求助信

假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Mr.Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）*注意：1）词数100左右；2）可适当假如细节使行文连贯拿到题目之后，我们首先做的事情就是审题，即识别关键词并加以理解，下面红色的地方就是关键词，须出现在文中。假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Mr.Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）*注意：1）词数100左右；2）可适当加入细节使行文连贯第二步就是构思了。构思实际上就是列出文章提纲。说白了就是想想文章分几个段落、每个段落的层次如何来安排。由于这是一封书信，所以信件的相关格式也要注意。下面，大家用中文先构思一下全文：段1：段2：段3：交代身份和写信目的--请求修改资料表示感激交代该请求的细节--背景和具体请求帮忙的事情当把上述的两个步骤思考完毕，我们就进入了提笔写作的阶段。在写英文作文的时候，最自然舒服的方式就是脑子里先用母语（中文）形成好的句子DearMr.Jenkins：IamLihua,fromClassone,Seniortwo.IamwritingthislettertoaskafavorofyouinthehopethatyouwillkindlyhelpmetopolishsomeEnglishmaterialsthatIhavewritten.Inthiscomingsummer,Iplantotakeapart-timejobinaforeigntradecompanytogainsocialexperience.Inordertogetthejob,Ihavetostandoutbyanimpressiveapplicationandresume.Thoughtheyhavebeenfinished,Iamnotsureaboutthewordingandformat.SoIreallyneedyourhelp.Thankyousomuch.Yours,LiHuaDearMsJenkins,I’mLiHuafromyourEnglishwritingclasslastterm.I’mwritingtoaskforyourhelp.I’mapplyingforapart-timejobataforeigncompanyinmycityduringthesummervacation,andIhavejustcompletedmyapplicationletterandresume.However,IamnotquitesureofthelanguageandtheformatI’veused.Iknowyouhaveaverybusyschedule,butI’dbeverygratefulifyoucouldtakesometimetogothroughthemandmakenecessarychanges.Pleasefindmyapplicationletterandresumeintheattachment.Thankyouforyourkindness!Yours,LiHua如何写求助信【基本结构】自我介绍，点明目的；叙述现状，告知问题；寻求帮助,期盼回复【常用句型】自我介绍I’m…/mynameis…,from…点明目的I’mwritingtoyouforsomehelp.I’mwritingalettertoyoutogetsomehelp.Iamsorrytobotheryou,butIreallyneedyourhelpwith…叙述现状Ioftenfeelblueanddepressed.告知问题Ihavesomedifficulty/troubleindoingsomethingbecauseofmypoor…Ifinditdifficultformetodosth.Iamnowconfrontedwiththefollowingdifficulties.ThereasonwhyIwritethisletteristhatihavetroublewhenIdosth.寻求帮助Couldyoupleasegiveussomeadvice?Ireallydon’tknowwhattodoandexpectyoutogivemeyouradvice/suggestions.IhavenoideawhatIshoulddoandlongforyouradvice.Iwouldliketoturntoyouforhelp.Facedwithsomuchdifficulty,Ihavetoaskyouforsomehelp.Facingsomuchdifficulty,Ihavetoaskyouforsomehelp.I’mindesperateneedofyourhelp.Yourhelpisurgentlyneeded.Iwouldappreciateanythingyoucandotohelpmewiththismatter.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucangivemesomesuggestionsonhowtodosth.期盼回复lookingforwardtoyourreplyandI’llbegratefulforyourhelp.I’msureIcanmakegreatprogresswithyourhelp.I’mwaitingforyourearlyreply.Anyonewhowantstoofferhelpcancontactusat…Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldoffermehelp.【注意事项】1.通常情况下，使用一般现在时；2.阐述要清晰，用词要恰当，言语要礼貌。可适当使用过渡词：first/tobeginwith;moreover/besides/what’smore/inaddition;inthemeanwhile;also使文章脉络清晰，条理清楚，有较强的层次感。可适当使用委婉句型：wouldyouliketo,begsb.todosth.,wouldlikesb.todosth.,I’msure来体现出作者的谦虚客气，诚恳朴实.表达方式运用多样化：如定语从句、目的状语从句、宾语从句的运用可增强文章的表达效果，提高文章的表达档次