattachmoreandmoreimportancetothespeed,phonesarebecomingpopular.Itgoeswithoutsayingthatmakingaphonecallisfarmoreconvenientandmuchfasterthanspendinghourswritingalongletter.Butwillphoneskillletterwriting?AsfarasIamconcerned,IthinkletterWritingcanneverbereplaced.有用句型•引入话题句型•A.单一型•Thereisageneraldiscussiontodayontheissueof()..•Thereismuchdiscussionnowadaysastotheproblemof()•Thesedaysweoftenhearabout()....•Thereisagrowingawarenessthat()•Neverinhistoryhastheideaof()beenmoreevident.•Notlongago,someone(didsomething).Thecaseisnotrare.Ithasnowdrawnmuchattentiontotheissueof().•B分歧•Whenitcomesto(),mostpeoplebelievethat(),butotherpeopleas().•Whenaskedabout(),thevastmajorityofpeoplesaythat(),butotherpeopleviewitas().•Whenfacedwith(),quiteafewpeopleclaimthat(),butotherpeoplethinkofitas().•Thereisapubliccontroversynowadaysovertheissueof().Thosewhocriticizeitarguethat(),butpeoplewhofavorit,ontheotherhand,arguethat()陈述观点句型•A直接型•Asfaras()isconcerned,Iholdtheopinionthat().•Formypart,Ithink().•Ifindthestatementof()tobetoonarrow.Inmyopinionitismoreadvisableto...thanto....•B选择型•Onthequestionofwhetheritisbetterto...or...,Ihaveforalongtimeadmittedthat().•Somesay…,butotherstakeanegativeattitude.Inmyopinion,Iarguethat().•Somepeopleholdtheopinionthat...issuperiorto...inmanyways.Others,however,thinkquitedifferentlyonthequestion.Personally,Isidewith....•C同意型•Somepeopleadvocatethat().Myopinionisidenticalwiththeirs.•D反对型•Now,itiscommonlybelievedthat...,butIwonderwhether....Now,itiswidelyheldthat...,butIdoubtwhether....•Althoughsomepeoplebelievethat...,Iwonderwhethertheargumentbearscloseexamination.•Althoughmanypeoplebelievethat...,Idoubtwhethertheargumentbearsmuchanalysis.•Despitethefactthatmostpeople...,Iwouldliketochoose().如何结尾1..总结重申法•作文命题往往要求考生在引论中表明自己的观点。在撰写结尾时可以总结全文并重申引论中的观点。当然重申不代表简单的重复,因此建议用另外的表达方式来道明作者的观点,以避免单调。•MyIdeaofaUniversityArtsFestival.•Beginning:Isuggestthattheartsfestivalbemadeupofvariouspartswhicharethetypicalformsofcollegeactivitiessuchasperformance,forumsandlecturesonart.•End:Inaword,thefestivalshouldbeofgreatcontentsandproperforms.Differentpartsandformsaregoingtomakeitawonderfulartsfestival.•TheBestWaytoStayHealthy•Beginning:Nowadayspeoplea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