上海中考英语作文

上海中考英语作文学习资料一.评分标准上海中考英语作文总分为20分，其中内容分8分、语言分8分、组织结构分4分。以下为上海中考英语作文官方评分标准：1.内容分8分。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚完整。2.语言分8分。学生需用语规范，表达准确，无或少见语法错误，词汇拼写正确，句型使用恰当。首先是字数，少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。3.组织结构分4分，也就是我们常说的文采分。根据学生使用复杂句型/单词和谚语/俗语的情况来加分。二.注意点：每少5个词扣0.5分，拼写错误每处扣0.5分，标点，大小写错误每2处扣0.5分3内容和语言表达总分达15分及以上，得2~3分内容和语言总分13~14分，如确有好句型或表达用语，可酌情给1~2分通篇句型，句式单一，词汇贫乏者，即使无语法错误，也不给分开头句+给的几个参考点+结尾句+亮点。先划档次：A档18~15分B档14.5~12分C档11.5~8分D档3.5~0分然后再仔细批阅看有否语法错误,最后给出总分。三.学生常出现的问题：1.内容空洞，没有清晰的思路，表达能力不强，总是用一些不合适的句子内容来表达，所以可能让老师觉得理由或是内容太假，当然也就得不了高分。2.议论过多，描写不足。大多数情况下，我们把议论当成的作文的重点，所以常常会跑题。应当多描述提示的内容或加以想像，不能只翻译了事。3.总是使用同一个主语写句子，重复太多。尽量使用不同的主语来表达，比如：ImustlearnEnglishwell.就可以换成：ItisimportantformetolearnEnglishwell.4.结构散漫，想哪儿写哪儿，乱七八糟。应该使用总分或总分总的结构。5.都是简单句，缺少复合句。多用状语从句，宾语从句，定语从句及一些重要的句型，也人教版新目标初二下英语同步辅导（一）初中二年级下un...初中二年级下Un...可以用用被动语态。6.连词的使用较少，句子之间的连接很生硬。可以加入一些：比如:tomysurprise(让我惊讶的是),what’smore（而且，还有）等，让上文与下文衔接更紧密。意思也能更流畅地表达。四．中考写作高频使用词组、句法1.作文开头的有用句Asweallknow,Asitisknowntoall,It’sknowntoallthat…It’scommonknowledgethat…It’scommonlyacceptedthat…Thereisnodenyingthat…Howtimeflies!Inablinkofaneye,Timeflieslikeaspeedingarrow,Timegoesliketheflowingwater.2、中间分层部分的有用结构:分正反两面论述:Ononehand,Ontheotherhand分两点：Foronething,Foranother,分三点：Firstly,Secondly,Lastbutnotleast3、结尾部分Allinall,Inaword,Inconclusion,Inbrief,Inshort,Toputeverythinginashell,概括的说，简单的说Lastbutnotleast组织语言发表观点的Inmyopinion,Frommypointofview,Inmyeyes,AsfarasIamconcerned,Believeitornot,表示递进的InadditionFurthermoreMoreimportantlyWhat’smoreMoreover其他与“我”有关的写作材料1、重点句型It`s+a.forsb.todosth.So+a./ad.Thatsucha+a.+n.thattoo…todoNot….untilThat’swhy+句子那是。。。的原因It’ssaidthat+句子There’snodoubtthat+句子毫无疑问···Itgoeswithoutsayingthat+句子毫无疑问···There’snoneedtodo没必要做···There’snopointindoing做某事毫无意义2、提建议Hadbetterdo/notdoHow/whataboutdoingWhynotdo/whydon`t+句子IthinkyoushoulddoIsuggestthatyoushoulddoIfIwereyou,Iwoulddo我要是你的话，我会做```It’sbesttodo3、表示喜欢，感兴趣Like/love/enjoydoingBefondof/bekeenonsth.PrefertodoAratherthandoBBeinterestedindoing=show/takegreatinterestin4、努力做```Trytodo/strivetodoMakeeffortstodo=makeeveryefforttodoTryone’sbest/doone’sbesttodoDowhat/everythingsbcantodo5、打算做···/计划做···Intendtodo/plantodoBegoingtodoDecidetodoDeterminetodo=bedeterminetodoMakeupone’smindtodo6、表示想/希望Wanttodo=wouldliketodoHopetodoExpecttodoWishtodoConsiderdoing7、其他有用的短语Fromnowon/soonerorlater/inthenearfutureHavepositiveattitudetowards/enrichmyknowledge/learn…byheart/Meetwithvariouskindsofdifficulties/facedifficultiesbravely/overcomethedifficultiesPlayanimportantrole/partin….8、其他有用的句式Forthereasonabove,/Afterall/Asforme