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goodafternoon陈玉军，杨娟宁，张文杰永远的憧憬和追求——萧红萧红简介•萧红(1911-1942)，黑龙江省呼兰县人，我国现代著名女作家，出生于呼兰县城一封建地主家庭。萧红父亲张廷举，早年毕业于黑龙江省立优级师范学堂，长期担任官吏，具有浓厚的封建统治阶级思想。他对萧红冷漠无情，促使萧红最终走上背叛地主家庭的道路。萧红年幼丧母，自小深得祖父张维祯的喜爱，并受到祖父以古诗为主的启蒙教育，使其从小就打下较好的文学基础。•萧红的散文文笔亲切、细腻，感情热烈真挚，具有抒情诗般的艺术风格。《永远的憧憬和追求》是萧红的一篇传记性散文名作。在这篇作品中，萧红以朴实细腻的笔调回忆了她的童年和故乡，作品流露出低沉忧郁的情绪，二十岁离家出走后一直过着流浪的生活，父亲的冷酷和祖父的仁慈给幼年时代的萧红留下了深刻的记忆，使她认识到，“人生除了冰冷和僧恶之外，还有温暖和爱”，向着这“温暖”和“爱”，她“怀着永久的憧憬和追求”。这篇散文文风朴素自然，充满真情，感人至深。对比学习Title:永远的憧憬和追求•Threekindoftranslations:•①MyEverlastingDreamandPursuit(张）•②MyLongingandYearning(刘）•③APerpetualLongingandPursuit(葛）★Everlasting:adj.continuingforever;neverchanging永恒的；持久的;永恒的.★Perpetual:continuingforalongperiodoftimewithoutinterruption.永远的；永恒的；长期的•张译中的dreamandpursuit道出了原文作者不仅心中怀有信念，更有主动追求的意思。前者表示心中所想，后者表示行动。更忠实原文。•刘译中的LongingandYearning均有“渴求。渴望”之意，却没有翻译出“永远的”和“追求”的意思。⒈一九一一年，在一个小县城里边，我生在一个小地主的家里。那县城差不多就是中国的最东最北部——黑龙江省——所以一年之中，倒有四个月飘着白雪。•⑴In1911,IwasbornintoapettyLandlordfamilyinaremotecountytowninHeilongjiangProvince—atownsituatedvirtuallyatthenortheasterntipofChina.Wehadsnowthereforaslongasonethirdofayear.（张）•⑵In1911,IwasbornintoasmalllandlordfamilyinasmallcountrytowninHeilongjiang–China’sfarnortheasternprovincewhereitsnowedforfourmonthsoftheyear.•⑶In1911,InasmallcountyseatIwasbornintoapettylandlordfamily.ThecountyseatisinwhatisprobablytheeasternmostandnorthernmostpartofChina-Heilongjiangprovince-andsoforfourmonthsofanygivenyeartherearesnowflurries.争议点•差不多（1）Virtually(2)没有译（3）Probably最东北部：⑴atthenortheasterntip⑵farnortheasternprovince⑶theeasternmostandnorthernmost•atthenortheasterntip比inChina'snortheasternpart灵活顺口。累赘且不常见⒊父亲常常为着贪婪而失掉了人性。他对待仆人，对待自己的儿女，以及对待我的祖父都是同样的吝啬而疏远，甚至于无情。⑴Father,drivenbyavarice['ævəris],oftenbecameveryunfeeling.Hewouldtreathisservants,hisownchildrenandevenmygrandpaalikewithmeannessandindifference,nottosaywithruthlessness.(张）⑵Fatherwasalmostinhumanlyavaricious.Tohisservants,hischildrenandevenhisownfather,hewasjustasmiserlyandindifferent,orheartlessforthatmatter.（刘）⑶Myfatheroftengaveuphumanityovergreed.Hisrelationswithservants,orwithhisownchildren,aswellaswithGrandpa,wereallcharacterizedbyhisstinginess,aloofness,evenhard-heartedness.★争论点为着（1）Drivenbyavarice(张）(2)inhumanlyavaricious（刘)(3)Gaveuphishumanityovergreed(葛）★张译中的“drivenbyavarice”为分词短语作原因状语，形象得描绘了父亲的贪婪及残忍。★Over:介词;由于，关于（表原因）“甚至于无情”译为nottosaywithruthlessness，其中nottosay是英语成语，意即andalmost或andperhapseven。（张）成语的使用，不仅忠实原文思想，而且使译文更简洁，顺畅。Forthatmatter:就此而言，在这方面。（葛）Eg:Idonotlikeitmuch.Nordidthekid,forthatmatter.我不怎么喜欢它，孩子们也同样不喜欢。