中考英语作文万能模板及万能句型汇总By:Mr.Yu2012.11(一)各档评分标准:2分:条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,且多数为严重错误。5分:基本切题。表达思想不清楚,连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。8分:基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多,有一些是严重错误。11分:切题。表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。14分:切题。表达思想清楚,文字通顺、连贯,基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错。(注:白卷,作文与题目毫不相关,或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想,则给0分,字数不足应酌情扣分。)(二)初中英语写作六要素一、审题要清看到考题后,先不要急于动笔,要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面,确定短文的中心思想,不要匆匆下笔,看懂题意,根据提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。二、要点明确要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点,同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力,把情景中给出的各个要点逐一罗列出。三、列出提纲为写作做好准备。根据文章要点短文的中心思想将主要句型、关键词语记下,形成提纲。四、写顺全文写短文时要做到五个方面:1.避免使用汉语式英语,尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。2.段落分明,层次清晰,文章宁可平平淡淡,也不要漏洞百出。3.多用简单句型,记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或独立主格结构等复杂的句型。4.注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。语态、时态要准确无误;主谓语要一致,主语的人称和数要和谓语一致;注意冠词用法,例如:IttakesTomhalfanhourtogotoschoolbybus.中的an不能写成a;注意拼写,例如:fourteen,forty,ninth等不要写成forteen,fourty,nineth等;注意标点符号和大小写。5.描写人物时,要生动具体,可以选择使用下列词汇,例如:外形:tall,short,fat,thin,strong,weak,pretty等;颜色:red,yellow,blue,white,green,brown,black等;心情:glad,happy,sad,excited,anxious,interested等;情感:love,like,hate,feel,laugh,cry,smile,shout等。6.上下文要连贯。同学们应把写好的句子,根据故事情节,事情发生的先后次序(时间或空间),使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理,使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法:并列关系:and,aswellas,or…;转折关系:but,yet,however…;时间关系:when,while,after,before,then,afterthat…;因果关系:so,there-fore,asaresult…;目的:inorderto,inorderthat,soasto,sothat…;列举:forexample,suchas…;总结性:ingeneral,inall,inaword,generallyspeaking…五、没有病句中考作文时,由于时间紧、内容多,同学们出错在所难免。因此,改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分,根据错误多少来扣分。因此中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手:(1)看字数是否达到要求,看有无遗漏要点。(2)看文体格式是否正确规范。(3)看有无语法或用词上的错误。(4)看单词拼写、字母大小写是否有错,标点符号有无遗漏或用错等等。(5)注意时态、语态、人称是否上下文一致。六、先打草稿考试中,书面表达应做到先打草稿,写完后多读几遍,检查是否有误,然后再抄到试卷上,注意字迹要工整,不涂、不画、不勾不抹,避免不必要的扣分。(三)各种题型的框架一、阐述主题题型要求从一句话或一个主题出发,按照提纲的要求进行论述.1.阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义.2.分析并举例使其更充实.二、解决方法题型要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径1.问题现状2.怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)Inrecentdays,wehavetofaceIproblem-----A,whichisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.First,------------(说明A的现状).Second,---------------(举例进一步说明现状)ConfrontedwithA,weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestocopewiththesituation.Foronething,---------------(解决方法一)。Foranother-------------(解决方法二)。Finally,-------------(解决方法三)。Personally,Ibelievethat-------------(我的解决方法)。Consequently,I’mconfidentthatabrightfutureisawaitingusbecause--------------(带来的好处)。三、说明利弊题型这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状,再对比事物本身的利弊,有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发,最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)1.说明事物现状2.事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)3.你对现状(或前景)的看法NowadaysmanypeoplepreferAbecauseithasasignificantroleinourdailylife.Generally,itsadvantagescanbeseenasfollows.First----------------(A的优点之一)。Besides-------------------(A的优点之二)。Buteverycoinhastwosides.Thenegativeaspectsarealsoapparent.Oneoftheimportantdisadvantagesisthat----------------(A的第一个缺点).Tomakemattersworse,------------------(A的第二个缺点).Throughtheaboveanalysis,Ibelievethatthepositiveaspectsoverweighthenegativeones.Therefore,Iwouldliketo---------------(我的看法).(FromthecomparisonbetweenthesepositiveandnegativeeffectsofA,weshouldtakeitreasonablyanddoitaccordingtothecircumstanceswearein.Onlybythisway,---------------(对前景的预测).)四、议论文的框架(1)不同观点列举型(选择型)Thereisawidespreadconcernovertheissuethat__作文题目_____.Butitiswellknownthattheopinionconcerningthishottopicvariesfrompersontoperson.Amajorityofpeoplethinkthat_观点一________.Intheirviewsthereare2factorscontributingtothisattitudeasfollows:inthefirstplace,___原因一_______.Furthermore,inthesecondplace,___原因二_____.Soitgoeswithoutsayingthat___观点一_____.People,however,differintheiropinionsonthismatter.Somepeopleholdtheideathat___观点二_______.Intheirpointofview,ontheonehand,___原因一_______.Ontheotherhand,____原因二_____.Therefore,thereisnodoubtthat___观点二______.AsfarasIamconcerned,Ifirmlysupporttheviewthat__观点一或二______.Itisnotonlybecause________,butalsobecause_________.Themore_______,themore________.(2)利弊型的议论文Nowadays,thereisawidespreadconcernover(theissuethat)___作文题目______.Infact,therearebothadvantagesanddisadvantagesin__题目议题_____.Generallyspeaking,itiswidelybelievedthereareseveralpositiveaspectsasfollows.Firstly,___优点一______.Andsecondly___优点二_____.JustAsapopularsayinggoes,“everycoinhastwosides”,__讨论议题______isnoexception,andinanotherword,itstillhasnegativeaspects.Tobeginwith,___缺点一______.Inaddition,____缺点二______.Tosumup,weshouldtrytobringtheadvantagesof__讨论议题____intofullplay,andreducethedisadvantagestotheminimumatthesametime.Inthatcase,wewilldefinitelymakeabetteruseofthe____讨论议题___.五、图表作文的框架asisshown/indicated/illustratedbythefigure/percentageinthetable(graph/picture/pie/chart),___作文题目的议题_____hasbeenonrise/decrease(goesup/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadilyrising/decreasingfrom______in_______to______in_____.Fromthesharp/markeddecline/riseinthechart,itgoeswithoutsayingthat________.Thereareatleasttwogoodreasonsaccountingfor______.Ontheonehand,________.Ontheotherhand,_______isduetothefactthat________.Inaddition,________isresponsiblefor_______.Maybetherearesomeotherreasonstoshow________.Butitisgenerallybelievedthattheabovementionedreasonsarecommonlyconvincing.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iholdthepointofviewthat_______.Iamsuremyopinionisbothsoundandwell-grounded.六、现象说明文(新中国成立以来发生了翻天覆地的变化,