提高写作方法高三英语课件

OPEN-ENDINGCOMPOSITION开放性写作出题方式：1根据结果，解释原因Whathappened?2根据事件，接续故事Whathappenednext?Whatdidyoudowith...?Whatshouldyoudo...?Howwillyouintroduceyourschooltothem?3提出问题，给出建议写作注意原则：1、认真审题，即：审语境、审人称、审时态2、要紧扣主题，符合要求，首尾呼应3、注意写作对象和语言风格，要有读者的意识4、要进行细致描写，有细节的支撑5、要有主次之分，详略得当6、要力求内容新颖，必须符合逻辑7、要做到思想健康，积极向上海淀二模：Whenyourmothercomeshomefromwork.,shefindsthelivingroominaterriblemess.Sheasksyouthereasons.Youtellherwhathappened.审题：人称--I,时态--过去时叙事---根据结果，解释原因。切记：1审题要准；定位要清。2紧扣主题；首位呼应。3内容充实；详略得当。4合情合理；逻辑清晰。5语言简洁；交际得体。说明文说明文出题形式：1。文字+表格2。图表3。图画说明文的篇章结构主题句——引出全文的话题支持句——围绕话题展开讨论，用事实，理由，观点等来进行解释，说明或论证。结束句——对话题进行概括，总结归纳。说明文的写作方法：列举法----用事例说明主题可用表示顺序的示意词来突出每个实例。如：first,second,third,first,secondly,finally,thefirstthing(point)is…,thesecondthing(point)is…,thethirdthing(point)is…,firstofall,also,finally,one,another,thelast…以事物的重要性来排列顺序，可使文章层次清楚，重点突出。如：foronething,also,theworstthingis…,firstofall,apartfromthat,themostimportantis…,foronething,whatismore,themost…,oneimportant,moreimportantly,themostimportant…,oneproblem..,anotherproblem…,themostseriousproblem…,比较对比法：比较通常是指对人或事物之间的相同点进行分析。对比通常是侧重分析两者之间的不同点，利与弊。写作方法通常有：1）相同点---不同点分析A,A,A,B,B,B,结构2）A,B,A,B,A,B,结构（如内容较多，可逐点分析。）TopicsentencewhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparksSupportingsentence160%ofthestudentsareagainsttheideaoftheentrancefees.(A)tohavearestandenjoythemselvesinthepark(A)tobecomenecessarytobuildgatesandwalls,(A)todoharmtotheappearanceofthecity.Supportingsentence240%thinkthatfeesshouldbecharged(B)needmoneytopaygardenersandotherworkers(B)tobuyplantsandyoungtrees.(B)feesshouldbechargedlow.请根据以下图表和提示写一篇关于我国手机拥有量变化的报导。并阐述手机给人们生活所带来的利与弊。1.方便2.随时，随地联系3.许多设置满足不同要求4.发短信，电话记录5.接到打错的电话为之付费6.电磁污染宣武一模：请你根据下面图表用英语写一篇短文，内容要包括以下两方面：1。概括说明中美大学生的主要收入来源。2。分析产生这种不同现象的可能原因。Income*American*Chinesesources*students*students----------------------------------------------Parents*50%*90%-----------------------------------------------Part-timejobs*35%*5%-------------------------------------------------scholarships*15%*5%TheincomeoftheAmericanandtheChinesestudentscomesthroughalmostthesamechannels:parents,part-timejobsandscholarships,butthepercentageofeachisquitedifferent.HalftheAmericanstudents’incomeisfromtheirparents,thirty-fivepercentfromfrompart-timejobs,andfifteenfromscholarships.Chinesestudents,ontheotherhand,getninetypercentoftheirincomefromtheirparents.Inmyopinion,therearetwomainreasonsforthis.OneisthatChineseparentscaresomuchfortheirchildrenthatitisalmostunthinkableforstudentstoliveontheirown.TheotheristhatChinesestudentshavefewerchancestofindpart-timejobs.小结：1。确定主题；理清结构。2。信息归类；支撑论点。（相同；不同）3。上下连贯；逻辑清晰。（正确使用连接词）4。首位呼应；紧扣扣题。Wishyousuccess写作常见错误：1动词与主语关系不清误：IsawanoldmangoingoutofCityParkandwasabouttocrossParkRoad.正：IsawanoldmangoingoutofCityParkandhewasabouttocrossParkRoad.误：Butthecarranoffimmediatelyinsteadofstoppingtoapologizetotheman.正：Butthedriverdroveoffimmediatelyinsteadofstoppingtoapologizetotheman.误：Theparkshouldchargetheentrancefee.正：Theentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.正：Peopleshouldpayfortheentrancefeeiftheygototheparks.2句子之间的逻辑关系不清误：Ithittheoldmandownbutthedriver,awoman,didn’tstophercar.Findingshehadcausedanaccident,thewomanspedhercartofleeaway.TheoldmanandIsawthecar’snumber.It’sAC864.Theoldmancouldn’tmove,Idecidedtohelphim.正：Ithittheoldmandownbutthedriver,whowasawoman,didn’tstophercar.Findingshehadcausedanaccident,thewomanspedhercartofleeaway.Fortunately,Isawthecar’snumber.It’sAC864.Noticingtheoldmancouldn’tmove,Idecidedtohelphim.3画蛇添足、过多的长句使句子复杂化（语言不简洁）修改前：Afamoussportsmanwasgivingaspeechwhichwasratherinteresting.修改后：Afamoussportsmanwasgivinganinterestingspeech.修改前Nowadays,somepeoplearestillcuttingdowntreeswithoutpermission.Theairpollutionisbecomingmoreandmoreseriouswhichiscausedbybusesandcars.What’smore,somanyriversarepollutedbydirtywaterwhichisfromfactory.Inaddition,sandstormstruckusnowandthen,fromwhichwesufferedalot.修改后Nowadays,somepeoplearestillcuttingdowntreeswithoutpermission.Asaresult,peoplehavetosuffersandstormsnowandthen.What’smore,asbusesandcarsgiveoffalotofpoisonousgases,theairisgettingdirtieranddirtier.Moreover,therearemanyriverspollutedbydirtywaterfromfactories.Thesituationisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.修改前：Assoonascamein,weheardsomevoicemadebyinstruments.Thereweresomestudentsplayingpianoviolinandsoon.修改后：Assoonaswecamein,weheardapieceofbeautifulmusicplayedbythestudentsbydifferentinstruments,suchas,piano,violinandsoon.4过于简单的句子使文章缺少逻辑性，可读性。修改前Yesterday,therewasapolicemaninthestreet.Hestoppedacar.Thecarwasatthecorner.ItlookedlikeaHonda.Therewasaboyonthesidewalk.Hewasridinghisbicycle.Thebicyclewasatwo-wheeler.Thecarnearlyknockeddowntheboy.修改后Yesterday,apolicemanstoppedacar—Hondaatthecornerofthestreet,becauseitnearlyknockeddownaboywhowasridingatwo-wheelbicycleonthesidewalk.修改前Suddenly,acarrunquicklyfromthethirdstreetandturnedtothewest.Thecardidn’tstopandhittheoldman.Thedriverdidn’tstopandhavealook.Thecarranawayquickly.Thecarwasyellowandthedriverwasawoman.修改后Suddenly,acarturnedwestfromthe3rdStreettotheParkRoad.Ithittheoldman,butitdidn’tstopandranawayquickly.Inoticed