短文改错内江公开课

短文改错————之高分秘籍Discussthesesentencesandcorrectthemistakeswiththerightsigns.1.Getmebeaquiethandsomeboy.还是让我做一个安静的美男子算了。2.ComparingwiththegraduatesofBlueFlyTechnicalSchool,thegraduatesofTsinghuaUniversityarenotsoskillfulwhenoperatingexcavators.和蓝翔毕业生相比，清华毕业生开挖掘机的技能简直弱爆了。3.Havingbeendonetheexercises,Ibecomecrazy.Mydearteacher,Ihavehadenoughofyou!做完这些练习，我也醉了。亲亲的老师，你够了。to∧Compared改词删词添词Problems1.词汇量太少，看不懂．２.每个单词都看得懂，但不能找出错误．３.找得出错误，但无法正确改正．４.时间不够．．．．．．．Howtosolvethoseproblems?Howcanwedowellinproofreading?3.?Someskills1.Agoodknowledgeof———2.More———EnglishpracticeWhatisproofreading？1.通读全文，把握大意2.细读全文，仔细斟酌3.再读全文,复核审查Themethodofcorrecting改明显错误对照考点，排除法三种题型是否齐，题量分布是否符合命题规律3steps答题原则严遵守增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。规范性原则四不改原则①标点符号不改。②大小写不改。③词序错误不改。④单词拼写不改。五改动原则1.以句为单位进行改错为原则.2.以改变实词形式为原则.3.以单词形式变化最小为原则.4.以添加或删除虚词为原则.5.以保持原意不变为原则．常考错误类型错误类型句法行文逻辑名词动词形容词副词代词冠词介词连词固定搭配名从定从状从主谓一致时态一致人称一致逻辑一致考查内容时间动词介词名词连词代词形容词、副词冠词非谓语逻辑201232111001120132010121212014121111112近3年四川省高考英语短文改错考点分布conclusion:___________?1.Iholdmylunch-boxinmyhandwhenIwasgoingtoschool.Thesmellfromitwasverygood.(2011.江苏)3.Katia,likemanyotherRussiangirls,areniceandlively.（2011•重庆卷）2.Itwasawonderfulsurpriseasnothinglikethathadeverbeenhappenedtous.(2012·浙江)动词形heldis1.动词的时态和语态错误.2.主、谓不一致的错误。1.名词单、复数形式误用2.注意可数名词与不可数名词1.…sothatI’llgetgoodmarksinallmysubject.2.Hecollectedsomeinformationsaboutcomputers.subjectsinformationprogress,furniture,equipment,fun,news,information,advice名词数1.分清形容词和副词用法2.正确使用比较级和最高级1.Heaskedangryifwehadfinishedthework.(2005)2.Hisfatherlooksmuchmorehappiertoday.angrily名词作定语表语动词,形容词,副词,作状语还要注意形和副1Playfootballmakesusgrowuptallandstrong.2Istillremembergoingthereearlyandfeltanxiousaboutthenewworld.(05辽宁卷)Playingfeeling1）不定式；2）动名词作主语、宾语；3）并列连词and等连接的不定式或动名词前后要一致(注意距离较远时)；4）现在分词和过去分词的区别等。非谓语，细辨别inhurryinSundayafternoonsuchmanypeopleaon∨so习惯用法要记住1.Marydidhisbesttomakemefeelathome.2.Hefounddifficulttolearnmathwell.her(一）人称代词要一致(性/数/格)(二）反身代词(三)不定代词误用(someone,something,anyone,anything等)(四)it作形主、形宾或指代时有无缺漏(make,find,think)it代词格，细领悟（一）单数可数名词前须加a/an(泛指)或the(特指)（二）注意用或不用冠词特殊情况1.Wemaybeonefamilyandliveunderasameroof.2.Whatafunitistogoswimminginsummer.the冠词1.Everybodysleepsintents,thatisveryinteresting.2.Althoughitisrainingheavily,butIdecidedtogoout.3.Butbeforelongtheybegantoseewhichwashappening.which(一)注意定语从句中关系代词和关系副词正确用法名词性从句（连接代词/副词/从属连词的混用）(二)注意连词and/but,and/or,but/however之间错用(三)注意从属连词如because与so,though/although与but,if与and/or等不能同时使用.what连词与句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，属于逻辑性错误.Theangeltouchedhiseyes,buthecouldseeeverythingclearly.and逻辑错误需关注ALimerickLonglongago,therelivedthemanwhowassolazythatnojobwasfitofhim.Inordertomakealivingheonedaywenttoaneighborofhimforhelp.Theneighboradvisedhimworkasacemeterycaretakerasitwasthemosteasiestjobonecouldfindintheworld.Thelazymanisdelightedandsoonbecameacemeterycaretaker.Buttoeverybody’ssurprisingheresignedhisjobthreedaysbeforehegotit.“It’sunfair.”Hesaidtotheneighborangry.“InthecemeteryallothersarelyingstillwhileIamtheonlyonewhohavetostand.练一练Longlongago,therelivedthemanwhowassolazythatnojobwasfitofhim.Inordertomakealivingheonedaywenttoaneighborofhimforhelp.Theneighboradvisedhimworkasacemeterycaretakerasitwasthemosteasiestjobonecould_________for_________histo介词冠词代词格a非谓语∧形容词最高级findintheworld.Thelazymanisdelightedandsoonbecameacemeterycaretaker.Buttoeverybody’ssurprisingheresignedhisjobthreedaysbeforehegotit.“It’sunfair.”Hesaidtotheneighbor____________wassurprise动词时态固定搭配after逻辑错误angry.“InthecemeteryalltheothersarelyingstillwhileIamtheonlyonewhohavetostand.”_______has形容词angrily动词的主谓一致（2011浙江）Iwasplayingatmycousinhouse.Sincehisfamilywasrichthanmine,hehadmoretoysthanIdid.TherewasoneonparticularI’dalwayswanted.Iputintomypocketwhenhewasn’tlooking.Iguessed,evenatthatage,Iwouldneverbeabletoenjoytoplayingwiththetoyorfacedmycousinagain;IwouldalwaysknowI’ddonesomethingwrong.Lateon,myauntdrovemehome.Whenshedroppedmeoff,Ipulledoutthetoyslowandgaveitback.Sheknowswhathadhappened,butshethankedmeandevermentioneditagain.Iwasplayingatmycousinhouse.Sincehisfamilywasrichthanmine,hehadmoretoysthanIdid.TherewasoneonparticularI'dalwayswanted.Iputintomypocketwhenhewasn'tlooking.Iguessed,evenatthatage,Iwouldneverbeabletoenjoytoplayingwiththetoyorfacedmycousinagain;IwouldalwaysknowI'ddonesomethingwrong.Lateon,myauntdrovemehome.Whenshedroppedmeoff,Ipulledoutthetoyslowandgaveitback.Sheknowswhathadhappened,butshethankedmeandevermentioneditagain.cousincousin’srichricheronin∧it/that\facedfaceLateLaterslowslowlyknowskneweverneverPracticemakesperfect.Homework:FinishExercisepaperDuringtheweekendItravelledbytheairforthefirsttimeinmylife.Iusuallytravelbytrainbecauseofitismuchcheaperandsafe.Buttoflyintheskywassomethingnewtome.IntheverybeginningIfeelalittlenervous.Ilookedaroundandsawmanysmilingfacesanddeterminedeyes,whomademecalmdownverysoon.Afterawhile,IbecameexcitedwhenIfoundmehighintheskyamongtheclouds.Ialsofoundthatmountains,fields,riversandsoonwasinterestinglysmall.Ienjoyedthefrighte