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Reference•从日光中获取能量•与形状相近•普通车•优点•低噪音•无污染•车身相对小•价格昂贵•动力不足•最高速度只有70公里/小时•充电•getenergyfromthesun•looksimilarto•ordinarycars•Advantageadvantageous•producelittlenoise•almostnoairpollution•comparativelysmaller•muchmoreexpensive•muchlesspowerful/lackofpower•withatopspeedofonly70km/h•needrecharging/toberecharged•语法词汇表达•1.afterbeingcharged/afteritischarged•2.itiseasyandconvenienttoparkthecar.•Thecariseasytopark.•3.Thepriceislow/high•Thecarisexpensive/cheap•4.ordinarynormalcommon•5.shapethesandintoamound•Theseeventshelpedtoshapeherfuturecareer(有影响，决定）•Anegg-shapedballbeshapedlikeanegg•6.drive–drove–driven•7.最大问题是它们每次充电后只能行驶约100公里。•Thebiggestproblemisthattheycanonlyrunabout100kilometersbeforetheirbatteryneedsrecharging/needstoberecharged.•Thebiggestproblemofallisthathavingbeendrivenabout100kilometers,theyneedrecharging.•首句尾句要有亮点•Solarcar,thecrystallizationofwisdomandhightechnology,isanenvironment-friendlyproductwhichgetsitsenergyfromsunshinewiththehelpofsolarpanels.•Tomakethematterworse,thebiggestandmostseriousproblemisthatthesolarcarcanonlybedrivenasfaras100kilometersafterbeingcharged,whichpreventsitfromwinningthewarinthemarket.•结构要明显，让评卷老师看得清—连接词要清晰•1.Solarcars,whichgettheirenergyfromthesunbyusingsolarpanels,looksimilartoordinarycars,butthey(themselves)haveseveraladvantages.•2.Gainingenergyfromthesunlightthroughsolarpanels,thesolarcarisanewkindofenergy-savingvehicle,ofwhichtheshapeissimilartotheordinarycar.•3.Shapedliketheordinarycar,thesolarcarisanewkindofenergy-savingvehicle,whichgainsitsenergyfromthesun.•4.thesolarcar,anewkindofenergy-savingvehicle,gainsitenergyfromthesunlightandissimilartotheordinarycarinappearance.•5.withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,thesolarcar,anewkindofenergy-savingvehicle,isbecomingincreasinglypopular•6.Thesolarcar,withtheshapesimilartoordinarycars,ispoweredbysolarpanels,whichcangainenergyfromsunshine•Thesolarcar,ahigh-techproduct,whichcangetampleenergyfromthesolarpanelsthatabsorbsunlight,issimilartotheordinarycarinshape.Admittedly,sosuperioristhesolarcarthatitlowersthenoise,preventstheseverepollutionandservesasaneffectivemeantohelpbuildupanenvironmentallyfriendlysociety.Furthermore,itissosmallinshapethatitcanbedrivenandparkedeasily,bringinggreatconveniencetopeople’sdailylifeandattractingpeople’sinterestinbuyingit.However,despiteitsindisputableadvantages,itsdisadvantagescan’tbeoverlooked,becausenotonlyisthesolarcarveryexpensive,makingpeopleunabletoaffordone,butalsoithasalowspeed,whosespeedisonlyupto70kilometersperhour.Tomakethematterworse,thebiggestandmostseriousproblemisthatthesolarcarcanonlybedrivenasfaras100kilometersafterbeingcharged.嘉敏结构拓展句型•Thesolarcar,withtheshapesimilartoordinarycars,ispoweredbysolarpanels,whichcangainenergyfromsunshine.Tobemoredetailed,comparedtotheordinaryone,ithastheadvantageoflittlenoise,nopollutionaswellasenvironmentaldriving.What’smore,itisdesignedtobedriveneasilyanddriverisabletoparkitconvenientlyduetoitssmallsize.However,theconvenienceandwonderfulnessofthesolarcarisatthepriceofitsexpensivenessandthelackofpowerwhichlimitsitshighestspeedtoonly70kmsperhour.Apartfromtheabove,thebiggestproblemisthatitcanonlyrun100kmsintotalaftereachcharge.(罗志雄15分)•1.名词化结构2.每个句型都不一样3.逻辑很清晰•不要为了加长文章，硬性加些不明不白的意思上去•Withthesimilarshapeasordinarycars,thesolarcarcanattainenergyfromtheomnipresent(无处不在的)sunlightthroughsolarpanels.Thiscarwithhightechnologyobtainslotsofadvantages,suchaslessnoiseandthescarcityofthepollution.Yetanotherbenefitoftheenvironmentallyfriendlycaristhatitissuchacarwithsmallsizethatitcanbedrivenandparkedeasily.Nevertheless,despitealltheseadvantages,potentialdisadvantagesandinconveniencestillexistinthecar,likeitshighcostandtheabsenceofenoughpower,whichcanneverrunfasterthan70kmsandhour.Amongallthepotentialproblems,thebiggestandmostdreadfuloneisthatitcanrunonlyabout100kmsaftereachcharging.(陈文珊14分)•所添加的只是修辞类的和符合主线的词语，没有额外的信息•技巧提升一过渡段的写法,主题句+拓展句.•技巧点拨:三点中,如果第一点是略写的话,可以定为过渡段.过渡段最能体现你的写作功底,用较短的篇幅表达思想观点和主张,现象,原因.可以用到的方法是:notonlybutalso,动宾结构的排比,抽象名词的排比,which从句,现在分词.•Onreadingthenewsabove,Ican'trestrainmyselffromtearsandIdodeeplylamenttheunfortunateencounterofLiu,whosetsanextraordinaryexampleforallofusandencourageustofightagainstallthemisfortuneandadversities.Hence,Ihavegreatesteemforthisdistinguishedhero.•FromwhereIstand,Icanhardlysidewiththissuggestionthoughitisbeneficialtostudents‘health,maintainingthatitwilldefinitelylayheavierburdenonstudents’studyandstudentsmaygethurtaccidentallyfortheirover-duepractice.•技巧点拨二:一定要对点写,并分清主次,排好版.一定要写好你的每段的首句,最好对应出题的要求开门见山.(1)你是否赞成体育入高考及原因;(略写,过渡段)(2)健康与学习的关系；(主体段)(3)你认为还有什么方式可以帮助学生提高身体素质。(主体段,但可以根据情况略短点)结尾:呼应主题,号召同学们锻炼身体.(2排)技巧点拨三:分点分面的使用.两个主体段可以一个用排比的方法,(without/withhealth)一个用分点分面的方法或对比的方法.Individually,publiclyPhysically,mentally,Emotionally,materially,spirituallyIntermsofasforOntheaspectofathomeatschool,•Frommyownperspective,IcastapositivevotetotheimplementationofincludingP.E.intheGaokaoforthefollowingreasons.IfP.E.islistedintheGaokao,theawarenessoftakingexercisewillbestrengthenedandstudentswillsparemoretimeonphysicaltraining.Gradua