Whatmakesagoodwriting?structurecontentlanguageIstheessaydividedintoparts?Doeseachparthaveatopicsentence?Areallthedetailsstated?Iseverythingtothepoint?Arethereanymistakes?Doesthewriteruseanylinkingwords?Arethereanygoodsentencepatterns?Isthereanyadvancedvocabulary?是指因过失或疏忽等做错了事,给别人带来了麻烦或损失,发觉后给对方赔礼道歉并请求对方原谅的信件。通常包括以下三部分内容:1:开门见山,表明写信目的,表示歉意。2:说明出现差错的原因,提出弥补措施。3:再次致歉,请求原谅,希望得到理解(语言要诚挚,解释的理由要真实)。道歉信:Whichonewouldyoulikebetter?①②attachimportancetohandwritiingAgoodbeginningishalfdone.Iamwritingtoapologizefor…Iamwritingtosaysorryfor…IregrettoinformyouthatIamunableto…Thankyoufor…,butIamsorrytosaythat…brokecarelessnessorderguiltyhappierDearBill,I’msorrytosaythatIhavebrokentheclockonthewallinourroom.Yesterday,lookingup,Ioccasionallyfoundthefaceoftheclockwasdirtywhensweepingthefloor,soItookitdownandcleaneditwithapieceofsoftcloth.Unexpectedly,whenIputtheclockbackwhereitbelongs,itfelloffthewallanddroppedontotheground.What’sworse,itdidn’twork.Inordernottoinfluenceouruseoftheclockandtimemanagement,Iwillusemypocketmoneytobuyanewonetoreplaceit.Pleaseacceptmyapology.Ipromisethatitwon’thappenagain.常用语块1.因某事向某人道歉___________________________________________________2.向…说对不起___________________3.接受我的道歉___________________4.为某事原谅某人_______________5.并非故意做某事__________________6.弥补,偿还___________________7.赔偿,偿还____________________8.给你带来不便_____________________9.给你带来许多麻烦______________________10.更加小心__________________11.犯这样愚蠢的错误________________________apologizetosbforsth/makeanapologytosbforsthsaysorrytoacceptmyapologyforgivesbforsthhavenointentiontodosthmakeupforpayfor/compensateforcauseyourinconveniencemakesuchastupidmistakecauseyoumuchtroublebemorecareful套用句式1.我写这封信的因……向你道歉。2.请接受我真诚的道歉。3.对于我说的话/做的事,我确实感到很抱歉。但请相信,我并非故意要……Iamwritingtoapologizefor…/Iamwritingtosaysorryfor…Pleaseacceptmysincereapology.IamindeedverysorryforwhatIsaid/did,butpleasebelieveIhadnointentionto…4.我真心希望你能理解我的处境/设身处地地位我考虑,并接受我的道歉。5.对于造成的不便我再次表示歉意。Isincerelyhopeyoucanunderstandmysituation/thinkinmypositionandacceptmyapology.Onceagain,Iamsorryforanyinconveniencecaused.假定你是李华,寒假中作为交流生短期去英国培训,回国时因为匆忙,把房东Bob的音乐光盘夹在行李中带了回来。现在请你给Bob写一封道歉信,要点如下:1.对自己带走音乐光盘表示歉意。2.提出解决的办法。3.再次请求原谅。DearBob,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHuaIamwritingtomakeanapologytoyouforIforgottoreturnamusicCDwhichIborrowedfromyoulastweek.YesterdayIcamebackfromEnglandandfounditinmyluggage.Iamsosorrythatyoucannotlistentoitatpresent.TheCDwhichIborrowedfromyouismadeinEngland,soIbelieveyoucanfindanotheroneinyourlocalstore.HowaboutyourbuyinganotherCDbyyourselfandIwillpayforit?Ifyoucannotfindasimilarone,Iwouldsentitbacktoyouthroughapostoffice.Andifthereareanyothersolutionsyoulike,pleaseletmeknow.Iamterriblysorryagainformycarelessness.Pleaseforgivemeforanyinconveniencecaused.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.