新东方在线[]网络课堂电子教材系列六级写作十大必背范文主讲:王江涛1、引语评论:2012年12月真题Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanessayentitledManandComputerbycommentingonthesaying,“Therealdangerisnotthatthecomputerwillbegintothinklikeman,butthatmanwillbegintothinklikethecomputer.”Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsbutnomorethan200words.Thereisasayingthat“Therealdangerisnotthatthecomputerwillbegintothinklikeman,butthatmanwillbegintothinklikethecomputer.”Thepurposeofthesayingistoshowusthatutmostimportanceshouldbeattachedtoinnovationandcreativity.Tobeginwith,anattitudeofinnovationcouldbesaidtobethewatchword,ormottoofscience.Thinkofalltheinnumerabletimesascientificexperimentmustbecarriedout,allthelaboratorytests,allthelivetrials,beforeanewmedicineorvaccineisdiscovered.Inaddition,innovationisalsoresponsibleformanyoftoday’sbusinesssuccesses.Forinstance,itwasonlyafterfouryearsandfourdifferenttriesofvaryingbusinessmodelsthatanentrepreneurfinallyfoundsuccess,andwenttobecomethechairmanofoneofthelargestInternetcompanies.Tosumup,inanyfieldofendeavor,itseemsnecessarytofirstputgreatemphasisoninnovationbeforeonecanfinallyreachsuccess.Itisasiflifeistestingus,testingourinnovationandcreativitytoseeifwearereallydedicatedtoourvision,beforelifefinallyrewardsuswithsuccess.新东方在线[]网络课堂电子教材系列有句话说“真正的危险不是电脑将开始像人一样思考,而是人类开始向电脑一样思考”。这句话的目的是告诉我们应该充分重视创新。首先,创新的态度可以说是科学研究的信条。想想看,只有在进行了无数次的科学实验、实验室检测和活体试验之后,才能发明出新药物和新疫苗。其次,创新也是当今许多企业能够成功的原因。例如,某家公司曾经尝试了四种不同的商业模式,历经四年才取得成功。后来这家企业的老总也当上了最大一家互联网公司的董事长。总之,在任何领域,一个人似乎只有在重视创新之后,才能获得最后的成功。生活好像是在考验我们,考验我们的创新能力,看看我们是否能专注与自己的理想,最后才会给予我们成功。2、引语评论:2013年6月真题第一套Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanessaycommentingontheremark“Goodhabitsresultfromresistingtemptation.”Youcanciteexamplestoillustrateyourpoint.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsbutnomorethan200words.Thereisasayingthat“Goodhabitsresultfromresistingtemptation”,towhichIcan’tagreemore.Unfortunately,lackofdeterminedwillandsocialexperience,teenagersfrequentlyfallintothetrapsoftemptationssuchasInternetgames,smoking,drinking,andsoon.Inabidtoformgoodhabits,oneneedsastrongwillandperseverancetoresisttemptation.Numerousexamplescanbegivenbutthesewillsuffice.Theoutstandinghabitofreadingclassicliteratureonaregularbasisisacaseinpoint.Nevertheless,youwoulddefinitelyhavetospendlesstimeonyourfavoriteInternetgamesorfascinatingmobilephones.Likewise,thegoodhabitofdoingexerciseseverydaymeansrepeatedlydraggingoneselfawayfromtheTVseriesandcozycouch.Thesecaseseffectivelyclarifythatgoodhabitsarisesfromresistingtemptation.Ashasbeenmentionedabove,awisemindanddeterminedwillshouldbegraduallycultivatedsothattheadolescentscanresistvariousbadtemptationsandformexcellenthabits.JustasOscarWilde,anesteemedBritishnovelistputit,“Icanresisteverythingexcepttemptation.”有句话说“好的习惯来自于抵制诱惑”,我非常同意。不幸的是,年轻人缺乏坚定的意志和社会经验,总是陷入网络游戏、吸烟、喝酒等诱惑的陷阱。为了养成良好的习惯,人们需要坚定的意志和坚持不懈来抵制诱惑。可以给出无数的例子,但下面这些例子足矣。经常阅读文学经典的优秀习惯就是其中之一。然而,你必须在心爱的网络游戏或诱人的手机上花费更少的时间。同样,每天进行锻炼的良好习惯意味着日新东方在线[]网络课堂电子教材系列复一日强迫自己远离电视剧和舒适的沙发。这些例子清楚证明了好的习惯源于抵制诱惑。综上所述,我们年轻人应该逐渐培养明智的心态和坚定的意志,以便抵制各种各样不好的诱惑并形成良好的习惯。正如著名的英国作家奥斯卡王尔德所说:“除了诱惑,我都能抵制。”3、引语评论:2013年6月真题第二套:Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanessaycommentingontheremark“Earthprovidesenoughtosatisfyeveryman’sneed,butnoteveryman’sgreed.”Youcanciteexamplestoillustrateyourpoint.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsbutnomorethan200words.JustasMahatmaGandhi,agreatIndiansaintputit,“Earthprovidesenoughtosatisfyeveryman’sneed,butnoteveryman’sgreed.”Morerecently,thehumanracehasbeguntorealizethatprotectingtheearthinitsnaturalconditionisimperativeforhumansurvival.Essentially,weneedtheearthtocountertheeffectsofglobalwarming,airpollutionandecologicalbalance.Icanthinkofnobetterillustrationthanthefollowingone.Owingtohumangreed,airpollutionhasbecomeamajorcauseofrespiratoryillnesses.Inmanycities,theairissobadthatpeopleactuallywearmasksandairfilters.Breathingthisaircankillyou.Morethanever,citydwellersneedthenaturalareaswheretheycangotoresttheirlungsandbreathefreshair.Thus,wemustpreserveandrestorewhatevertheearthwehaveleft,especiallytheonesinandaroundthecities.Tosummarize,itisclearthathumansneedtoleavetheearthinitsnaturalcondition.Weneedtheearthtocombatairpollution,globalwarmingandpopulationexplosion.Itismyviewthatitisalong-termmatteroflifeanddeath.正如伟大的印度圣人甘地所说,“地球提供了足够的资源来满足人类的需要,但无法满足人类的贪婪”。最近,人们逐渐认识到,保护地球是人类生存的必要条件。从本质上讲,我们需要自然环境来缓解全球变暖、空气污染和生态平衡。我想不出什么例子比下面这个更好。由于人类的贪婪,空气污染已经成为呼吸系统疾病的主要原因。在许多城市,空气污染极其严重,人们甚至会带上口罩和空气过滤器。从早到晚地呼吸那种空气是一种慢性自杀。如今,城市居民比以往更加需要自然环境。人们可以去那里呼吸新鲜空气,也让自己的肺歇口气。因此,我们必须保护现在的地球,尤其是城市内和城市周围的自然环境。新东方在线[]网络课堂电子教材系列总之,人类明显需要更多地保护状态下的地球。人们需要地球来抵抗全球变暖、空气污染和人口爆炸。从长远看来,我认为这是生死攸关的事情。4、引语评论:2013年12月六级真题第一套Directions:Forthispartyouareallowed30minutestowriteanessaycommentingontheremark“Thegreatestuseoflifeistospenditforsomethingthatwilloutlastit.”Youcangiveexamplestoillustrateyourpointandthenexplainwhatyouwilldotomakeyourlifemoremeaningful.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsbutnomorethan200words.Thefamoussaying“Thegreatestuseoflifeistospenditforsomethin