非谓语动词在写作中的应用2

Non-finiteVerbsinwriting非谓语动词在写作中的应用A.structureB.connectivesC.wordchoiceAwonderfulessayD.sentencevarietyHowtowritewellWhatsentencepatternsdoyouknow?emphaticstructureV-ing,p.pinversionclauses:nounclauses,attributiveclause…itsentencesSentenceVariety阅卷老师喜欢的句子•、•同位语结构、with复合结构，使文章简洁、通顺；尽量使用动词短语和词组、定语从句等复合句，修辞润色文章。使用分词短语(非谓语动词）•2013年高考考试说明(写作)•考生应能•(1)清楚、连贯地传递信息，表达意思•(2)有效应用所学语言知识。•1.Makingourcitygreeneriseveryone’sduty.•2.Thegovernmentisdeterminedtocontinuethegreenprogram.•3.Ifindmyhometownchangedsomuch.•4.Havingfreshair,treescanreduceairpollution.•5.Everyefforttomaketheprogrammakesadifference.5.定语2.宾语4.状语3.宾补1.主语找出非谓语动词，并判断成分非谓语动词复习回顾Funtime!PickapictureandfinishthetaskplaymusicmakehappyThattheyplaymusicmakesthemhappy.Playingmusicmakeasentenceusingnonfiniteverbs___________bythereporterfromCCTV,themansaidhewasveryhappy.(interview)InterviewedFinishthesentenceusingnonfiniteverbse.g.Havingfinishedmyhomework,Iwentontohelpmyparents.listento/burstoutlaughingHavinglistenedtothesongcalled“Gangnamstyle”,weburstoutlaughing.Followtheexampleandmakeasentence.用非谓语结构改写和美化句子•1.因为在这国家又没有朋友，她觉得要想找到工作是不可能的。用连词becauseBecauseshehasnofriendinthecountry,shefounditimpossibletofindajob.用非谓语结构Havingnofriendinthecountry,shefounditimpossibletofindajob.2.这本用简易英语写成的书很容易读懂用定语从句Thebook,iseasytounderstand.用非谓语结构Thebook,iseasytounderstand用非谓语结构改写和美化句子whichwaswritteninsimpleEnglish,writteninsimpleEnglish,3.Moyanstoodthereandwassurroundedbymanyreporters.Moyanstoodtheresurroundedbymanyreporters.用非谓语结构改写和美化句子←高考临近，保持良好的心态有助于减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难的勇气。Step1：拆分成几个简单句(中文)①高考临近。(NationalCollegeEntranceExamination)②保持良好的心态很重要。(havearightattitude)③它有助于减轻焦虑（relax）和勇敢地克服困难。Step2：分别翻译这几个简单句①NationalCollegeEntranceExaminationiscoming.②Itisimportanttohavearightattitude.③Ithelpsustorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.HavingatryStep3：合并句子WithNationalCollegeEntranceExaminationcoming,itisimportanttohavearightattitudetorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.①NationalCollegeEntranceExaminationiscoming.②Itisimportanttohavearightattitude.③Ithelpsustorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.Sentence1:HavingatryStep3：合并句子WithCollegeEntranceExaminationcoming,itisimportanttohavearightattitudewhichhelpsustorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.①CollegeEntranceExaminationiscoming.②Itisimportanttohavearightattitude.③Ithelpsustorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.Sentence2:Tip:Trytousedifferentwaystoexpress.Havingatry建议1.足够的睡眠是必要的，它能有效的改善我们的课堂学习；Havingatry（2011高考模拟）现状高考临近，作为高三的学生,时间紧，任务重，压力大.保持健康的身体是进一步学习及工作的基础。2.保持良好的心态有助于减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难的勇气。aneffectivewaytoimproveourlearningintheclass.thebaseforourfurtherstudyandwork.Passage：Havingenoughsleepisnecessary,becauseitwillbeaneffectivewaytoimproveourlearningintheclass.Moreover,tokeephealthyisthebaseforourfurtherstudyandwork.Tip:Neverignoretheconjunction.Havingatry常用的连接词1.表示递进what’smore;besides;also;moreover;inaddition;furthermore;inparticular;2.表示转折but;however;yet;instead;ontheotherhand;onthecontrary.3.段落起始tobeginwith;inmyopinion;generallyspeaking;firstofall;4.文章结尾inaword;allinall;inbrief;inconclusion;therefore5因果关系forthisreason;asaresult;inthisway;dueto;becauseof;consequentlyTip:Neverignoretheconjunction.OurSpringOutingNationalCollegeEntranceExaminationiscoming.Torelaxourselves,ourclasshadameetingtodiscusswheretogoforourspringouting.Havingabarbecueisourchoice.Thenextday,wesetoffearlyinthemorning.Weclimbedthemountain,talkingandlaughing.Whenwearrived,webegantobarbecue.Havinghadabigdinner,weenjoyedthewarmsunshineandthebeautifulview.Weweretiredbuthappy.二.使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档三.巧用倒装增强句子表现力四.尝试多样化表达方式一.使用较高级词汇使文章增加吸引力①强调句②With短语复合结构③定语从句④名词性从句(主宾表同从句)⑤各种状语从句⑥被动语态建议有足够的睡眠是必要的。原因1.它能有效的改善我们的课堂学习。2.保持健康的身体是进一步学习及工作的基础。HavingatryItisnecessarytohaveenoughsleep.Havingenoughsleepisnecessary.Itwillbeaneffectivewaytoimproveourlearningintheclass.Keepinghealthyisthebaseforourfurtherstudyandwork.ToKeephealthyisthebaseforourfurtherstudyandwork.