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DearSue,IamwritingthismailtohonestlyaskforyourhelpontheconditionofmyoffertoMScCorporateFinance.MynameisWangRenfeiandmystudentnumberis120005288.IhavereceivedandacceptedyourconditionalofferinFebruary.Igreatlyappreciatethechanceyougavemeandworkhardtomeettheconditions.However,IjustgotmyIELTStestresultsandmywritingis5.5,whichshortof1.0fromthequalifiedstandard(6.5).IamquitesurprisedaboutthisresultbecauseIgot28inTOEFL¡¯scorrespondingsectionlastSeptember,whichIbelieveisquiteimpressive.Inthisway,IamgoingtoaskforareassessmentaboutmyIELTSwritingsection.Sincemyoverallbandscoreisqualified(7.0)andIhavebeenpassed11ACCAsubjectsinmylasttwoyears,whichinvolvesalotofprofessionalpaperworks,Ithinkmywritingabilityisqualified.Andifnecessary,IcanaskmyACCAtutortoprovidealettertoprovethatIamcapabletostudyandwriteassignmentsinEnglish.Also,nearlyhalfofmycompulsivecoursesaretaughtandtestedinEnglishsincetheyareACCArelated,soIcouldalsoaskmyteacherstoconfirmmywritingability.SoIwritethisemailtoinquirethatwhethermyIELTSmeettherequirements.Ifnot,shouldItaketheIELTSagainsinceCASSdoesnotofferlanguagecourse.However,asafinalyearstudentwithhighburden,Ipersonallydonotwanttodothetestagain.ThetesttakestoomucheffortsandIreallyhavetoworkhardtoaccomplishmycourseandachievea1stclassHonoursdegree.Besides,thereassessmentwouldgenerallytake8weeks.Inthisway,althoughIamconfidentforapositiveresult,itwillbealittlebitlateformetoworkonthevisa.Whatismore,sinceTOEFLandIELTSaretwoequallyqualifiedlanguagetestingsystems,IhopemywritingperformanceinTOEFL(28)canbekindlyconcerned.Icompletelyrespectandunderstandthatyouhaveastrictstandardofadmission.ButIreallydon¡¯twanttomissthechanceofstudyinginyourschool.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldreconsidermyconditionalrequirement.Ibelievemyperformanceinthegraduatecoursewillproveyourchoicecorrect.AttachedaremyIELTSresultscreencutandmyTOEFLreport.ThankyouverymuchandIapologizeforanyinconveniencesImighthavecaused.Ifyouhaveanyfurtherquestions,pleasecontactme.Yourssincerely,WangRenfei