,/Franklyspeaking/Generallyspeaking/Believeitornot,/AsaGradeNinestudent,/Thereasonsareasfollows,People’sviewon…varyfrompersontoperson4、增添亮点使用复合句和谚语谚语举例Ifirmlybelievethat“Aforeignlanguageisaweaponinthestruggleoflife”.Asafamoussayinggoes,“Amanbecomeslearnedbyaskingquestions.”It’scommonknowledgethattheroadtosuccessisnotalwaysfullofroses.Anoldsayinggoes,“Nothingisimpossibletoawillingheart.”五．2002-2013上海中考英语作文题目集锦2002Myfavoritething(s)我的心爱之物2003TobealovelyShanghainese做一个可爱的上海人2004LeaveSchool毕业时分2005Growingpainsandgains成长的烦恼2006Ihaveadream我有一个梦2007AStoryaboutMyParent(s)一个关于我父/母的故事2008LoveAroundMe爱在我身边2009Iwanttodosomethingformyschool我想为我的学校做点什么2010I'mproudofmyself我为我自己感到自豪2011MyFavouriteThing（s）我的心爱之物2012IfyouareJoe.yourfriendBettyisupsetbecauseshecarestoomuchabouttheresult.写给一个考试焦虑考生的一封信，并给予建议。2013Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Howtoprotectmyself”．(以“如何保护自己”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文)六．近5年上海中考英语真题范文分享2009命题作文Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”.(以“我想为学校做件事”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)(注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)Usethefollowingpointsasareference.(以下内容仅供参考)lWhatdoyouwanttodoforyourschool?2Whydoyouwanttodoit?3Howareyougoingtodoit?例文1：Iwanttomakeschoolclean.Youmaythinkitisverysimple.ButIdon'tthinkso.Ourteachersaid,Schoolisyourhome,youshouldkeepitclean.ButIhaveneverdoneanythingtomakeschoolclean.Forexample,Ihavenevertoldmyclassmatetopickuprubbishafterhethrewitontheground.Ialsothrewtherubbishontheground.SoIwanttomakeschoolcleansothateveryonecanforgiveme.Duringthissummerholiday,Iwillgotoschooltomakeschoolclean.Ofcourse,Iwilldoitwithmyclassmates.Wewillmakeschoolcleaneveryweekendsnexttermaswell.Now,doyouthinkitissimple?2OnepossibleversionIwanttodosomethingformyschoolI'mleavingmyschool.Iwanttoplantatreeinmyschoolgarden.Ihavefoundtherearetoomanybuildingsandfewtreesinourschoolyard,soIwanttomakemyschoolmuchgreenerandmorebeautiful.IfIplantatreethere,maybemoreandmorestudentswilldoasme.Intheirsparetime,thestudentscanreadunderthetrees.2010命题作文上海中考英语作文题:I'mproudofmyself1、Whatkindofpersonareyou?2、Whatmakesyouproudofyourself(Giveanexample/examples)3、Whyareyouproudofyourself?要求：至少60字范文：1Iamaboyoflessconfidence.Ialwayshaterunning.Butasweallknow,thestudentsofGradeninehavetotakepartinthesportsexam.Atthatmoment,Ijustwantedtogiveup.Butmyparentsencouragedme:impossibleisnothing,youcouldchallengeyourself!sowiththeencouragementofthem,Itriedmybesttorunandinsistedonrunning.WhenIgottothefinishingline,Ifeltproudofmyself,thoughIdidn'tgetthegoodmark,Iknew,Iwon.Icreateda