09届高考英语评析及指导课件高三英语课件

高三英语评析及指导课件一．优秀（26—29）要点全面紧扣主题，观点表达充分，能有效使用连接成分，具备较强的书面表达能力。语言小错，不超过四个，不能有一处大错。二．良好（22---25）要点全面紧扣主题，观点表达较充分，语言有少量错误（大错不超过三个），但基本不影响意思表达。三．一般（18—21）要点全面，紧扣主题。语言表达基本充分，语言错误影响部分意思的表达，但多数句子基本正确。小错：单词拼写,冠词,大小写，标点符号错误。大错:句法结构错误；内容要点或次要点遗漏;搭配错误;词语用错（介词，名词，动词,副词，形容词，主谓一致，非谓语动词);汉语式英语.只要出现了一个大错，就与优秀档即26-29分彻底无缘了。•Studentssleeplessthan7hours.Becausetheyareburdenedwithlotsofhomework.•Studentssleeplessthan7hours,becausetheyareburdenedwithlotsofhomework.一、Sentenceswithoutsubjects二、Onlyclausesarepresented80%ofthestudentsthinkshouldbegivenlesshomework.80%ofthestudentsthinktheyshouldbegivenlesshomework.1.Moststudentsburdenedwithtoomuchhomework.Moststudentsareburdenedwithtoomuchhomework.2.Payingtoomuchattentiontostudents’gradeswillofgreatharmtotheirhealth.Payingtoomuchattentiontostudents’gradeswillbeofgreatharmtotheirhealth.3.Somestudentsagainsttheidea.Somestudentsareagainsttheidea.三、SentenceswithoutverbsStudentsshouldbenotgiventoomuchhomework.Studentsshouldnotbegiventoomuchhomework.四、VerbswiththewrongobjectsWecan’teattoomuchsugarandfat.Wecan’teattoomuchfoodwithmuchsugarandfat.Wecan’teattoomuchfoodrichinsugarandfat.Wecan’teattoomuchfoodwhichisrichinsugarandfat.Wecan’teattoomuchfoodcontaininglotsofsugarandfat.Weshouldavoideatingtoomuchfoodwhichcontainsmuchsugarandfat.五、“Not”inthewrongpositionSomeofthemoneycollectedshouldbepaidtothegardenersfortheirwork,andtherestofthemoneycanbuysomenewtreesandflowers.…,andtherestofthemoneycanbeusedtobuysomenewtreesandflowers…,andwecanusetherestofthemoneytobuysomenewtreesandflowers.…,andwecanbuysomenewtreesandflowerswiththerestofthemoney”六、Rightuseatoneplacebutwronguseatanother1.Dormitoriesareplaceswhichstudentscanrestandrelaxthemselves.Dormitoriesareplaceswherestudentscanrestandrelaxthemselves.2.Dormitoriesareplaceswherestudentscanrestandrelaxthemselvesin.Dormitoriesareplaceswhichstudentscanrestandrelaxthemselvesin.七、MisuseofconnectionsintheAttributiveClauseRecentlywehavehadadiscussionaboutwhetherstudentsstudyinginuniversitiesshouldgetapart-timejob.Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.Somestudentsinmyclassbelievedthereweremanyadvantagesinworkingparttime.---Somestudentsinmyclassbelievetherearemanyadvantagesinworkingparttime.八、IncorrectuseofVerbTenses九、“语态别扭”句。(MisuseofVerbVoice)采取措施改善学生的健康。Measuresshouldbetakentoimprovestudents’health.1.Therearemanystudentsthinktheyshouldbegivenmoretimetosleep.Manystudentsthinktheyshouldbegivenmoretimetosleep.2.Chinahastakenplacemanychanges.GreatchangeshavetakenplaceinChina.十、Chinglish学生习作1HealthItiswidelyacceptedthatamongallthethingsinourlife,healthranksasthemostpreciousone.Nothingcancomparewiththeimportanceofgoodhealth.Everyoneiseagerforawayofhealthylife.Inordertokeepphysicallyhealthy,weshouldacquaintourselveswithsomemethods.First,ahealthydietisofvitalimportance.Doctorsalwayssuggestthatweshouldeatmorefruitandvegetables.Ontheotherhand,wearesupposedtoavoideatingfoodwithtoomuchsugarorfat.Second,thereisnodoubtthattakingexercisecanbenefitourhealthbothphysicallyandmentally.Third,weneedtomakeupourmindstogetridofsomebadhabitslikesmokinganddrinking.Asissaidabove,wecaneasilyconcludethatagoodhabitshouldbeformed.Onlywhenweareawareoftheimportanceofhealthcanweliveahealthylife.29/30分Tobehealthy•Healthisoneofthethingthatpeoplearealwaysconcentratingon.•Asthedevelopmentofoursociety,keephealthyisvitallyimportantinourlife.Thefollowingaresomesuggestions.Foronething,it’sbettertotakesomemorefruitandvegetablestokeepourdietbalancedandkeepawayfromthefoodwhichhasmuchfatandsuger.Foranother,you’dbettertakesomeexercisestokeephealthy.Meanwhile,youmustgetridofallthebadhabits.•Inmyopinion,havingaregularlifestyleisalsotheimportantthingweshoulddoandtrytomakeallthedayhappyaroundyou.Thenyou’llliveareallyhealthylife.21分thingsWithkeepingsugarexercise期中考试作文:Withthereformandopening-up,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourcountry.TherearesomanythingsthatIcantakepridein,butthefirsttocomeonmylististhesuccessofBeijingOlympicGames.Aftersevenyears’preparation,ChinabroughttheworldafeastforeyesandearsinAugust,2008.Beijingperfectlyperformeditspromisetoshowtheworldagreen,scienceandhumanOlympicGamesduringtheunforgettablesixteendays,withmillionsofvolunteers’kindhelp.Asaresult,thewholeworldwitnessedChina’sgreatdevelopment,andChina,inturn,raiseditsinternationalstatus.Tome,theprideandhappinessarebeyonddescription.However,there’snowaytoachievesuchagreatachievementwithoutChina’sdevelopment.Therefore,weshouldstudyhardandmakecontributionstoournationinthenearfuture.22分Followthetipswhenwriting:1.Thinkbeforeyouleap.Youshouldwritewhatyouarerequiredto.(审题）2.Useadvancedvocabularyandcomplexsentencestructuresyouarefamiliarwith.3.Trytoavoidthemistakesmentionedabove.某校师生就在校大学生是否应该找一份兼职工作展开讨论下表是师生的不同观点，请据此写一篇120-150个字的英语短文。学生观点老师观点优点缺点1.花更多时间在学习上；2.课后有多余时间，实施兼职工作亦可；3.处理好学习和兼职工作的关系；1.提供机会，实践所学知识；2.独立于家庭，自食其力；3.丰富学校生活；1.减少了睡眠、休息、学习和活动时间；2.难以赶上其他同学的学习；词汇：beindependentof独立Recentlywehavehadadiscussionaboutwhetherstudentsstudyinginuniversitiesshouldgetapart-timejob…•Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.Somestudentsinmyclassbelievetherearemanyadvan