2013广州二模基础写作太阳能汽车

2013年广州二模基础写作你接受了一项写作任务,要为英语校报的“科技与发明”栏目写一篇环保产品介绍[写作内容]请根据以下信息，介绍太阳能汽车名称：太阳能汽车(solarcar)原理：通过太阳板(solarpanels)从日光中获取能量外形：与普通汽车形状相似优点：低噪音，无污染，环保车身小，易驾驶，易停车缺点：价格昂贵动力不足，最高速度只有70公里/小时最大问题：每次充电(charge)后只能行驶100公里审题：TIPSTense(时态)Information(信息组合)Person(人称)Structure(句子结构)时态信息组合人称句子结构一般现在时(说明文)S1:名称+原理+外形S2-3:优点S4-5:缺点第三人称在NOTADIDAS中选择恰当的结构名称：太阳能汽车(solarcar)原理：通过太阳板(solarpanels)从日光中获取能量外形：与普通汽车形状相似非谓语定语从句Usingsolarpanelstogetenergyfromthesun,solarcarslooksimilartoordinarycars.Solarcars,whicharesimilartoordinarycarsinshape,getenergyfromthesunthroughsolarpanels.形容词做状语Similartoordinarycarsinshape,solarcarsworksbygettingenergyfromthesunthroughsolarpanels.优点：低噪音，无污染，环保车身小，易驾驶，易停车先弄清信息之间的逻辑关系因为低噪音和污染，所以(太阳能汽车)是环保的因为(太阳能汽车)车身小，所以易驾驶和易停车因为低噪音和污染，所以(太阳能汽车)是环保的Theyproducelittlenoiseandalmostnoairpollution,sotheyaregoodfortheenvironment.Theyproducelittlenoiseandalmostnoairpollution,whichisenvironmentallyfriendly.因为(太阳能汽车)车身小，所以易驾驶和易停车Asthey’recomparativelysmaller,solarcarsareeasytodriveandpark.Withsmallsize,solarcarsareeasytodriveandpark.缺点：价格昂贵动力不足，最高速度只有70公里/小时最大问题：每次充电(charge)后只能行驶100公里不仅价格昂贵而且动力不足xxx尽管价格昂贵，但是却动力不足Expensiveasitis,itislesspowerful,withamaximumspeedofonly70km/h.Inspiteof/Despiteitshighprice,itis.....缺点：最大问题：每次充电(charge)后只能行驶100公里Thebiggestproblemofallisthattheycanonlybedrivenabout100kmbeforetheirbatteryneedsrecharging/tobecharged.Whatgreatlydisappoints/troublestheusersisthatsolarcarscanonlycover100kmafterbeingcharged.表语从句主语从句+表语从句有一些出彩的表达，但卷面要改善语言简洁明了，但没必要分这么多段卷面让人心情舒畅表达丰富，逻辑连贯好Usingsolarpanelstogetenergyfromthesun,solarcarslooksimilartoordinarycars,buttheyhaveseveraladvantages.Theyproducelittlenoiseandalmostnoairpollution,whichisgreatfortheenvironment.Also,asthey’recomparativelysmaller,solarcarsareeasytodriveandpark.However,solarcarsaremuchmoreexpensivetobuythannormalcars,andthey’remuchlesspowerful,withatopspeedofonly70km/h.Thebiggestproblemofallisthattheycanonlybedrivenabout100kmbeforetheirbatteryneedsrecharging/toberecharged.Solarcars,whichgettheirenergyfromthesunthroughsolarpanels,looksimilartoordinarycars,buttheyhaveseveraladvantages.Theyproducelittlenoiseandalmostnoairpollution,sothey’requitegoodfortheenvironment.Also,asthey’recomparativelysmaller,solarcarsareeasytodriveandpark.However,notonlyaretheymuchmoreexpensivetobuythannormalcars,they’realsolesspowerful,withatopspeedofonly70km/h.Thebiggestproblemofallisthattheycanonlybedrivenabout100kmbeforetheirbatteryneedsrecharging/toberecharged.