第一段3句1总体描述:1句1.Asisvividly/symbolicallydepictedinthepicture/cartoon,wecannoticethat____Asisvividly(subtly/symbolically)depicted(shown/described/revealed/portrayed/demonstrted/illustrated)inthephoto(caricature/carton/drawing/picture/photograph)above______________________________________Havingcapturedourattention,thepicturevividlybetraysthefact(表现出事实)that___Thissetofdrawingvividlyreflectsthefactthat____(一组图)2细节描述1-2句3文字说明/象征寓意:(1)文字说明:会写的话:Thepictureiscaptioned“________”,whichindicatesthat_______文字不会写的话:Thecaptionreadsthat___________(2)象征寓意:Itisapparentthat第二段5句左右论证部分:Atfirstthought,peoplemayconsider_____.Butdeeperthinkingleadsustoitscoremeaning___1主题句1句:(中心)(1)Thepurposeofthepictureistotellusthat_____保护环境保护传统文化_____isofgreatsignificancetoushuman.(2)Thispicturedosereflectathought-provokingsocialphenomenonwhichisnotuncommoninChinanowthat___社会现象____(3)However,themaninthepicture,who_____,isnotanisolatedexample._社会风气_isaproblempervasivethroughoutoursociety。(4)Alifephilosophyisclearlyreflectedabovethat__人生哲理____.(5)Thepurposeofthepictureistotellusthatitisimpretiveto_____(6)Amongthetopicconcerning__象征寓意____,asthedepictionshows,themostcardinaltopisrelatedtotheissueof___象征寓意具体化____。(在_____画题中,正如漫画所给,最核心的点是_______。)(7)Undoubtedly,throughthethought-provokingillustration,thedraweraimsatremindingusthesignificanceof_____(强调重要性)(8)Throughtheincentiveillustration,thedraweraimstopointouttheadvantangesanddisadantagesof______(有好有坏的)、(9)Therecentafewyearshaswitnessedaphenomenonof主题(不好的现象)whichseemstobedisastroustoindividualsurvivalandprosperity.对我们的生存和社会的繁荣造成影响论证部分:举例:(引出原因)Severalfactors(原因:inducement诱因/incentive)couldweightheavilyforthehappeningof_______,yet,suspendedatthetopofthelistarethefollowingtwoaspects.TobeginWith,_______.Additionally,_______.(引出影响)Itishardlynecessaryformetocitealltheevidenceoftherevolutionaryinfluencesthe___giveriseto(contributeto/result/tigger/induce/spell).Tobeginwith,_____(只举例)Agoodcaseblowingmymindnowis__人/物___,who/which__修饰___,(也可以加分词作定语)。(1)坚持,追求:AgoodcaseblowingmymindnowisJiXianLin,afamousscholarinChina,whodedicatedhiswholelifetothestudyofliberalartsandeveninhislateryears,hewasstillopen-mindedaboutnewfindingsandcontributedmanysagacious(睿智)ideals.(季羡林,以为中国著名学他倾尽一生致力于人文科学研究,甚至在晚年仍然对新发现保持开放的心态,并提出许多睿智的看法)(2)优缺点:Agoodcaseblowingmymindnowisthefamous“woodenbarreltheory”proposedbyPeter,anAmericanmanagementexpert,whicharguesthathowwellathingcanperformisdecidedbyitsweaknesses.(PETER的木桶效应认为人的表现取决于他的弱点)(3)团结:Agoodcaseblowingmymindnowisdrawinggeneticmap。Itisobviousthatasinglepersoncouldnotaccomplishthismapeventhoughexhaustingallhislifeandefforts.Nevertheles,ifthousandsofscientistsaroundtheworldtogetherdevotetheirexpertiseandenthusiasmtohislandmarkmission,thevictorywillbejustaroundthecorner.(一个人即使尽自己一生的努力也无法绘制出基因图谱,然而如果几千个世界各地的科学家一起将知识和热情全部贡献给这个有里程碑意义的任务时,胜利指日可待)(3)成功失败:AgoodcaseblowingmymindnowisThomasEdison,whohadnotbeenstifledbyrepeatedfailtures,eventuallyinventedtheelectriclamp.(爱迪生没有被不断的困难所打倒最终成功发明了灯泡)(4)艰苦奋斗:AgoodcaseblowingmymindnowisMaYun,whobornedinacommonfamilyandraisedbysemiliterateparents,finallybecametheCEOoftheAlibabaGroup.(马云出生在普通的家庭里他的父母都是文盲最终成为了阿里巴巴的CEO)(5)骄傲自满:Pursuingknowledgeandabilitiesbearscloseresemblancetoclimbingamountain.Afteralongtriptothefootofthemountain,somepeoplearecontentwiththethought”Ihvereachedthemountain”andthusstoptorestthere;somepeople,whenscendinghalfwayupthehill,ceasetogoonclimbing,scincetheyhavehadatasteofthedelightfulmountainscenery;onlythosepeopledissatisfiedwithwheretheyreachwillclimbtothehighsummittoappreciatetherealgloriouslandscape.(对于知识和能力的追求和登山有相似之处,的那个经过一顿长途跋涉到了山脚时,一些满足于我终于到山顶了的想法就会停在那里休息;另一些人会在爬到半山腰时停下来,因为他们已经欣赏都了令人愉悦的山间美景;但只有那些不满足于他们所到之处的人会朝着山顶进军,去欣赏真正壮丽的景色)(6)各有所长:AgoodcaseblowingmymindnowisBolt,theworldrecordbreakerforthe100-meterrace,ifheburiedhisrunningtalentandinsteadaimedatbecomingaweightliftingwinner,theOlympicGameswouldmissasprintgeniusandgetonemoremediocreweightlifter.(如果世界100M世界纪录保持者博尔特埋葬他奔跑的潜能,励志成为一名举重运动员,那么奥林匹克运动将会失去一名短跑天才)随着经济(文化)全球化Theexpansionofcultureglobalizationhasseenthepopularizationof___among___.(这个句子很强大尽量用!)随着文化的全球化____在___中越来越流行Theexpansionofeconomyglobalizationhasseentheincreasinglyfiercecompetitionamongtheyoungpeople.随着经济和社会的发展,竞争日益激烈:Withthedevelopmentofeconomyandsociety,competitionisincreasinglyfierce.教育类的废话:Agoodeducationisanassetyoucanfallbackonfortherestofyourlife。Somechildrenarejustnotequippedbynaturetopursuetechnicaleducation(一些孩子生下来就不具备受教育的条件)Soweshouldcherishthelifewitheducation.正反观点:Thereisageneraldebatenowadaysabouttheproblemof_____.Thosewhoobjecttothe____arguethat_____leadtoharmsocialstability(破坏社会稳定)Theybelievethatstrictlimitsshouldbeplacedon_____.Butpeoplewhofavorthe______ontheotherhand,maintainthat________areneededtosupportthemassiveurbaninfrastructureconstruction.第三段双刃剑:However,_____,isadouble-edgedswordwhichcanexertprofoundinfluenceonthegrowthofyoungpeople.Ifwesimply_______unresonablly,theobsessionwillcertainlywasteusagreattimeandmoney,endangeringtheefficiencyofourwork.Onthecountrary,wewillleadapositiveandfruitfull