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中考英语书面表达训练(大作文）学习目标•1.了解写作的篇章技巧，使文章具有整体性。•2.掌握常用的连接词或句型，令作文更有灵气•3.通过学和练提高写作的技巧和自信。Writing书面表达中考考点要求：1.根据中文提示，写一篇60-80字左右的英文表达。2.内容完整，用词准确，句子通顺、连贯、单词拼写和标点符号正确，书写工整。三、中考评分标准：作文一律按档给分，与错误个数无直接关系。影响作文分数的因素：1题目要求、内容要点；2句子准确、通顺；3层次结构清晰；4拼写、语法等错误；5卷面整洁度；做题步骤：1审题：审清作文体裁（类型）时态、人称等细节；2列提纲（文章结构框架）：分几段，以及每段大体内容；3写作：在提纲的基础上补充要点；4复查：2遍——1遍看查拼写、语法、标点等问题；2遍不出声读查，靠语感检查语句是否通顺、连贯等；5誊抄：不允许做任何的更改。*总之做到三审：体裁、时态、人称；三思：词汇—短语—句式；三查：要点、拼写和语法、连贯。中考作文高分秘诀•1.谋篇布局——写好篇章结构•2.运用连接词——赋予语言灵气谋篇布局——写好篇章结构Middle正文Ending结尾concludingsentence结论句----对全文的总结和概括。supportingsentences支持句----用例子、实事或数据围绕主题开展叙述、讨论topicsentence主题句----说出文中的要点、核心问题Beginning开头作文一般框架：文章分3段：（1）综述：概括性强，最多2-3句话引入主题；（2）正文——主要内容：层次性强，一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开3个方面，每个方面最多2句话；（3）结尾：紧扣主题，2-3句话内结束，尽量升华。Goodbeginningishalfdone.1.仔细审题，提炼和归纳主题句2.开头万能句型：1)....playsanimportantpartinthe...2)Asweallknow,...becomesmoreandmore....3)Aseverybodyknows,...isoneofthemost...in....4)Manypeoplesaythat....ButIdon’tthinkso.5)Iwillneverforgetthe....Makeatopicsentence.Aseverybodyknows,smokingisbadforourhealth.1、SmokingAsweallknow,smokingisabadhabit.Manystudentssaysmokingisfun,butIdon’tthinkso.Makeatopicsentence.Asweallknow,Englishbecomesmoreandmorepopular/important.Manypeoplesayit’sdifficulttolearnEnglish.ButIdon’tthinkso.3.LearningEnglish1.与开头呼应，再次重申自己的观点,注意避免重复句式。2.结尾经典词组、句型：Atlast/Finally...最后Inaword,...总而言之Inshort,...简言之Wehopethat···我们希望Let’stryourbestto....Ibelieveifwecan...,...willbe....Whata...!/How...!结尾画龙点睛，首尾呼应MakeaconcludingsentenceKeepinghealthyHelpingothersLet’stryourbesttokeephealthy.Inshort,it’simportanttohavegoodhabitsandkeephealthy.Ibelieveifwecanhelpothers,theworldwillbemoreandmorebeautiful.MakeaconcludingsentenceBeijingtoprotecttheenvironmentLet’stryourbesttoprotecttheenvironment.Inaword,it’snecessaryforustoprotecttheenvironment.HowbeautifulBeijingis!WhynotcometoBeijingandenjoyyourself?正文：语言简洁，层次分明1.长句短句交叉使用最好。2.基础一般的同学要尽量使用简单句，文章算不上完美，但很实用。3.把握要点，层次清晰。4.注意句子与句子、段与段之间过渡自然，行文连贯，注意适当使用连词，例如：and,so,or,but,become等等。正文：巧用连接词，赋予语言灵气按事情发展的先后或时间顺序1）Firstly,Secondly,Thirdly2）first,then/next,afterthat/next,finally3)soon,atthatmoment,assoonas,fromnowon,atthesametime,not...until,before,after,when,while,during表示并列notonly...butalso,both...and,either...or,neither...nor，on(the)onehand…ontheotherhand表示举例或补充1）forexample2）besides/what’smore/what’sworse表示转折however,but，although,insteadof表示原因thanksto,becauseof，because表示结果asresult(of),so，so...that,such...that,表目的inorderto,sothat表比较thesameas,than,ofall...Whichsentenceisbetter?1.Iplayedfootballontheplayground.Ifelldownandhurtmylegs.2.WhenIwasplayingfootballontheplayground,Ifelldownandhurtmylegs.正文：巧用连接词，赋予语言灵气(good)(better)句式富于变化1.Wearegoodfriends.Weshouldhelpeachother.2.Wearegoodfriendsandweshouldhelpeachother.(good)(better)1.IwasdeeplymovedandIcouldn’tsayaword.2.Iwas_____moved______sayaword.句式富于变化tooto在日常生活中你主动帮助你的父母做家务活吗？请你根据提示用英语写一篇80字左右的短文，描述你平时所做家务以及你对家务的看法。提示：1.扔垃圾2.扫地3.帮助妈妈做饭4.洗衣服5.为花浇水6.饭后洗碗要求：语句通畅，语法正确。不得逐句翻译。谋篇布局——写好篇章结构满分作文（10分）Asweallknow,it’simportanttohelpparentsdohouseworkduringourdailylife.Ioftenhelpthemdohousework.Ithrowtherubbishawayandcleanthefloorinthemorning.Ihelpmymothercooklunch.Aftersupper,Ialwayswashdishes.Ithinkitcanmakemyparentsfeelmoreenjoyableafterwork.Ialwayswashclothesformyfamily.Besides,wateringtheflowersisalsomyduty.Ilikethemverymuchandtakegoodcareofthem.Inaword,themorehouseworkIdo,thehappiermyparentswillbe.（即总括又阐明看法）写作训练生活中充满了爱，有父母的爱，有兄弟姐妹的爱，有朋友的爱，有老师的爱......请以“Love”为话题，简要描述一件发生在你身边的事。要求：1、语言规范，书写工整。2、80个词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）3、文中不要出现真实的人名，校名和地名Lovemeansgiving.Lovemeanspayingattentiontoothers.Lovemeansgivingwarmthtotheoneyoulove.Lovealsomeansunderstanding.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________