写作技巧点拨系列(十)

写作技巧点拨系列(十)发挥想象,灵活阐释开放作文开放作文是一种留给考生自由发挥空间更多的书面表达题型。命题侧重考查两种文体:记叙文和议论文。侧重考查考生的想象能力、发散思维能力、逻辑归纳能力、提炼及阐述自己观点的能力。1.文章扣题,要根据所要阐明的内容有的放矢地突出主题;2.思维活跃,要从不同的全新的角度去看待分析一个事物或现象;3.内容健康充实;4.逻辑清楚,要完整呈现推理、论述或思维的过程;5.语言规范,交际得体。【写作指导】Ⅰ.常用句型1.Asisshowninthepicture,twoantsarewalkingalongthesideofastandardtriangle.如图所示,两只蚂蚁正沿着一个标准的三角形而行。2.Aswecanseeinthepicture,wearebeingsurroundedbydeserts.正如图中我们看到的那样,我们正在被沙漠包围。3.Inthepicture,wecanseeclearlythestrugglebetweenpeopleanddesert.如图所示,我们可以清楚地看出人类与沙漠之间的较量。4.Thepictureistryingtotellusthat...这幅图画向我们表明……5.Thepicturereflectsacommonsocialproblemthat...这幅图画反映了一个普遍的社会问题,即……6.Whatismoreseriousisthat...更严重的是……7.Inviewofpracticalneedofsociety,therearemoreandmorepeopleinterestedinlearningEnglish.鉴于社会的实际需要,越来越多的人对学英语感兴趣。8.Ifonecanreallyputthethreepointsintoaction,hewillsurelybeableto...如果一个人真能实践这三点,他肯定能……9.Inthisway,Ibelievethatallthepeoplemaybeabletoenjoythebikeridelikeme.如此,我相信所有人都能像我那样享受自行车旅行。10.Onlywithcombinedefforts,canweexpectourhometowntotakeonanewlook.唯有通力合作,我们才能期望我们的家乡呈现出新气象。Ⅱ.黄金模板1.漫画类开放作文Asisshowninthepicture,...(描述漫画内容)Thepicturevividlyshowsusthat...(解读漫画内容所要表达的现象及意义)...Theremay/mightbethreefactorswhichcontributeto/areresponsiblefor/explain/canmakeclearthe图片解释的现象.Firstofall,原因1.Andthenthesecondreasonisthat原因2.Thelastreason,Ithink,isthat原因3.Itistruethattheseunique/specialpointscan/couldtogetherremindusthatweshouldtakesomemeasurestosolveit.采取的措施1和2.Onlyinthiswaycanwe实现的目标!2.谚语类开放作文Thereisafamoussaying谚语内容,whichmeans解释谚语含义.Thesayingcanbeillustratedthroughaseriesofexamplesasfollows.Let’stake...asanexample.举例一.Anothercaseinpointis举例二.Judgingfromtheexamplesgivenabove,wemaysafelycometotheconclusionthat得出的结论.Sowhynot具体行动?【典题示例】(2014·新课标全国卷Ⅱ)一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是“十年后的我”。请根据下列要点和你的梦想完成短文。1.家庭;2.工作;3.业余生活。【审题谋篇】文章体裁记叙文中心人称第一人称主要时态一般将来时信息要点1.我认为十年后我的生活将和现在大不相同。2.十年后我将有一个幸福的家庭,有一个可爱的孩子。3.我希望那时我在一家电脑公司工作,当程序设计员。4.在业余时间,我将锻炼身体;假期里我将环游世界。【词句构建】1.词汇汉语一般词汇高级词汇喜欢like________________________空闲时间freetime_____________________经常锻炼身体oftendoexercise__________________各种各样的allkindsof__________________enjoy;takegreatinterestinsparetime;beavailabletakeregularexercisevarious;avarietyof2.句式①我认为十年后我的生活将和现在大不相同。一般表达:Ithinkmylifewillbedifferentfromthatoftodayintenyears.高级表达:Ithinkmylifewillbedifferentfrom______________intenyears.(what引导的宾语从句)②无论我做什么,我都会做得很好。一般表达:IwilldoagoodjobinanythingthatIdo.高级表达:Iwilldoagoodjobin____________.(让步状语从句)whatitistodaywhateverIdo【连句成篇】Ioftenimaginewhatmylifewillbelikeinthefuture.Ithinkmylifewillbeverydifferentfromwhatitistodayintenyears.Iwillbetwentyeightyearsoldbythen.Iwillhavemyownfamily,probablywithalovelybaby.IhopeIwillworkinacomputercompanyasaprogramdesigner.Iwillenjoymyworkandgetalongwellwithmycolleagues.IwilldoagoodjobinwhateverIdo.Inmysparetime,Iwillcontinuetotakeregularexercise,suchasswimming,runningandvariousballgames.Duringmyholidays,Iwilltravelaroundtheworld.Inaword,mylifewillbericherandmorecolorful.【即时应用】假设你校英语报正在进行名言佳句分享活动,请根据要求写一篇英语短文推荐“Changewhatyoucanchange;acceptwhatyoucan’tchange.”这句名言。1.谈谈你对这句名言的理解;2.举例说明理由。注意:词数100个左右。__________________________________________________________【参考范文】Famoussayingsusuallycontainmuchwisdomandteachussomephilosophyoflife.“Changewhatyoucanchange;acceptwhatyoucan’tchange.”isjustonesuchquote.Ontheonehand,weshouldbeoptimistic,thinkpositivelyandliveactively.Inotherwords,weshouldtryourbesttochangeeverythingaroundusforthebetter.OnethingI’msurewecanchangeisourattitudes.Withapositiveattitude,we’remorelikelytoachieveourgoalsandrealizeourdreams.Ontheotherhand,there’remanythingsinourlifewhichcan’tbechanged,suchasourappearanceandfamilybackground.Wehavetoacceptallofthesebecausethere’snopointincomplainingaboutthem.