搜索
Writingaboutaplace•【写作任务】•巴黎是法国的首都，也是一个梦幻般的城市，每年吸引世界各地大批游客来观光游玩。请根据以下要点以Paris为题用英语写一篇介绍巴黎的短文。•内容要点如下：•1.地理位置：法国北部；•2.人口：大约一千一百万；•3.气候：不太热也不太冷，春秋天最好；•4.基本情况：欧洲第二大城布。法国文化、教育、商业中心。时尚与浪漫之都，很多重大活动在此举行。有悠久的历史和丰富的旅游资源。最著名的有艾菲尔铁塔(theEiffelTower)、凯旋门theTriumphalArch)和圣母院(OldNotreDame)等。•注意：1)不要逐条翻译，但是可增加细节，以使文章连贯、通顺；•2)词数：120左右根据写作提示，进行适当总结和评论。准确掌握表示方位的词或短语注意说明顺序，详略得当，重点突出主要采用一般现在时注意行文的连贯性，要求用适量的过渡词。【范文展示】Paris,averybeautifulcityintheworld,thecapitalofFrance,islocatedinthenorthofFrance.Ithasapopulationofaboutelevenmillion.ItisthesecondlargestcityinEurope.Asfortheweather,itnevergetstoohotortoocold.Anditisatitsbestduringthespringandautumnmonths.Parisistheculture,education,businesscenterofFrance.Itisacityoffashionandromance.Somanyimportanteventshavebeenheldhere.ItiswellknownthatParisisamoderncitywithalonghistoryandrichtourresources.Therearesomanyplacesforpeopletovisit.ThemostfamousaretheEiffelTower,theTriumphalArchandOldNotreDame.Inaword,Parisisreallyagreatandattractivecity.【思路指导】地方介绍类说明文---旅游景点的描写客观介绍景点locationareaclimatehistoryresident/peoplenaturalresourcesbreath-takingscenery1.介绍地理位置（Location）belocatedin…besituatedin…liein…坐落于……脚下/顶部…standsatthefootof/onthetopof…常用词语2.介绍人口（Population）:…hasapopulationof…,（acity）withapopulationof…北京是中国的首都，是一个有1200多万人口的大城市。（用一句话）Beijing,thecapitalofChina,isalargecitywithapopulationofover12,000,000.3.介绍面积（Area）has/coversanareaof…squarekilometers（acity）withanareaof…squarekilometers城镇面积100多平方公里It’satownwithanareaofover100squarekilometers4.介绍历史（History）:…hasalonghistory(of…years)withalonghistory(of…years)历史悠久它是一个具有悠久历史的现代化城市。Itisamoderncitywithalonghistory.5.介绍交通（Transportation）takeabus,atrainoraplaneto…goto…bybus/train/plane坐汽车、火车、飞机到…交通便利…hasconvenienttransportation（acity）withconvenienttransportationbothonlandandwater6.名胜古迹有很多名胜古迹：placesofinterest/historicalspots承德是全国24个历史文化名城之一，也是44个风景名胜之一。ChengdeCityisnotonlyoneofthewell-known24historicalandculturalcitiesbutalsooneofthe44majorscenicspotsinChina.1.…,whichiswell-known/famousforbreath-takingscenery,attractsmillionsofvisitorsfromallovertheworld.2．Youcangoonthe…tourstoenjoythesights,tastethelocalfood,explorethelivelynightlifeandlearnaboutitshistoryandculture.3.…ishometo….Thus，awalkaround…isafeastforthemindaswellastheeye.4．Youaresuretohaveawonderfultimein….5．Fewvisitorsleavethecityfeelingdisappointed.因尝试高级词汇和复杂句型出现的少量错误不扣分。AsfarasIknow,…Itiswell-knowntousallthat…Itis∕was…that…Itis∕was＋adj.∕n.＋for∕ofsb.todosth.so…that…too…to…with＋n.∕prep.∕v-ing.∕v-ed.,……How＋adj.∕adv.＋subject＋be!What＋adj.＋n.＋subject＋be!教师点拨【模板展示】…,averybeautifulcity/countryintheworld,…,islocatedin….Ithasapopulationofabout….Itisthesecondlargest…in….Asfortheweather,it….….Itiswellknownthat…is…withalonghistoryandrich…resources.Therearesomanyplacesforpeopletovisit.Themostfamousare…,…and….Inaword,…isreallyagreatandattractive….Writing:WriteashortpassagetointroducetheWestLakeinHangzhouaccordingtosomekeywordsbelow.HangzhoucapitalofZhejiangProvince；oldcapitalofsixdynasties（六朝古都）；TheWestLake60squarekilometersarea;wellknownbothforitspicturesquelandscape(风景如画)andforculturalheritagewonderfulten-viewsoftheWestLake(西湖十景)WhiteSnakeLegendXuxianandBaiSuzhen;arainydaymetonDuanqiaoBridgeBaiSuzhenborrowedanumbrellafromXuxian,themansheloved•HangzhouisthecapitalofZhejiangprovinceanditspolitical,economicandculturalcenter.•ThecityofHangzhouliesinthesoutheastofChinaandfacestheeastsea.itisfamousforitsbeautifulWestLakewithalonghistory.wheneveryoucometothismoderncityyouwillseemanyparksandsomeplacesofinterestaroundthewestlake.duringtheholidaysorfestivalsorattheweekends,peoplelikeboatingonthewaterorwalkingonthepathsofthewoodsorsittingonthegroundtohaveapicnic.•Whatagoodtimetheyhave!sincethepoliticsofthereformingandopeningwerecarriedoutbythegovernmentofHangzhou,plentyoftallbuildingshavebeensetupandgreatchangeshavetakenplaceinthiscity.•杭州EnlargementWestLake(inHangzhou)西湖是我国著名的旅游胜地，被誉为“人间天堂”。西湖景区由一山（孤山）、两堤（苏堤、白堤）、三岛（阮公墩、湖心亭、小瀛洲）、十景（曲院风荷、平湖秋月、断桥残雪、柳浪闻莺、雷峰夕照、南屏晚钟、花港观鱼、苏堤春晓、双峰插云、三潭印月）构成。西湖的美，在于晴中见潋滟，雨中显空蒙。无论雨雪晴阴，在落霞、烟雾下都能成景；在春花，秋月，夏荷，冬雪中各具美态。•TheWestLakeisafamousfreshwaterlakelocatedinthehistoriccenterofHangzhou,thecapitalofZhejiangprovinceineasternChina.ThelakeisdividedbythecausewaysofSūTí(苏提/蘇堤),BáiTí(白堤),andYánggōngTí(杨公堤/楊公堤).Therearenumeroustemples,pagodas,gardens,andartificialislandswithinthelake.•TheWestLakehasinfluencedpoetsandpaintersthroughouttheagesforitsnaturalbeautyandhistoricalrelics,andithasbeenamongthemostimportantsourcesofinspirationforChinesegardendesigners,asevidencedbytheimpactithadonvariousChineseclassicalgardens.[1]ItwasmadeaUNESCOWorldHeritageSitein2011,andwasdescribedtohaveinfluencedgardendesignintherestofChinaaswellasJapanandKoreaoverthecenturies,andreflectsanidealizedfusionbetweenhumansandnature.••InthefalloftheWestLakeisoneofthematurelandscape.Tenshoreofthesweet-scentedosmanthusfragranceyoureallymakepeopletoandfromthelingering;thelake,thelotusleafastheshylittlegirl,thelowerthehead,wentintohiding,andwaitingforthemtoremindpeopletotakeunderFlanagan'sLotusthen.Atthistime,HuaZhaolightoftheboa