英语四级作文备考.ppt

四级备考—写作大学英语四级作文评分标准历年真题、写作原则及方法起承转合写作技巧常见错误实战练习理论篇写作部分要求考生用英语进行短文写作，思想表达准确、意义连贯、无重大语法错误。重点考察的技能:A思想表达B篇章组织C语言运用D写作格式思想表达1.表达中心思想2.表达重要或特定信息3.表达观点、态度等篇章组织4.围绕所给的题目叙述、议论或描述，突出重点5.连贯地组句成段，组段成篇语言运用6.运用恰当的词汇7.运用正确的语法8.运用合适的句子结构9.使用正确的标点符号10.运用衔接手段表达句间关系(如对比、原因、结果、程度、目的等)写作格式11.运用正确的符合英语表达习惯的写作格式评分原则1.CET作文题采用总体评分(GlobalScoring)方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分(RewardScores),而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。2.从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体。作文应表达题目所规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清楚而合适地表达思想，也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。2分：条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5分：基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。8分：基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。11分：切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分：切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺、连贯，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。(注：白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给0分。)字数不足应酌情扣分。各分数段范文ABriefIntroductiontoaTouristAttractionIfeelitagreathonortobeyourtourguidetoday.First,onbehalfofmycompany,IwarmlywelcomeallmydistinguishedguestsfromAustraliatovisitShanghaiandtheOrientalPearlTVTower.LocatedontheHuangpuRiver,theOrientalPearlTVTowerisnowthesymbolofthecity.Builtin1994andopenedtothepublicin1995,itisnowthehighestbuildinginShanghaiandthethirdhighestinAsia.TheTowerhasaquiteuniquestructureandconsistsof3largeballsand5smallballs.Insidetheballs,youcanhaveabird’seyeviewofthecity.OurscheduleforthetriptotheTVTowerisasfollows:youhaveanhourfrom9:30-10:30amtoexperiencethehistoryofShanghaionthefirstfloor.Thenwe’llassembleinthemiddleofthehallat10:30andhaveanotherhourtooverlookatthebeautifulcitysceneriesinthemiddleball.Finallypleasedoremembertogotothetopballat11:30toenjoyyourlunch.Thanksforlistening.Haveagoodtime!(14/184)ABriefIntroductiontoaTouristAttractionWelcometothisbeautifulcity–Hangzhou.I’mveryhonoredtobeyourtourguidetoshowyouthemostcharmingsceneryofthecity.I’msureyouwillneverforgetthewonderfulvisitIwillleadyouto.Now,I’mgoingtogiveyoutheintroductionoftoday’sschedule.Inthemorning,wewillvisittheLingyinTemple.It’soneofthemostfamoustempleinChinabecauseofitslonghistoryandgoodlocation.Aftervisitingthetemple,weplantohavelunchattherestaurantneartheWestLake.There,youwillhavetherealtraditionalChinesefoodandenjoythelandscapeofWestLake.Intheafternoon,wewillgotoLeifengTowerwhichhasanromanticChineselovestorywhichIwilltellyouduringthevisiting.Afterdinner,Iwillshowyouthemostwell-knownscenery-WestLake.Youcanboatinginthelakeandenjoythebeautifulviews.Whatdoyouthinkoftheplan?Ifyouhavesomeadvise,pleasetellme.Iwillarrangeitandgiveyouamostcomfortabletrip.(11/179)ABriefIntroductiontoaTouristAttractionWelcomeeveryonecometovisitShanghai.I’mthetourguide.I’mgladtointroduceyouthecitywhereIgrowup.Nowthefollowingisthescheduleforthedaywherewewillgo.Atfirst,we’llgototheShanghaiMuseumat9am.Ibelieveyou’lllikethere.YoucanlearnsomehistoryofChinaasyouareinterestinourcountry.Secondly,atnoon,we’llgototheYuGardenandhavearest.Youcannotonlybuysomethingthatyoulikebutalsohavesomethingtoeat.ThefoodissodeliciousthatI’msurethateveryonewilllike.At2pmwe’llgotothenextsitewhichisalsothelastonetoday.ThelastplaceisPudong.You’llfindthedevelopmentofShanghaiisfast.Andatabout4pm,itwillbeendandwe’llgobacktothehotel.Ihopeeveryonewillhaveagoodtimetoday.Ifyoumeetwithtroubles,youcanturntomeforhelpatanytime.(8/173)ABriefIntroductiontoaTouristAttractionHello!Everybody.Welcometohere!TodayI’myour’sguide.Ibelievewewillhaveagoodtrip.WewillgototheAnJi.AnJiisverybeautifulcityinZheJiang.Ithinkyouwillbeintrestinit.Theday’splanissomuch.First,WewillgototheZhuZhongYuanat8:00am.TherehavesomuchandvaryofZhuZi.At11:30am,Wewilleatinglunch.Andattheafternoon,WewillgototheCanglongBaiPu.At1:00pminthemountain,ariverstillaroundit.Theriversoclearandcold.Wecanseesomesmallfishintheriver.Walkalongthestoneroad.Wewillbeseeingtheviewbesideofthebacktohotel.Later,Youcaneatingthedinnerinthehotel.Thisistheplanoftoday.Now,Areyouhavesomequestions?Ifhavethenaskedme,AndIwillgiveyouaperfectanswer!SoIhopeandbelievethatWewillhaveagoodtrip.(5/173)ABriefIntroductiontoaTouristAttractionI’mverygladtoyourcometoShanghai,Welcome.wearevisitJinMaoBuildingtoday.JinMaoBuildingstandLujiazuiFinanentTrade,inPuDong.TheshoppingandeatingallaboveinLujazuiFinanentTrade.ZhengDaGuangChang,doFangMingZhuetc.JinMaoBuildingis800miller-higher,JinMaoKaiYueHotelinit.It’sthehighestforBuildinginShanghai.At88stairs,WecanlookallofShanghai,JinMaoBuildingissteelaboveall,glassabovewith.It’sveryclearintheSuny.Somebusinessofficeinhere,soit’sthefamousFinanentTradeinShanghai.WearevisitingJinMaoBuildingcanintroducepeople’slivinginShanghai.I’mwishyourvisithappytoday.(2/121)返回历年真题2010/6DueAttentionShouldBeGiventoSpelling1.如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写2.出现这种情况的原因3.这种现象导致的结果2009/12CreateaGreenCampus1.建设绿色校园十分重要2.绿色校园不仅指绿色环境3.为了建设绿色校园我们应该……2009/6Freeadmissiontomuseums越来越多的博物馆免费开放的目的是什么?也会带来一些问题你的看法2008/12DisposablePlasticBags1.一次性塑料袋的使用2.使用一次性塑料袋带来的问题3.限制使用一次性塑料袋的意义2008/6Recreationalactivity1.娱乐活动多种多样2.娱乐也可能有危害性3.作为大学生，我的看法。2007/12Electivesoncampus1、各大学开设了各种各样的选修课2、学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课3、以你自己为例……2007/6Anintroductiontoaclub1、本社团的主要活动内容2、参加本社团的好处3、如何加入本社团2006/12theCCTVS