⒋有一次，为着房屋租金的事情，父亲把房客的全套的马车赶了过来。★⑴Once,duetoadisputeoverhouserent,hetookawaybyforceatenant‘shorse-drawncartanddroveithome.（张）★⑵Oncebecauseatenantfailedtopayhisrent,fatherdetainedhiscartandhorse.（刘）★⑶Once,overrentpaymentdueonahouse,myfathertookpossessionofatenant‘sentireteamofandhiswagonhorse.(葛）争论点把马车赶了过来★Tookawaybyforce→带走；拿走；夺走（强制的房式），形象表现出了父亲那种飞扬跋扈，欺负弱者的形象，体现了对父亲的憎恨和对房客的同情。★Detain→vt拘留；留住；扣押，扣押是一个法律术语，是指人民法院把被执行人的财产移至另外的场所加以扣留，不准被执行人占有、使用和处分。拘留是指将对象拘禁限制.（使用不当）Eg:Thepolicedetainedthesuspecttomakefurtherinquiries.警察拘留了那个嫌疑犯以便进一步审查。★Tookpossessionof→私吞;占有.全套的马车•horse-drawncart（张）•hiscartandhorse（刘）•entireteamofandhiswagonhorse（葛）•Here：hiscartandhorse有歧义，有可能指“全套马车”，也有可能指“马车”和“马”。⒌房客的家属们哭着诉说着，向我的祖父跪了下来，于是祖父把两匹棕色的马从车上解下来还了回去。★Thetenant‘sfamilycametoseegrandpaand,droppingtotheirknees,tearfullyrelatedtheirtroubles.Grandpaunharnessedthetwochestnuthorsesandretunedthemtotenant.(张）•Thetenant’sfamilykneltinfrontofGrandpa,pleadingformercywithtearsintheireyes.Grandpaunharnessedthetwobrownhorsesfromthecartandgavethembacktothetenant.（刘）Thetenant‘sfamilywept,pleaded,andprostrated（使…俯伏）themselvesatthefeetofGranddad,whothenunharnessedtwotawnyhorsesfromthewagonandgavethemback.（葛）•诉说:•Relate:vt.togiveaspokenorwrittenreportofsomething;totellastory叙述，讲述(张）•Plead:toasksbforsomethinginaverystrongandseriousway.乞求，恳求。•棕色的马•Chestnut,红棕色的。英语常用chestnut指马的棕色，或棕色的马.•Brown：棕色的•tawny:黄褐色的，茶色的为着这匹马，父亲向祖父起着终夜的争吵。•Thattouchedoffanight-longquarrelbetweenfatherandgrandpa.(张）★OverthisFatherwrangledwithhimforthewholenight.（刘）•MyfatherquarreledwithGranddadallnightoverthosetwohorses.（葛）争论点•Touchoff:tomakesthbegin,especiallyadifficultorviolentsituation.（触发，引发)★Wranglewith:Anargumentthatiscomplicatedandcontinuedoveralongperiodoftime.（长时间的争吵，争辩）•Quarrelwith争吵•“两匹马，咱们是算不了什么的，穷人，这两匹马就是命根。”祖父这样说着，而父亲还是争吵。★“Thetwohorsesmeannothingtous,buteverythingtothepoor,”arguedgrandpa.Father,however,refusedtolisten.（张）•“twohorsesdonotmuchtous,”saidGrandpa,“buttheyarethelife-bloodtothepoor.”Fatherbickeredon.（刘）•“twohorsestousmeannothing,buttoapoormanthosetwohorsesmeanhisveryexistence,”Granddadsaid,butmyfathercontinuedtoquarrelwithhim.(葛)•life-blood：（组织、关系等的）生命线，命脉•“穷人，这匹马就是命根”译为theymeaneverythingtothepoor，其中everything和前面的nothing相互应。“nothing”和“everything”的对比，比直译为“life-blood”更有力、更贴切，映衬出祖父的慈祥善良，为后文埋下伏笔。existence:生存，生计。•Father,however,refusedtolisten.能更生动地表达原意。•Bickered：toargue,especiallyaboutsomethingveryunimportant(尤指为琐事)争吵，发生口角•Granddadsaid,butmyfathercontinuedtoquarrelwithhim:“quarrelwith”与前面的重复，表达不够简练。•九岁时，母亲死去。父亲也就更变了样。•MotherdiedwhenIwas