新FCE写作模板之议论文(Essay)

What’sintheFCEwritingexamPart1?剑桥FCE考试写作第⼀一部分概述•From2015,thefirstpartofthewritingexamisrevised,inwhichyouneedtowriteanessay.2015年年起，FCE写作考试第⼀一部分进⾏行行了了改⾰革，你需要在这个部分写⼀一篇议论⽂文。•Part1isacompulsorytask.Youwrite140-190words.第⼀一部分为必写任务，字数为140-190。•Part1isworthhalfthemarksofthewritingexam.第⼀一部分分数为写作考试部分的⼀一半。Howistheexamassessed?写作考试如何评分Thecriteriausedtoassessthecandidates’answersinthewritingexaminclude:写作部分评估考⽣生⽂文章的标准如下：•language语⾔言语⾔言⽅方⾯面主要指的是词汇和语法。尽量量使⽤用复杂⼀一些的词汇和语法，但是同时要⽤用得准确。你的⽂文章应该包括⼀一系列列的语法和表达，⽽而不不应该过于单⼀一。•structure结构⽂文章结构指的是你是如何将句句⼦子和段落组织在⼀一起的，句句⼦子和句句⼦子之间，段与段之间是否有逻辑性，是否有合理理的结构，标点是否准确，等等。还包括表示转折、因果、并列列等连接词的使⽤用。•content内容内容⽅方⾯面⼤大家要关注⾃自⼰己的⽂文章在多⼤大程度上把题⽬目所要求的内容写出来了了，也就是说是否能把题⽬目让你写的东⻄西写出来。•communication交流在这个⽅方⾯面，⼤大家要注意你的语⾔言是否合适，是否得体。⽐比⽅方说，⽂文体是否正确，写议论⽂文时所讲的道理理是否讲得通，给朋友写信的时候是否显得亲密，给不不太认识的⼈人，或者位置⽐比⾃自⼰己⾼高的⼈人写信的时候是否⾜足够正式。4essentialsforgoodanswers⾼高分⽂文章的4个标准•Answerthequestions答全问题•Plan列列⼤大纲•Useparagraphs分段•Reviseyourwork修改⼀一定要确保⾃自⼰己回答了了题⽬目提出的所有问题，不不能少答，也不不能多答。必须要为你的写作列列⼤大纲，规划⾃自⼰己的写作内容。应该花⾄至少10分钟时间为写作考试的每⼀一篇⽂文章写⼤大纲。不不规划写作内容是FCE考试写作部分不不及格的最⼤大原因，为什什么不不能忽视规划写作内容呢？因为写作⼤大纲让你在写作时有⼀一个可以依照的结构，实际写作过程中会节约你的写作时间，如果你要⼀一边考虑如何变化使⽤用词汇、如何使⽤用正确语法，还要⼀一边思考要包括在⽂文章⾥里里的想法，那⼏几乎⼀一定是顾此失彼的。必须要将⽂文章写成4-5段。第⼀一段应该引⼊入段，中间⼏几段为⽂文章主体，最后⼀一段必须包含结论。为每篇⽂文章留留出5分钟时间检查。改正涉及到时态、语序、拼写等最基本的错误。Introduction&Tips介绍及建议•PLANyouressay规划⽂文章•REVISEyouressaytocorrectmistakes检查⽂文章并改正错误•Write4or5paragraphs,withanintroductionandaconclusion四段或五段，要有引⼊入和结论•Thefirstparagraphshouldbeageneralintroductiontothesubject第⼀一段应为概括性的引⼊入•Developyourargumentsinthemiddleparagraphs在中间⼏几段进⼀一步论证⾃自⼰己的论点•Givereasonstosupportyourarguments写出原因和理理由来证明⾃自⼰己的论点•Useavarietyofwordsandphrases使⽤用多样化的词汇和词组•Giveexampleswherepossible尽可能举⼀一些例例⼦子•Usefairlyformallanguage使⽤用较为正式的语⾔言•Don’tusecontractions(we’re,I’ve,etc.)不不要使⽤用缩写•Sumupyourargumentsinthefinalparagraph在最后⼀一段总结你的观点•Thefinalparagraphisthebestplacetoexpressyouropinionclearly.最好在最后⼀一段清楚地表明你的观点UsefulPhrases有⽤用的短语同时表达两个优点或两个缺点•notonly…but…also…•notonly…butalso…Drivingcannotonlygetpeopletoplaceswheretheywouldliketogoquickly,butitisalsogettinglessexpensivethesedays.Usingthepublictransportisnotonlytime-consuming,butalsotroublesome.表达两个相反的观点•ontheonehand…ontheotherhand…Ontheonehand,youngpeopletrytheirbesttobeindependent.Theydonotacceptafamilymember’sopinionswithoutthinkingthemoverthemselves.Ontheotherhand,theystillneedhelpoccasionally,especiallyfinancially,fromtheirparentsaftertheymoveoutofhome.表示转折•neverthelessWarningsignshavebeenputupatthecrossroads.Nevertheless,accidentsstilloccur.