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丰顺中学洪艳艳①Itisacommonphenomenonthattheproblemoftrafficjamaroundourschoolismoreandmoreseriousduetoparents’drivingkidstoandfromshool.②Actually,wecanchooseahealthyandenvironmentally-friendlywayoftravelling,thatis,bicycleriding.③Itisobviousthatbicycleridingcanbringusmanybenefits,suchasrelievingpressureonthedowntowntransportation,makinglessnoiseandairpollutionandsoforth.④Mostimportantly,itdoesgoodtoyourhealth,becauseifyougotoschoolbyridingabicycleinsteadofdrivingortakingacar,youcanhaveabetterchanceofgettingenoughexerciseyouneedeveryday.⑤Itishightimethatwereducetranportationpressurebyridingabikeandstartfromourselves.①Itisacommonphenomenonthattheproblemoftrafficjamaroundourschoolismoreandmoreseriousduetoparents’drivingkidstoandfromshool.②Actually,wecanchooseahealthyandenvironmentally-friendlywayoftravelling,thatis,bicycleriding.③Itisobviousthatbicycleridingcanbringusmanybenefits,suchasrelievingpressureonthedowntowntransportation,makinglessnoiseandairpollutionandsoforth.④Mostimportantly,itdoesgoodtoyourhealth,becauseifyougotoschoolbyridingabicycleinsteadofdrivingortakingacar,youcanhaveabetterchanceofgettingenoughexerciseyouneedeveryday.⑤Itishightimethatwereducedtranportationpressurebyridingabikeandstartfromourselves.①现象+原因②建议+③④原因⑤呼吁说明文之现象原因后果、影响或意义建议或解决办法呼吁Itisacommonphenomenonthat…dueto/causedby…Actually,wecan…Itisobviousthat…canbringusmanybenefits…Mostimportantly,itdoesgoodto…Itishightimethatsbdid…•Nowadays,…•Withthedevelopmentof…,…Possiblepatterns现象呈现分析原因•That’sbecause…•Why…isthat…•Thereasonfor/why…isthat…影响及后果•Asaresult/consequence,…•Bydoing..,…can(leadto/resultin)…提出建议•To/Inordertosolvetheproblemof…,weshouldattachimportanceto/placeimportanceon…•It’ssuggestedthatweshould…•Itisimportantforsbtodosth/thatsbshould…•Immediatemeasuresshouldbetakento…Possiblepatterns号召口号•Let’s…andstartfromourselves.•Onlyifwe…canwe…•Itishightimetodo…1.中学生打零工的现象越来越普遍。_______________________________moreandmoremiddleschoolstudentsdopart-timejobs.____________,moreandmoremiddleschoolstudentsdopart-timejobs.ItisacommonphenomenonthatNowadays如今，自然灾害更加普遍和频繁，迅速成为了发展越来越大的危胁。Nowadays,naturaldisastershavebeenmorewidespreadandmorefrequent,becomingveryrapidlyanincreasingthreattodevelopment.EX:2.中学生打零工因为他们想赚钱支付部分的学费___theywantpart-timejobs____theywanttoearnsomemoneytohelppaypartofthehighschooltuition.WhyisthatEX:人类应该为那些可怕的灾难负责,因为我们借着所谓发展的名义肆意妄为。Whywehumanbeingsareresponsibleforthosedreadfuldisastersisthatwedowhateverweliketotheearthinthenameofso-called‘development’.3.中学生打零工因为他们想在经济上独立，买自己想买的东西__________theyhopetobeeconomicallyindependentandbuywhattheyneed.____________theywantpart-timejobs________theyhopetobeeconomicallyindependentandbuywhattheyneed.That’sbecauseThereasonwhyisthat4.打零工能获得工作经验，拓宽视野。___doingpart-timejobs,highschoolstudents____gainsomeworkexperience,andbroadentheiroutlook/horizon.BycanEX:网络给我们提供了即时身在世界不同角落也能面对面交流的机会。Byusingcomputers,peoplecantalkfacetofaceeveniftheyareindifferentpartsoftheworld.5.同时打零工能给中学生提供了解外部世界的机会___doingpart-timejobs,______getvaluablechancestoknowabouttheoutsideworld______________.Bytheycanatthesametime6.但是如果花过多的时间，可能会影响学习。_________,spendingtoomuchtimeonitmay______________study.Howeverhaveabadeffecton自然灾害的确给人们带来痛苦，但他们要求我们重新考虑我们对大自然的态度。EX:Naturaldisastersdobringpeoplepain,however,theyurgeustoreconsiderourbehaviortowardourmothernature.7.建议学生应以学习为重，合理安排学习时间。_______________thestudentsshould____________________studyandarrangestudytimeproperly._______________thestudentsshould____________________studyandarrangestudytimeproperly.attachmostimportancetoItissuggestedthatItisimportantthatplacemostimportanceon①Itisacommonphenomenonthatmoreandmoremiddleschoolstudentsdopart-timejobs.②Whytheywantpart-timejobsisthattheywanttoearnsomemoneytohelppaypartofthehighschooltuition.③Thereasonwhytheywantpart-timejobsisthattheyhopetobeeconomicallyindependentandbuywhattheyneed.④Bydoingpart-timejobs,highschoolstudentscangainsomeworkexperience,andbroadentheiroutlook/horizon.⑤Bydoingpart-timejobs,theycangetvaluablechancestoknowabouttheoutsideworldatthesametime.⑥However,spendingtoomuchtimeonitmayhaveabadeffectonstudy.⑦Itissuggestedthatthestudentsshouldattachmostimportancetostudyandarrangestudytime.andnotonly∧,butalsoItisacommonphenomenonthatmoreandmoremiddleschoolstudentsdopart-timejobs.Whytheywantpart-timejobsisthattheywanttoearnsomemoneytohelppaypartofthehighschooltuitionandthattheyhopetobeeconomicallyindependentandbuywhattheyneed.Bydoingpart-timejobs,highschoolstudentscannotonlygainsomeworkexperience,andbroadentheiroutlook/horizonbutalsogetvaluablechancestoknowabouttheoutsideworldatthesametime.However,spendingtoomuchtimeonitmayhaveabadeffectonstudy.Itissuggestedthatthestudentsshouldattachmostimportancetostudyandarrangestudytime.1.同学间容易互相生气，产生矛盾。Nowadays,itiseasyforstudentstogetangrywitheachotherandgetintotrouble.2.生气往往因为误解而产生。(causedby/Why…isthat…)Whypeoplegetangryisthattheymisunderstandeachother.Itisoftencausedbymisunderstanding.3.如果我们能够相互理解，很多时候生气是可以避免的。(…maybeavoidedif…)Inmanycases,angermaybeavoidedifwecanunderstandeachother.4.发脾气不但不利于健康