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我用来申请香港大学并成功的PS来源：管羚雅◇娃娃BHSFer的日志【我这篇是比较长，两页半，还是建议大家两页以内甚至一页半哈~仅供参考。】就是发上来给大家看看，就当攒人品、造福吧。恩觉得写得好您就拿去看，觉得写得不好就忽略我好啦。首先感谢多次帮助我的@张洋(231216758)，我爱死你=。=。是这样，我申请了香港大学建筑院的城市规划专业的授课式研究生，2年学制（MScinUrbanPlanning），而且我是真心很想去这个专业。所以现在也算初步圆梦了。（由于家庭原因等，我只申请了香港，有港大、港科技、港中文、港理工、港城市，都拿到offer。PS基本上都是一个思路，但是最后一段有更改，因为最后一段一般写“whyschool&whyprogram”，所以一定要根据每个学校所申请的不同program修改自己的文章。）我发我的PS，主要是给各位借鉴个思路。我的思路中，最主要的一方面就是：PS以一个主题为主线，然后PS中每一段都要多多少少提到该主题，使文章成为一个整体。恩，我写的肯定不是最好的，大牛多了去了。不过怎么说呢，每个人申请的时候，PS都是挺难的一关，总是不知道怎么写。所以，有了别人的PS看看，总是件好事。但我觉得，我能成功，还有很多其他因素。1、面试认真准备，面试后为了表达真心，发了Thankyouletter给课程主任；2、材料准备全面，各种奖状、PS、CV、Portfolio等；3、自己全面了解了该program，以及和申请HK有关的一切（上港大官网、寄托等网站），这样不论走到申请的哪个阶段，我都心中有数，不会太慌张。反正说白了，申请是自己的事情，我觉得想做就要做好，不然不如拉到。行吧不废话了，上PS了。PersonalStatementStandingontheplaygroundwitharmsakimboandsweatdripping,Icouldnothelpbreathingheavily,yetfeelingproudthatIstrainedeverynervetorunandbrokemyrecordagain.Deeploveoftrackandfieldsportshassustainedmetokeeprunningeveryday.Althoughsufferingfromexhaustion,Ilovetoexperiencetheprocessofholdingontotheend.Peopledonotalwaysunderstandmypassionforrunning.Itmaybebecausethattheycanseemyeffortonthetrack,butcanseldomknowhowmanyvaluablelessonsrunninghastaughtme.Muchlikemyinsistenceonrunning,mystrivingforacademicexcellenceintheundergraduatestudyisendless.MajoringinResourcesEnvironmentandtheManagementofUrbanandRuralPlanning(REMURP)atWuhanUniversity,oneofthetopcomprehensiveuniversitiesinChina,Ihavesystematicallystudiedfoundationknowledgeandappliedskillsinawiderangeoffields,namelyGeographicalSciences,NaturalResources,GeographicInformationSystem,RemoteSensing,MappingandSurveying,andUrbanandRuralPlanning.REMURPisahighlymultidisciplinarysubject.Therefore,intheinitialstageoflearningspecialisedcourses,Ifeltpuzzledhowtocrossthethreshold.However,suchdifficultydidnotfrightenme.Perseveringinworkinghardistomystudywhatholdingouttotheendistomyeverydayrunning.BeingawareoftheobstaclesIneedtoovercome,Igotupearliertomemoriseformulas,tooknotesmoreearnestly,digestedlessonsandaskedquestionsregularly,andundertookmorepracticals.Puttingmoreefforts,Igraduallymasteredallthecourses,whichresultedinthefactthatmyGPAandacademicrankinghadkeptascendingoverthepastthreeyears.However,myacademicprogressalsobroughtmetrouble,asIcouldnottellclearlywhichparticularareaIwouldlovetocommitmyselftointhefuture.Theninjunioryear,IfinallyfoundtheanswerwhenItookthecourseUrbanPlanningPrinciple,inwhichmypassionforurbanplanningwasignited.Afterlearningthetheoreticalknowledge,Idelveddeeplyintocasestudiesofexistentplanningprojects,analysingtheirproblemsonthebasisofmyacquiredknowledgeandoperatingschemestoimprovethem.Inpractice,despitethecomplexity,IfeltinspiringbecauseIcouldindeedmakeuseofwhatIhadlearnttoresolveissuesrelatedtourbandevelopment.Actually,onaccountofthefactthatBeijing,myhometown,isahigh-densitycitymixedwithlocalsandoutsiders,IhavealreadynoticedthatmassiveurbanisationhascreateduncurbedsprawlofcitiesandpopulationexplosionsinChina.SuchpressingcircumstancesarenowimposingacontinuousnegativeinfluenceonourlifeandtheimageofChina,callingforurgentactionstobetakenatoncetodealwiththem.Thus,thecourseUrbanPlanningPrincipleexactlygavemethechancetoequipmyselfwithknowledgeandskillsneededtorealisemyaimofbuildingChinaintoasustainablecountry.Beyondtheorystudy,Ialsopaidseriousattentiontopracticeandsuccessfullycompletedaplanningprojectofaresidentialdistrictonmyown.Thoughwithoutanyexperiences,Iwastotallyfascinatedbytheplanningprocess,asitwasthefirsttimethatIcouldindependentlyhandletheprofessionaldesignwork.IgraspedappliedskillsofthesoftwareCorelDRAWallbymyself,drewandreviseddraftsformorethantentimesduetodissatisfaction,perfecteddetailscontinuallyduringthewholeprocessandfinallyaccomplishedmydesign,whicheventuallywonmeahighmark.Notasingleworkinthisprojectwaseasy,butIpulledthroughthemalljustasIdidsoofteninrunning.Meanwhile,thisexperienceallowedmetofullyperceivethecharmofurbanplanning,whichgreatlydeepenedmyunderstandingofthissubjectandfurtherstrengthenedmydeterminationtocommittoit.Afterthat,IwasalsoinvolvedincoursessuchasUrbanEnvironmentAnalysisandPlanningandDesignofLandResource,buttheydidnotsatisfymythirstforknowledgeandpractice.Drivenbystrongacademicinitiative,thisyearIassembledafive-memberteamandappliedforaresearchprojecttoinvestigatetheexistingproblemsofWuhanpublictoilets,asimprovingthecurrentsituationwasespeciallymeaningfultosustainableplanninganddevelopmentoftheplace.Atfirst,whenIwaspreparingmaterials,unexpectedtroubleoccurred.Therewashardlyanysupportdata,whichmeantthatweevencouldnotcarryoutthemostbasicwork.Thoughfrustrated,weexertedourselvesforsolutionsandfinallyobtainedsomedatafromarelevantresearchduetomyteacher’shelp.What’smore,afterabundantresearchesandanalyses,Idecidedtoimprovetheexistingmodeltoapplyittoourproject,whichwasproventobeeffective.Then,everythingwasontrack.Wemainlyfocusedonanalysinginsufficientnumberoftoiletsandunsuitableproportionofmen’stowomen’s,utilisingquantitativeandqualitativemethods.Equallyimportant,wemadeseveralsuggestions.Basedonfruitfulresearchresul