•eventhoughEventhoughgoodteacherscandefinitelyhelpstudentslearnbetter,theydonotmatterifstudentsarenotmotivatedtolearn.•howeverWethoughtthefigureswerecorrect;however,wehavediscoveredsomeerrors.Thisisacheapandsimpleprocess.However,therearedangers.•inspiteofWewentoutinspiteoftherain.Kellylovedherhusbandinspiteofthefactthathedranktoomuch.•despiteDespitealloureffortstosavetheschool,theauthoritiesdecidedtocloseit.ShewenttoSpaindespitethefactthatherdoctortoldhertorest.•butEverybodyhastherightnottobefollowedconstantlybyothers,butitisextremelydifficultforfamouspeoplesuchasfootballers,filmstarsandpoliticians,toenjoytheirprivacyasordinarypeopledo.•althoughShewalkedhomebyherself,althoughsheknewthatitwasdangerous.表达结果•becauseofthisTherewasatropicalstorminthatregion.Becauseofthis,theflightwascancelled.•asaresult/consequenceSomepeoplesufferfromstressatworkandbecomeillasaresult.•thereforeShealreadyhadalotofexperienceandthereforeseemedthebestcandidateforthejob.•thusMostoftheevidencewasdestroyedinthefire.Thusitwouldbealmostimpossibletoprovehimguilty.•forthisreasonSpellcheckprogramsdonotrecognizewhenyouhaveusedthewrongword.Forthisreason,youmuststillreadoveryourworkcarefully.•consequentlyTheglobaltemperatureisrisingeveryyear,andconsequentlyourclimateisalreadystartingtochange.举例例⼦子•suchas•like•forexample•forinstance段与段之间连接•Tobeginwith/First/Firstly•Secondly/Ontheotherhand/Anotherthingtoconsideris/Anotherproblemis•Thirdly/ApartfromthetwopointsIhavementionsabove,wealsoneedtotake…intoconsideration./Anotherpointtoconsideris…•tosumup/inconclusion点与点之间连接•moreover/inaddition/andbesides/also/furthermore引⼊入讨论内容•Somepeoplesay…•Manypeoplesay…•Peopleoftensay…•Itissaidthat…•Accordingto…•Somepeoplebelievethat…,whereasothersthink…•Mostpeoplewouldagreethat…However,somewould…•Moreandmorepeople…However,thereareotherswho…•Althoughanincreasingnumberofteenagers…,somestill…•Agrowingnumberofpeoplebelieve…However,alotmorepeopleholdtheideathat…EssayStructure⽂文章结构Introduction引⼊入•Restatethequestion换种说法表述问题•Whatpeoplegenerallythinkofthisquestion⼈人们⼀一般怎么看待这个问题•Askthequestion提出这个问题Point1要点⼀一•Writeatopicsentence写主题句句•Givereasons/explanations/examplesetc.给出理理由、解释、例例⼦子等Point2要点⼆二•Writeatopicsentence写主题句句•Givereasons/explanations/examplesetc.给出理理由、解释、例例⼦子等Yourownidea你⾃自⼰己的要点•Writeatopicsentence写主题句句•Givereasons/explanations/examplesetc.给出理理由、解释、例例⼦子等Conclusion结论•Sumupyourarguments总结你的论点•Youcanincludeyourownideaandyourconclusioninoneparagraph你可以把你⾃自⼰己的要点和结论写在⼀一段中
ExamTask1写作真题⼀一InyourEnglishclassyouhavebeentalkingaboutthefashionindustry.Now,yourEngli