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1改写病句串句串句：错误将两个独立的分句串在一起，不用连词、标点，误将两个句子当成一个句子。类型：1。用一个逗号把两个独立的句子连接起来。2。什么标点符号都没有使用。破句破句：是一组词由于缺少主语或动词无法表达完整意思的错句。只是句子的一个从属部分类型：从属词破句，分词、不定式破句，附加细节句，无主破句。1st:修改串句：4ways分成两个句子误Thelocaltireplantshutdownfortheholidayeveryonehadtwoweeksoff.正Thelocaltireplantshutdownfortheholiday.Asaresult,everyonehadtwoweeksoff.误Shedidn’tfeelparticularlywellshewenttobed.正Shedidn’tfeelparticularlywell.Therefore，shewenttobed.误Hetriedmanytimestogiveupsmokinghenevermanagedto.正Hetriedmanytimestogiveupsmoking.However,henevermanagedto.用连词and,but,for,or,nor,so,yet连接两个句子，连词之前加逗号。（误）Don’tteasethedogyoumightgetbitten.（正）Don’tteasethedog,oryoumightgetbitten.用分号连接两个句子1.Hetriedmanytimestogiveupsmoking;however,henevermanagedto.2.Thelocaltireplantshutdownfortheholiday;asaresult,everyonehadtwoweeksoff.用从属连词把一个分句化为从句，修饰或限定主句Afterwewalkedovertothewaterfallslowly,wesatdowntoadmirethebeautyofthefalls.Thereisnoschooltomorrow,sotheywillgoonapicnic.最佳方法修改串句首选逗号加并列连词，用于两句之间有逻辑关系的句子；其次选择分号，用于两句中有表示连接关系的副词或副词词组时或后句是前句的说明时；最后考虑句号，用于两句没有逻辑关系或角度表化等情况。2nd：修改破句：4类类1：从属词破句（误）Smokersclaimtherighttosmokeinpublicplaces.Whilenonsmokersclaimtherighttocleanair.（正）Smokersclaimtherighttosmokeinpublicplaceswhilenonsmokersclaimtherighttocleanair.（误）Examinationsremainasprimitiveaseverbefore.Nomatterhowadvancedourscienceandtechnologyhavebecomeinthismodernsociety.2（正）Examinationsremainasprimitiveaseverbeforenomatterhowadvancedourscienceandtechnologyhavebecomeinthismodernsociety.（误）AfterIarrivedinChicagobybus.Icheckedintoaroom.ThenIwenttoadinnertogetsomethingtoeat.（正）AfterIarrivedinChicagobybus,Icheckedintoaroom,andthenIwenttoadinnertogetsomethingtoeat.（误）Mydaughterlikestomakepaperboats.Whichshefloatsinthetubduringhernightlybath.（正）Mydaughterlikestomakepaperboatswhichshefloatsinthetubduringhernightlybath.（正）Mydaughterlikestomakepaperboats.Shefloatstheminthetubduringhernightlybath.类2：分词和不定式破句修改方法（1）让破句与其前或其后的句子连接起来，使语义完整（2）增添主语，把现在分词改成动词的正确形式；（3）把being改为be的恰当形式；（4）将不定式部分与前面句子连接起来。（误）Startingattheclockonthefarwall.Inervouslybeganmyspeech.Iwasafraidtolookatanyofthepeopleintheroom.（正）Startingattheclockonthefarwall,Inervouslybeganmyspeech.Iwasafraidtolookatanyofthepeopleintheroom.（误）Ispentalmosttwohoursonthephoneyesterday.Tryingtofindagaragetorepairmycar.EventuallyIhadtohaveittowedtoagarageinanothertown.（正）Ispentalmosttwohoursonthephoneyesterday,tryingtofindagaragetorepairmycar.EventuallyIhadtohaveittowedtoagarageinanothertown.（误）Iplanonworkingovertime.Togetthisjobfinished.Otherwise,mybossmaygetangrywith.（正）Iplanonworkingovertimetogetthisjobfinished.Otherwise,mybossmaygetangrywith.类3：增加细节引起的破句especially,specially,forexample,suchas,forinstance,like,also,aswellas,except,but,besides后接n.时,不能单独存在，只能是句子的部分。修改方法：（1）与其前面具有完整意义的句子连接起来；（2）增加主语和谓语动词；（3）改动,使其成为前句的一部分。（误）Myauntlikeswatchingdaytimetelevisionshows.Especiallyoldmoviesandsoapoperas.（正）Myauntlikeswatchingdaytimetelevisionshows,especiallyoldmoviesandsoapoperas.（误）Studentcheatingisstillwidelypracticed.Inspiteofthefactthattheviolatorsgetseverepunishmentoncetheyarecaught.（正）Studentcheatingisstillwidelypracticedinspiteofthefactthattheviolatorsgetseverepunishmentoncetheyarecaught.3（误）Hefailedanumberofcoursesbeforeheearnedhisdegree.Amongthem,English,Economics,andGeneralBiology.（正）AmongthecourseshefailedbeforeheearnedhisdegreewereEnglish,Economics,andGeneralBiology.（误）Cottongrowswellintheircounty.ParticularlyinVanguardCommune.（正）Cottongrowswellintheircounty,particularlyinVanguardCommune.类4：缺少主语的破句改正方法为：a.使破句依附于前面的句子b.增加主语（该主语往往是代词，指代前句中的主语）（误）Theytakeanactivepartinsocialactivities.Onholidays,frequentlydotemporaryjobs.(正）Theytakeanactivepartinsocialactivities,andonholidays,theyfrequentlydotemporaryjobs.（误）Oneexampleofmyfather’sgenerosityisthathevisitssickfriendsinthehospital.Andtakesalongget-wellcardswithafewdollarsfoldedinthem．在慰问卡里塞钱（正）Oneexampleofmyfather’sgenerosityisthathevisitssickfriendsinthehospitalandtakesalongget-wellcardswithafewdollarsfoldedinthe（正）Oneexampleofmyfather’sgenerosityisthathevisitssickfriendsinthehospital.Hetakesalongget-wellcardswithafewdollarsfoldedinthem.（误）Sarahlookedwithadmirationatthestunninglyattractivemodel.Andwonderedhowthemodellookeduponwakingupinthemorning.（正）Sarahlookedwithadmirationatthestunninglyattractivemodelandwonderedhowthemodellookeduponwakingupinthemorning.3rd:错误平行结构（1）词与词间的平行（名词、形容词、副词、动名词、分词以及不定式等）①Aweddinganniversaryisacelebrationoflove,trust,partnership,andtolerance.②Kateisnotonlybeautifulbutalsointelligent.③Tomworkscarefullyanddiligently.④Workingorresting,shealwaysenjoyedherself.⑤Thesoldierpreferredtodieratherthansurrender.（2）词组间的平行：That’sonesmallstepforaman,onegiantleapformankind.Weprefercampingintheopentoplayingfootballinthefield.（3）分句间的平行：Theloveoflibertyistheloveofothers;theloveofpoweristheloveofourselves.Takeyourbooksoutandputthemonthedesk.Hepaidmoreattentiontowhatheatethantowhathewore.（4）句子间的平行：Militarily,GreatBritainwasshockinglyweakin1941.Socially,however,thecountrywassurprisinglystrong.（误）Katehasbeenawaitress,anurseandtaughtschool.（正）Katehasbeenawaitress,anurseandateacher.(系列中的每个平行