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1英语话题作文话题1：家庭、朋友和周围的人Part1:SomeTips概述：人物介绍属于记叙文（narration）的写作范畴，写作时要围绕人物组织材料。所写短文中应包括人物(who)、时间(when)、地点(where)、主要事件(what)等内容。写作时，要做到主题鲜明，内容清楚，并注意结构的完整性。技巧点拨：1.仔细审题，确定主题。审题四确定：1)确定类型：人物介绍2)确定体裁:记叙文3)确定主体时态:一般现在时4)确定主体人称:第三人称2．合理安排短文的结构层次，组织好所提示内容表达的先后顺序。3．句子时态要在上下文中有相关性、连续性，要与表达内容一致。4．审题后要先列出简明扼要的提纲，其次写出草稿，经过修改之后，再正式成文。一、人物介绍的写作步骤：1.Age,sex,appearance,character,birthdayandbirthplace2.Familybackground3.Educationbackground4.Bigeventsinhisorherlife(inorderoftime)5.Evaluation二、人物介绍写作常用的词组及句子：1.Age,sex,appearance,character,birthdayandbirthplace1）Age:IwasninewhenmymotherwentbacktoWalestovisitherparents.MrGregoryGaleisoneofthefewpeopleinEnglandwhoare100yearsold.Heenteredpoliticsattheageof25.Atage16,withayearandahalfofschoolingand$3inhispocket,hemovedtoNewYorkCity.BenFranklindiedin1790at84.Likemanykidsof16,Iwantedmyparents’timeandattention,butitneveroccurredtomethattheymighthaveneedsandproblemsoftheirown.Shewasagedsixwhenshefirstwenttoschool.Ben,aged21,fondofswimminganddriving,hasjustgraduatedfromacollege.Jeff,30,teachesinbothQinghuaHighSchoolandQinghuaJuniorSchool.ConsiderChlore,a23-year-oldcollegestudent.WhenIwasinmyearlyteens,onceIstayedwithmyfamilyinthemountainsforsummerholiday.Hewasinhislate30swhenhemovedtoEngland.2）Birthdayandbirthplace:…was/werebornin…on…eg.ShewasborninPolandonNov.7,1867.Bornin1985,heisnowan24-year-oldstudent.3）Sex&Marriageeg.Heisamanoffortyandhavea9-year-olddaughter.Heis35,maleandunmarried.4）Appearance2eg:Sheisalovelygirl,witharoundface,bigeyes,whiteteethandlongblackhair.Heisthin,tallandwearingapairofthickglasses.5）Height:eg.Heis1.76meterstall.Heis176centimeterstall.Heisreallyatallman,about1.98metersinheight.6）Health:eg.Welllookedafter,thechildrenlookhealthy.Heisnotsostrong,but(he’s)ingoodhealth.2.Familybackground…was/werebornin/intoapoor/richfamilyhis/herfamilywassopoorthat…his/herfatherwasverystrictwithhim…thesonofapoorfamilywhenhewasasmallboy/youngasachild/asaboyof15duringhis/herchildhoodspendhischildhoodin…liveahappy/hardlifeeg.AbrahamLincoln,thesonofapoorfamily,wasborninKentuckyonFebruary12,1809.Bornintoapoorclerk’sfamily,CharlesDickenshadlittleschooling.3.Educationbackgroundbeadmittedto…collegegraduatefrom…departmentof…universitywhenatcollege,hemajoredin…receiveadoctor’sdegreegoabroadforfurtherstudieseg.Hestartedschoolin1984andleftschool12yearslater.HewenttostudyinBeijingUniversityin1984and4yearslaterhegraduated(fromthatuniversity).Welearnedmanycourses,suchasEnglish,mathsandsoon.Hegothisbachelor’s(master’s,doctor’s)degreeinmathematicsinApril1998...4.Bigeventsinone’slifebeinterestedin…/befondof…workhardat…serveas…devotehislifetime/himselfto…concentratehimselfto…doresearchabout/into…makeupone’smindtodosth.dosthwithgreatdeterminationandperseverancebestrictinsth.havea…wayofdoingsthtryone’sbesttodosth.encouragesbtodofightfor,giveupone’slifeforsb/sthwinaprize/thefirstprizein…competitionreceive/obtain/wintheNobelPrizefor…3begoodat…dowellin…becrazyabout…enjoy…makerapidprogressin…setanewworldrecordof…equaltheworldrecordwin(won)agold/silver/bronzemedalbeselectedto/becomeamemberof…study/trainhardgothroughhardshipovercomemanydifficultieshaveagift/talentforlanguage,etceg.Hisfavoritesportisswimmingandplayingtable-tennis.Inhissparetime,helikesreadingandenjoyingtraveling.He’sgoodatspokenEnglishandevenbetteratusingcomputers.5.Evaluationoneofthebest/mostimportant…setagoodexamplefor…amodelteacher/workerberespectedbyeveryonespeak/thinkhighlyof…behonoredas(anexcellentathlete)hishardworkbroughthimgreatsuccessheistheprideofChina.Hisheroicstoryspreadalloverthecitymakegreatcontributionsto…Consistency/Perseveranceisthekeytosuccess.befamous/knownasberegardedasbecomeaworldchampionat…ChampionshipsremembersbforeveranewchapterofhistoryhasbeenturnedLeiFenghasbeenpraisedforhiscommunistspirit.aninspiringleader6.描写人物外貌和性格特征good-lookingfunny-lookingstrong-lookingugly-lookingordinary-lookingwhite-hairedblue-eyedwarm-heartedkind-heartedabsent-mindedbad-temperednear-sightedfar-sightedastrongwilltallshortbeautifulprettylovelynaughtysmartwisecleverbrightdiligentintelligenthardworkinglazyhealthyhumorouscharmingattractivetalkativeconfidentindependentpatientbeinconditionbeoutofconditionfinewell三、语法、句法高分tips1.A.概况：尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺译：钟南山１９４１年出生在广州，他是中国最伟大的医生之一1)BorninGuangzhouin1941,ZhongNanshanisoneofthegreatestdoctorsinChina.2)ZhongNanshan,oneofthegreatestdoctorsinChina,wasborninGuangzhouin1941.B.外貌,性格：巧用with做定语译：我的历史老师是个漂亮女人，她长着两只大眼睛，留着长发4Myhistoryteacherisabeautifulwomanwithtwobigeyesandlonghair.C.教育经历：注意尽量用非谓语动词,使文章精炼1）MajoringinMaths,hegraduatedfromZhongshanUniversityand4yearslater,hewentabroadforfurtherstudies.2）GraduatingfromZhongshanUniversity,shewentonfurthereducationandreceivedadoctor'sdegree.D.生平:尽量用倒装,非限定定语从句等，润色文章1）Notonlyisheinterestedinscience,butalsohehasagiftformusic.2）Hesetanewworldrecordofswimming,whichwonagoldmedalforChinaTeam.E．评估：注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组1）Leifengsetusagoodexample,soallthepeoplespokehighlyofhimandallrespectedhim.2）HeisoneofthegreatestwritersinChinaandmanypeoplelikehisworks.四、样本写作姓名：刘翔出生年月：198